• Closed • [Andaris Library] The Search Begins

Eir takes a trip to the library for information.

The capital city of the of Rynmere, here is seated the only King in Idalos.
User avatar
Inali
Posts: 353
Joined: Fri Aug 26, 2016 8:18 pm
Race: Eídisi
Profession: Tutor & Cryptographer
Renown: 35
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Contribution

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

[Andaris Library] The Search Begins

Image
Congratulations!


Eir

Knowledge:
  • Location: Andaris Library
  • Navigation: Learning a route by getting lost on it
  • Edalene Burnett: Svelte
  • Edalene: Helpful and Inquisitive
  • Etiquette: Politely asking for help with a handshake
  • Etiquette: Profusely thanking a stranger for helping you
  • Rhetoric: Detailing a list of clues to aid in understanding
  • Navigation: Using maps to understand a locale
  • Location (Andaris): Midtown
  • Intimidation: Drawing a weapon in a public location
  • Location (Andaris): Inn

Loot: Local Map of Andaris Businesses (to be returned to the library)
Injuries: None
Fame: General good deed (+2), give a gift (+2) = 4
Devotion: None
Magic: These points cannot be used for arcana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure:5/5


Edalene


Knowledge:
  • Location: Andaris Library
  • Eir Crestwind: Wandering Mercenary
  • Eir: Came to Andaris from Scalvoris
  • Eir: Eager to protective everything
  • Teaching: Clarifying difficult words with broad descriptions
  • Research: Using origin and location infortmation to find relevant documents
  • Teaching: Asking questions to tailor a curriculum
  • Location (Andaris): Midtown

Loot: A small loaf of bread
Injuries: None
Fame: General good deed) +2, (Share a discovery freely) +1*3 = 5
Devotion: None
Magic: These points cannot be used for arcana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5



No spelling or grammar errors that I could see! I really liked how natural this thread feels. We've all been somewhere and needed help from a stranger. Even though Eir's mannerisms are definitely not the norm in Andaris, I can see him making a name for himself (if he ever stayed in one spot!) While Eda is more of a researcher than a teacher, I think you played her skill level well and provided the right amount of information for her pupil!
word count: 324
Locked Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Andaris”