The Room Pt 2

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The Room Pt 2

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Name: Faith

Knowledge:
Padraig: Noticed your scars and brands were fading
Padraig: Gave you space when you needed it
Padraig: Is very distracting at times
Padraig: Knows how to kiss you
Padraig: Will examine your scars regularly for you
Padraig: Likes the changes to the house
Faith: Your scars are fading
Faith: You like to keep busy
Moseke: Began the healing process of the scars at the great meeting in Ne'haer
Quattro: Likes to sleep on the stove
Quattro: Chewed through one of your shoes
Quottro: needs a wooby
A wooby is a cat toy made with catnip
Deception: Keeping secrets from your partner
Sewing: Creating clothes to fit a certain person
Investigation: Using the powers of deduction to figure something out
Investigation: Remembering past events

Loot: (copied from thread) Armchair x 2 ~ (15 x2=30) ~ 30gn
Couch ~ 35gn ~ 65gn
10 yds of white cotton ~ 18gn ~83gn
With which she has made:
~ 1 x white cotton dress (2 yds)
~ 3 x cotton shirts (Padraig) (2 yds)
~ 2 x skirts (2 yds)
~ 2 x blouses (2 yds)
so 2yds left.

10 yds of linen ~ 15gn ~98gn
With which she's made:
~ 2 x trousers (Padraig) - 2 yds
~ 2 x skirts - 2 yds
So, 6yds remaining

Coffee Table ~4gn ~ 102gn total. Deducted from ledger. Items added. Sewing skill is Master.

Injuries: N/A
Fame: +2 (giving a gift)
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: N/A

Comment: No issues with story, collaboration, or structure. Lovely little story, I enjoyed reading the interaction between you and Padraig! I must admit I think I might have been a little bit lost if a handsome man had been kissing my neck too. It was great to see the two of you using your deductive skills to figure out how your scars have begun to fade. I love the romance between you and Padraig, he brings out this whole other side of Faith which is just so lovely to see and read. I look forward to the continued romance between the characters and seeing how their relationship will progress and evolve!

Name: Padraig

Knowledge:
Faith: Her scars are fading
Faith: Surprised you with new Furniture for the house
Faith: Is likes to always be busy like a Hummingbird or grasshopper
Faith: Wants you to get a wooby for Quattro
Faith: Made you clothes
Faith: Doesn't like when you say thankyou (she thinks it is unecessary)
Moseke: Began the healing process of the Faith's scars at the great meeting in Ne'haer
Quattro: Likes to sleep on the stove
Quattro: Chewed through one of Faith's shoes
Quattro: Needs a wooby
Investigation: Using the powers of deduction to figure something out
Investigation: Remembering past events
A wooby is a cat toy made with catnip
Detection: Noticing the changes in a persons body
Seduction: You know how to kiss a woman

Loot: N/A (If you count all the additions Faith made to the house then the same as listed above.)
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: N/A

Comment: No issues with story, collaboration, or structure. I really like how scientific Padraigs mind is, like when he makes the hummingbird analogy. The relationship Padraig and Faith share is something truly special, the interactions I read between your characters feel natural and are thoroughly enjoyable to read. I am glad I got to grade this having said before that I wanted a piece where Padraig was more involved! You do a great job of playing the caring and compassionate partner and I think the relationship between Padraig and Faith is definitely something to look out for in the coming seasons. I look forward to reading more of this beautiful love story.

Comment for the couple: Both of your characters work really well together, to use an analogy once used by Faith in a thread she wrote with me, they fit together like two Jigsaw pieces. I just love to read the stories that the two of you build together, and I am excited to see how your story will progress. I hope that the two of your PC's last the test of time! Great thread and enjoy the points!

If you have any issues or questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me and we will see what we can work out.
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