• Closed • Five Days Ago

But five days ago you were as skinny as a stick...

Seated on the shores of Lake Lovalus, Rharne serves as the home of the Lighting Knights, the Thunder Priestesses, and the Merchant's guild. This beautiful trade city is filled with a happy and contented people who rarely need an excuse to party.

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Five Days Ago

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Zvezdana

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Even the best parent needs a break
Caregiving: Hungry and sleepy babies tend to be cranky
Caregiving: Avoid alcohol previous to breastfeeding
Caregiving: Routine is important
Investigation: Questioning details and timelines
Linguistics: Silent communication is not always the most effective
Detection: Recognizing abrupt, unexplained changes in appearance
Psychology: Trust in others is sometimes difficult
Psychology: Jealousy

Other:
Aelig: Responsible for Faith's rapidly expanding middle
Andraska: Mistaken for baby's father
Faith: Forgiving, Kind and Dutiful
Faith: A free woman apart from her past
Faith: Seems to court trouble
Faith: You question who the father of her child is
Rharne: Worship of Ilaren favors vice and polygamy

Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Loot: N/A
Magic: These points may not be used for magic
Faith

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Sleep is important for the mother
Caregiving: Other's babies aren't as worrisome as your own
Caregiving: Avoid alcohol previous to breastfeeding
Caregiving: Knowing a child's schedule
Endurance: Pregnancy can take a physical and emotional toll
Medicine: Relaxation can be good medicine
Psychology: Pregnancy and food cravings
Detection: Reading the thought processes of others

Other:
Andraska: Has always been kind
Andraska: You question his recognition of subtleties
Andraska: Offers to help you
Zvezdana: Grateful for your help with delivery
Zvezdana: Needs time for herself

Fame: Babysitting for a new mother (+1)
Devotion: Prayer to Famula (+1)
Loot: N/A
Magic: N/A
Andraska

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Proper holding technique
Caregiving: Babies are curious creatures
Caregiving: The effects of alcohol on mother and baby, during and after pregnancy
Deception: Playing along with mistaken assumptions
Diplomacy: Maintaining decorum in the face of unexpected circumstances
Diplomacy: Recognizing inappropriate questions before asking them
Detection: Recognizing the many physical signs of pregnancy
Psychology: Flattery makes one forgetful

Other:
Aelig: Responsible for Faith's rapidly expanding middle
Dreamwalking: Possibility that dreams can impact the waking world
Faith: Unexpectedly in Rharne
Faith: No longer a slave
Faith: Assuming Tristan is the father of her child
Faith: Is very, very pregnant
Order of the Adunih: Provides free healing to those in need

Fame: Offering help and support to another (+1)
Devotion: N/A
Loot: N/A
Magic: These points may not be used for magic
Comments: Great thread and an enjoyable read. I particularly liked the awkwardness of it in places and how each character dealt with that awkwardness in their own way. Couple little typos, etc, nothing of note. You all know the drill. Any concerns, drop me a line. Thanks!
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