[Scalvoris Town] It's a Dog's Life....

Once an isolated and dying township, an influx of academics, adventurers and thrill seekers have made Scalvoris Town their home. From scholars' tea shops to a new satellite campus for Viden Academy, this is an exciting place to visit or make your home!

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[Scalvoris Town] It's a Dog's Life....

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Knowledge:
  • Location: Glass Temple (Training Hall)
  • Penelope Pepperswitch: Dog trainer
  • Animal Training: Using treats as rewards for desired behavior
  • Mr. & Mrs. Green: Owners of Petunia
  • Wim and Deb: Owners of Winston
  • Laurence & Wendy: Owners of Tiny
  • Cariad: Owner of Mitch
  • Animal Training: Establishing dominance early to prevent problematic behaviors
  • Animal Training: Using audio cues and devices to condition a puppy
  • Animal Training: Using repetition and treats to reinforce behavior
  • Animal Training: Critical for preventing bad behaviors before they become ingrained
  • Animal Training: Repetition plus time yields progressively improved results

Loot: One pet toy 10gn or less- Cosmo's choice (please specify)
Injuries: Rugburn, ack! (Just kidding - no injuries)
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Magic: These points cannot be used for Arcana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure:5/5

Padraig


Knowledge:
  • Location: Glass Temple (Training Hall)
  • Marl: Ghost of a Librarian
  • Penelope Pepperswitch: Dog trainer
  • Animal Training: Using treats as rewards for desired behavior
  • Mr. & Mrs. Green: Owners of Petunia
  • Wim and Deb: Owners of Winston
  • Laurence & Wendy: Owners of Tiny
  • Cariad: Owner of Mitch
  • Animal Training: Establishing dominance early to prevent problematic behaviors
  • Animal Training: Using audio cues and devices to condition a puppy
  • Animal Training: Using repetition and treats to reinforce behavior
  • Animal Training: Critical for preventing bad behaviors before they become ingrained
  • Animal Training: Repetition plus time yields progressively improved results
  • Discipline: Correcting problematic behavior in a stern tone

Loot: One pet toy 10gn or less- Cosmo's choice (please specify)
Injuries: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Magic: These points cannot be used for Arcana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5



I noticed a few open BBC code tags here and there as well as few 'miss Pepperswitch' (as opposed to 'Miss'). Both are errors that I run into a lot, so I totally understand. Just something to keep an eye out for in the future.

I really liked this thread and all the 'personalities' of the various dogs and their owners. It goes to show that you can never predict what type of canine companion someone will choose. I think you did great with Miss. Pepperswitch's personality and general demeanor - she was strict but not unfeeling. She knew exactly how much she was asking of the puppies (and the poor owners). If she isn't written up as an NPC for Scalvoris, I would recommend doing so! Great job and a very cute thread - didn't feel 'grindy' at all.
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