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Edalene and Narav bury the past.

The capital city of the of Rynmere, here is seated the only King in Idalos.
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Narav
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Burial Rites (Edalene)

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Her kiss lingered long after she had vanished into the city. Narav returned the shovel to its place at the top of the hill, resting against the crypt where he had found it. There was still evening left, evening left enough for him to catch her...to run and to catch her arms, whirl her around and...

Three days.

Narav slid down against the cold wall of the crypt. Here in this land of rot and loss he was like any other gravestone, the grim specter of life turned wrong and all the hope that had spilled out of it. Maybe he would sit there forever, till the grass grew up around his legs and the insects found their way into his skin.

Maybe he would be dead then, and perhaps in that, he could rest.

Looking down at his bandaged hands, something shifted. Godryn was gone. Narav had his sword. In the deep gloom of the evening, he finally allowed the murder to drift away from him. No longer did it churn his guts and stir his mind to mutiny. No, doing this had exorcised him of those demons.

The gods that turned his strings? Mastes, Kata, Lisirra, and now Ralaith in the form of the only person offering salvation. Maybe there was something good for him that remained, some glimmering fragment of the joy he once wore so effortlessly. If so, he'd find it and pin it to his chest. Yes, he resolved, he would go after Edalene to Viden. If Edward and Danielle were not there...perhaps he could ask Edalene to accompany him elsewhere.

Perhaps.

Perhaps.
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Burial Rites (Edalene)

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Edalene

Skill Knowledge:

Strength: Digging A Grave
Psychology: Maintaining Composure
Persuasion: Begging Someone To Tell The Truth
Medicine: Advanced Human Decay

Other Knowledge:

Location: The Andaris Cemetery
Narav: Shipwrecked
Narav: Believes He Is Cursed
Narav: Coming to Viden

Loot:
N/A
Injuries:
N/A
Fame:
N/A
Devotion:
N/A
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic

Points awarded:
15

Narav

Skill Knowledge:

Strength: Digging a Grave
Endurance: Pacing oneself with hard work
Disguise: Concealing signs of Grave Robbery
Medicine: Advanced Human Decay
Weapon "Longsword": The Proper way to carry a Longsword

Other Knowledge:

Edalene: Servant of Ralaith
Duncan: Companion of Edalene and Aeodan
Ralaith: Marks his Chosen with Clocks
Yithanai: Passing a Sickness

Loot:
1 Standard quality longsword
Injuries:
N/A
Fame:
N/A
Devotion:
Lisirra: +5 for spreading a disease
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic

Points awarded:
15
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This is one of the most beautiful threads I've read in a while, and that's saying something, considering I've been reading a lot of threads lately. I'm truly amazed by your writing, both of you, it's ridiculously good!

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions or concerns. Have a wonderful day! :)
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