The King of Hearts

[Whisper]

Elyna

Awarded Points

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
These points can/cannot be spent in magic

Awarded Knowledge

Elsie: Intelligent
Elsie: Observant
Elsie: Our Little Terror
Linguistics: Child-Directed Speech
Teaching: Age-Appropriate Lessons

Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses	Injuries
None	None
Fame	Devotion
None	None

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Malcolm

Awarded Points

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
These points can/cannot be spent in magic

Awarded Knowledge

Elsie: Intelligent
Elsie: Observant
Elsie: Our Little Terror
Linguistics: Comment and Ask Questions
Linguistics: Repetition Helps a Child to Learn
Linguistics: Child-Directed Speech
Linguistics: Provide Opportunities for a Child

Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses	Injuries
None	None
Fame	Devotion
None	None

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Comments

“Elsie,” she warned, “we don’t hit people in this family, unless we really mean it,” she tucked the little girls hand beneath the blanket and stroked the inside of her palm, “And we’ll teach you how to hit them really good too, little darling. An open-handed slap isn’t going to get your very far.”
...dear Immortals.. this child will grow up to be formidable!

Wonderful thread, guys... lots of canoodling and I smiled the whole time I was reading it! Loved it!

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