• Memory • [Warrick] Trouble with Bullies (Vivian)

[Pegasus]

Pegasus Pending!

[Pegasus]

Lei'lira

Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:

Discipline: Not crying even when it really hurts
Endurance: Pain of falling from stairs
Endurance: Continued effort takes its toll
Intimidation: Shouting threats
Mathematics: Multiplication
Mathematics: Ten times table is the easiest
Psychology: Losing your temper (or finding it?)
Psychology: Feeling of being empowered
Stealth: Quiet is easier in noise
Tactics: Use your assets wisely
Tactics: The fine art of winning a snowball fight
Unarmed Combat: Dodging an attack
Unarmed Combat: Use your body weight to disarm
Unarmed Combat: The art of a face slap

Loot:

1 stone (you did have 2), +1 lovely memory

Fame:

+10 (give a gift, combat victory etc)

Devotion:

NA

Magic:

These points may NOT be used for arcana

Vivian

Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:

Detection: Hearing cries of fear, even when concentrating
Endurance: Continued effort takes its toll
Intimidation: Or else.... it's a classic for a reason.
Intimidation: Remind them of your advantages
Intimidation: Remind them of their disadvantages
Intimidation: Mock them
Politics: Nobility is a privilege, and power.
Psychology: Losing your temper
Tactics: The fine art of winning a snowball fight
Unarmed Combat: Using their body weight as a weapon
Unarmed Combat: Punctuating with punches
Unarmed Combat: Using your environment

Loot:

+1 treasured stone, +1 lovely memory

Fame:

+10 (combat, good deeds)

Devotion:

None

Magic:

These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

Story Oh what a lovely, feel good story. I loved it and I'm so glad those bullies got their comeuppance! Rawr. I really enjoyed the relationship between the two cousins, too. Lovely!
Structure Lovely writing from both.

Please do PM me if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions!