• Closed • [Krome]Walking in the cold

[Yndira]

Here you are, dears

Xander

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Calming someone who is upset
Celeste: Breaking down your walls
Celeste: Impressive ideals
Étiquette: Don’t leave a lady unattended on the street
Socialization: Making small talk while you walk
Socialization: Admitting opinions of others
Politics: Discussing future plans with likely ally
Blades: Longsword: Swords tend to scare off unarmed assailants

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 General Good Deed x2 ( saving Celeste, handing her his handkerchief ) = +2
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: These points may not be used for magic

Celeste

Knowledge:
Xander: Chivalrous
Xander: You’re pleased to marry him
Politics: Analysing decisions carried out by state
Psychology: Some people do not wish to be saved

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +2 witness act of heroism
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: These points may not be used for magic

Comments: Nice thread! I like the dialogue between Celeste and Xander, especially as they start to navigate their relationship. This thread had great content for furthering it ( muggings in the streets; oh my! ) and I look forward to reading more as the two progress.

Just a note for Xander, there were one or two places where you mixed up a word ( like "borrowed" vs. "burrowed" in the first post ), as well as some places where it looks like you might have forgotten a word. I would say just skim over your posts when you're done before submitting them. It didn't interrupt the flow of the reading much for me, but just for note in future threads.

If there's anything you feel I missed, please feel free to PM me so we can fix it!