• Closed • [Andaris Library] The Search Begins

[Inali]

Congratulations!

Eir

Knowledge:

• Location: Andaris Library
• Navigation: Learning a route by getting lost on it
• Edalene Burnett: Svelte
• Edalene: Helpful and Inquisitive
• Etiquette: Politely asking for help with a handshake
• Etiquette: Profusely thanking a stranger for helping you
• Rhetoric: Detailing a list of clues to aid in understanding
• Navigation: Using maps to understand a locale
• Location (Andaris): Midtown
• Intimidation: Drawing a weapon in a public location
• Location (Andaris): Inn

Loot: Local Map of Andaris Businesses (to be returned to the library)
Injuries: None
Fame: General good deed (+2), give a gift (+2) = 4
Devotion: None
Magic: These points cannot be used for arcana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure:5/5

Edalene

Knowledge:

• Location: Andaris Library
• Eir Crestwind: Wandering Mercenary
• Eir: Came to Andaris from Scalvoris
• Eir: Eager to protective everything
• Teaching: Clarifying difficult words with broad descriptions
• Research: Using origin and location infortmation to find relevant documents
• Teaching: Asking questions to tailor a curriculum
• Location (Andaris): Midtown

Loot: A small loaf of bread
Injuries: None
Fame: General good deed) +2, (Share a discovery freely) +1*3 = 5
Devotion: None
Magic: These points cannot be used for arcana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

No spelling or grammar errors that I could see! I really liked how natural this thread feels. We've all been somewhere and needed help from a stranger. Even though Eir's mannerisms are definitely not the norm in Andaris, I can see him making a name for himself (if he ever stayed in one spot!) While Eda is more of a researcher than a teacher, I think you played her skill level well and provided the right amount of information for her pupil!