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After being rescued, Freya travels with Andraska back to Rynmere.

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Food For Thought [Andraska]

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Freya


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Andraska: The man you saw as you sailed past Rharne
Andraska: Battled a Sessfiend
Andraska: An addict?
Caregiving: Gently remove clothes from the injured
Detection: Spotting when someone is speaking truth
Discipline: Stepping away from temptation is hard.
Fieldcraft: Sticks for the fire.
Fieldcraft: Making rudimentary equipment
Fieldcraft: Building a fire
Fishing: Constructing a basic cage
Fishing: Cage fishing on the shore
Fishing: Using natural habitats to your advantage
Medicine: Cleaning wounds
Medicine: Alcohol to clean wounds
Medicine: Alcohol can numb pain.
Medicine: Application of salve to clean wounds.
Medicine: Food and rest aid healing
Navigation: Terrain looks different from the air
Seduction: Hard when you look awful

Loot:
2 x berries!
Fame:
The good deeds and stealing kind of even out here.
Devotion:
Nope.
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana
Andraska


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Detection: Small details and tiny gestures can suggest truth or lies
Discipline: Not allowing yourself to give in to physical pain.
Discipline: Speaking of what you would rather keep silent
Discipline: Keeping your voice steady when emotions threaten to overwhelm.
Endurance: The sting of cleaning wounds
Fieldcraft: Sticks for the fire.
Fieldcraft: Identifying safe berries
Freya: Biqaj
Freya: Not innocent
Freya: Alistair has an interest in her
Freya: Stole your drugs
Hunting: Footprints lead to food
Medicine: Food and rest aid healing
Stealth: Keeping your footsteps quiet
Storytelling: The story of the Sessfiend that was your sister.

Loot:
1 x pair of stained trousers.
Fame:
+2 (good deeds, good intentions)
Devotion:
NA
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

Story Great thread! You two write really well together; I loved the juxtaposition of their similarities and differences ~ that was really well done. They recognised each other for who they are, in a funny way, and yet they have such different lives. Great story, really enjoyed it!

Structure No issues at all

Please do PM me if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions! Always happy to discuss.
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