Work is a four letter word.

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Aeon
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Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: 183
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Work is a four letter word.

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Arlo


Knowledge:

Fieldcraft: Turkeys and turkey eggs for dinner
Fieldcraft: Bleeding out a turkey
Hunting: Possible game during Cylus
Hunting: Bird tracks in the snow
Ranged Combat: Bow: Nocking an arrow
Ranged Combat: Bow: Breathing while aiming
Vega: Is also named Lei'nox
Vega: Gave you her compass
Vega: Doesn't like Cylus
Vega: Wants a bath
Cylus: Isn't fun
Philosophy: It's the journey that matters, not the destination

Loot:
A compass (that doesn't work); 2 dead and bled out turkeys
Injuries:
N/A
Fame:
N/A
Devotion:
+5 for Cassion (Pray to Cassion, Discover a new location, Have an adventure)
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic

Story:
5/5
Collaboration:
5/5
Structure:
5/5


Vega


Knowledge:

Fieldcraft: Turkeys and turkey eggs for dinner
Fieldcraft: Bleeding out a turkey
Hunting: Possible game during Cylus
Hunting: Bird tracks in the snow
Ranged Combat: Bow: Breathing while aiming
Ranged Combat: Bow: Aiming at the right target
Arlo: Doesn't like Cylus
Arlo: Wants a bed and a bath
Arlo: Doesn't know much about his father
Arlo: Believes that it's the journey, not the destination that matters
Cylus: Isn't fun
Birds: Don't have toes
Birds: Lay eggs. Duh.
Philosophy: It's the journey that matters, not the destination

Loot:
Loss of your compass; 2 dead and bled out turkeys
Injuries:
N/A
Fame:
+2 (Give a gift)
Devotion:
N/A
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic

Story:
5/5
Collaboration:
5/5
Structure:
5/5


General Comment:
Beautiful little thread, really. I feel like you two wrote together before ST, right? You have that sort of collaboration that is often seen with writers that do this for years, and it's just so relaxing and easy to read your work.

Story: Amazingly written from both of you, nothing but sweet goodness here.
Collaboration: Again, you two fit perfectly with one another and it would be a crime to stop you from collabing
Structure: All good, no issues.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions or concerns. Have a wonderful day! :)
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