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Ranix held his blade out toward the apothecary and took a calm but forceful step toward Edward. His eyes flashing, his confidence did not diminish a tick. "I serve a cadre of powerful mages, apothecary, men and women more worthy than an ailing merchant and his whelp. We have...connections, and one such connection will be the influence and power I will wield as Tobias Tobelle. Of course, I wish to have no quarrel with you. I'm sure you're quite competent with that steel of yours...but I'm sure we can come to some mutually beneficial arrangement."


Doran's workspace was still set for the brewing. The ingredients were bottled and divided. Exact measures of each. Once, Doran had told Narav that in a different combination, these ingredients would make a powerful anesthetic. If mixed improperly, and in large amounts, the resulting concoction was more likely to kill Edward than help him. Of course, as the Tobelles paid for the medicine and ingredients, Doran did not go for want of the material to use. Normally they might be used for pain killers, even drugs...but each harmful substance had its inverse. There was science to all decadence.

He was closer to the vials than his dagger ad one look at the way Ranix was standing, the way that Doran was standing...both men near enough to cross blades at any time, he would be skewered the moment he dropped for the blade. What had begun as a fledgling admiration for the chemist had turned Narav's blood cold. They were negotiating, clearly negotiating, for the life of himself and his father. He'd seen enough of the way his father spoke with other merchants to know a negotiation when he saw one. Doran was testing Ranix for leverage, something tangible he could use to justify the betrayal. If there was enough value in it, Narav had no doubt that Doran would turn on him.

That could not be allowed to happen.

Narav moved suddenly, his body bursting with terrified speed and nerves. Instead of the dagger, he instead leaped at the table and took hold of the bottles in his arms. Ranix sneered, his face a mask of both surprise and disdain...clearly not about to extend himself to pierce Narav if he would need to worry about the opening he'd provide to Doran.

Those moments where neither Doran nor Ranix would lower their guard to each other was the time Narav needed to hurl the bottles at the ground between the two men, ingredients spilling out and over each other on the chamber floor. Immediately they reacted, hissing loudly as a white-green smoke coiled out of the mess and up towards the two men. Doran knew it immediately, the powerful anesthetic that just such a reckless concoction might make. Even to a Mortalborn such as himself, a dose of this magnitude might be enough to stop his heart.

Narav spun away from the mess and snatched at his dagger, hurling himself the distance between where he stood and the bed of his father. Edward was already beginning to stir as Narav scrambled onto the edge of the bed and menaced Ranix with the blade.

The mage was snarling, leaping away from the smoke and clawing with his free hand. He had no knowledge of what the chemicals were or even what their reaction was to each other. But the confusion in the room afforded him an opportunity he could not afford to miss. Coiling back on his foot he thrust the blade through the plume of smoke toward Edward's rising body. Instead the sword caught Narav in the side, neatly piercing through his fine clothes and exiting from the back, narrowly avoiding a home in Edward.

Narav screamed, his entire side cold and hot at the same time, dropping his blade and desperately holding both sides of where the sword pierced.

He breathed short and fast, curious to find that the pain was already ebbing away.

Of. Of course. The smoke.

And Narav fell from Edward's grasping hands face first off the bed onto the stone ground, paralyzed. He did not feel the fall but felt the jarring thud. It was as if his body were surrounded by clouds, distant clouds, and he couldn't touch a single thing. Was he still bleeding? It was impossible for him to tell.

Ranix, meanwhile, staggered, his own sword arm numbed by the concoction. Cursing, he backed toward the door, slicing at the smoke and unable to grab his bearings. He would regroup, had to, maybe approach the apothecary again...perhaps not. But first he needed to escape.

Barreling toward the door, Ranix found that his right leg would no longer respond to his commands. He went down to his left, cursing, coughing.

Narav was in a distant place now, very far from anything and everything occuring. Did he get them both? Would his father be safe? Would he? Even the ability to question seemed to slither from his ears as the tumult continued above him.

Wait.

He could feel something.

Cold.
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… and then everything suddenly went wrong. Doran had counted on Narav doing what most mortals would do in his situation – take the dagger and attack Ranix – but to his horror the boy leaped at the table instead and grabbed the bottles that stood there. He opened his mouth to scream, to warn him that he was going to kill them all, but it was too late.

As Narav hurled the bottles on the ground, the Mortalborn immediately held his breath and rushed over to the window as quickly as he could, letting go of his sword as he did so that he would be able to cover his mouth and his nose with one hand. In the trill that had it taken him to react, he had inhaled a bit of the smoke though, and he felt somewhat light-headed and dizzy.

He opened the window and stuck his head outside, taking a deep, shuddering breath as he did so. His heart felt as if it were about to jump out of his chest, and he held onto a nearby piece of furniture to steady himself for a moment before he finally turned to see what had happened.

All three mortals were unconscious now. Since some of the substance would likely still be in the air Doran tied a piece of cloth around his face so that he would inhale less, and then he picked his sword up again and walked through the room, looking at each of them.

One of them would have to die to put an end to this most unpleasant situation, but who? The boy was a fool beyond measure – he should have realized that desperate people often couldn’t think clearly anymore, although he had never had that problem – but he had also been brave, and he had incapacitated the Becomer. Narav had risked his life in order to protect his father which was something that he appreciated in spite of the dislike for his own father.

The blade hovered above the bleeding form of Narav for a moment, before he abruptly turned to Edward and finally Ranix. The mage had promised him great things, but his plan had been badly executed, and there was no telling how long his supposedly powerful group would last if Ranix’ behaviour was anything to go by. If he, Doran, had been in charge, he would have done things differently. Neither Edward nor Narav would ever have seen his face, and they wouldn’t have realized what was happening until it was too late.

Narav, Edward or Ranix? With Edward, he knew exactly what he was dealing with whereas he hadn’t even met Ranix’ allies yet. He had been tempted to help the Becomer before, but now? Lying there, on the floor, Ranix didn’t look like that impressive anymore. He glanced at the Tobelles, and then he abruptly stepped forward and stabbed the Becomer in the chest before he could regain consciousness and cause any more trouble.

Since he didn’t like to waste a precious alchemical reagent, he then took one of his empty vials and gathered some of Ranix’ blood. Perhaps, he thought, the mage could still be of use. Having that done, he finally turned to Narav again. He needed to act quickly now …

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When Narav came to again, he would find himself lying in his own bed under a fresh blanket. The window was open to let in some fresh air, and it was strangely quiet and peaceful. His upper body was bare, and there was a bandage wrapped around it. If he tried to move even a bit, he would feel a sharp pain in his side. In fact, even speaking – or breathing - would hurt.

Doran himself stood near the door, arms crossed over his chest. Unlike Ranix he had not tried to run, even though it was entirely possible that the Tobelles would blame this mess on him. No, he had taken a look at Edward to make sure that his life was not in immediate danger before he had carried his son’s unconscious body out of his bedroom.
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It was dark, down here.

Narav was floating in a black nothing. Around him, the whispers of a current spread from his fingers and out...out...out. Distantly there was pain, but even that was a dull afterthought, the throb more heartbeat than agony. It felt a little like drifting, lost in the sea as the sky departed farther and farther away. Ten arcs of age he had struggled in the ocean's grasp before Edward pulled him, sputtering, from the surf. Then, as now, Narav was quietly suspended in darkness similar to now...and just as before, there was something here with him.

A shape, unseen, massive, passed just beyond him. He could feel the pressure of its passage against his body. Within him there was this great shadow of a mystery, writhing and lurking. Some days, he imagined it might be his father...the mercenary Edward spoke so disdainfully of. Others he imagined it might be his mother, the unnamed whore raped along his destructive path. Unwanted, undesired, Narav was cast out into Idalos propelled by curse and rotten blood.

Here he drifted as their fates swam around him, ever closing, ever hungry.

Sometimes he wondered what might happen if he reached out to touch it.

He awoke in sweat and grasping. There was the pain, waiting for him, curling in his side and radiating out along his bone and flesh when he sat up. Hissing it out, he fell back on the bed with a moan. It all filtered back to him in snippets of bright and frantic memories. There he was again, thrashing madly against the man who had not been a man. There he was hurling the potion, the agony of the blade.

Edward.

Doran.

Narav forced himself up again, cold horror crashing over his memories. Had the doctor accepted Ranix's offer? Was Edward now dead? Why, then, was he still breathing? A shape at the door drew his attention and there was the tall alchemist, watching him coldly from the door. No. Not coldly. Perhaps many would think Doran's mannerisms cold, deliberately distant, but in that moment Narav felt he saw something else in that face. It was the look of Caleb Caverill, a boy down the road from where he lived. Caverill dug shallow holes in the earth in which he'd imprison whatever he could catch. There he would watch the animal or insect as it paced and scuttled in its enclosure. Sometimes he would feed them, care for them, other times he would make them fight. Regardless of action, his expression had always been the same distant disconnect Narav saw now. Doran looked at Narav as though he were observing a lesser species. There was no coldness, not really, no real malice. Narav could see none in the passive face of the man. It felt as though something old lived behind his face, something divorced from the mankind it surrounded itself with.

But it was only a sensation for a moment.

"What-" Narav croaked the word and regretted it instantly, clamping his eyes shut against the pain. Allowing himself to fall back on the blanket his hands danced around the bandaged wound. Collecting himself, he tried again, his voice reed-weak and small. "What happened?"
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Doran had been waiting by Narav’s bed for what seemed like an eternity, not out of compassion for the young man that had almost died, but because he hated losing a patient and somebody that might turn out to be of some value after all. When Narav began to sweat, he dipped a piece of cloth into cold water and put it on his forehead, and when he struggled to breathe, he opened a small jar that was filled with a substance that would help loosen his airways. He also gave him something to drink that would reduce the pain.

It was possible that a casual observer would mistake his actions for compassion though … until they saw the look on his face, cool, neutral and distant … as if the young man in the bed in front of him was simply part of one of his many experiments and not a living, breathing being …

“Don’t touch the wound!” he warned Narav as he saw that his hands moved and pushed them away from the bandage. “It might get infected. As for what happened, I saved your father’s and your life and killed the intruder after your rash actions nearly caused all of us to die. I moved his body to another room to spare your father the sight of it. It will be up to you to decide what you want to do with it.”

He said those sentences in a cool and matter-of-fact tone as if he were lecturing his students at the university on the principles of chemistry and alchemy and not talking about the gruesome events that had transpired in the Tobelle house. After all those centuries a single wannabe-assassin didn’t particularly faze him anymore. Only as he talked about what Narav had done, did the tone of his voice briefly become a hint harsher.
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Blades (Longsword): Stabbing someone in the chest
Endurance: The aftereffects of inhaling a dangerous substance
Endurance: Waiting next to a patient's bed for what seems like an eternity
Intimidation: Pointing your weapon at someone
Indimidation: Looking directly into someone's eyes
Intimidation: Mentioning that you have access to substances that can kill someone quickly and quietly
Medicine: A tea of sage soothes the stomach
Medicine: Ginger reduces nausea
Psychology: Family is not everything
Psychology: You can escape your heritage
Resistance: Inhaling a dangerous substance
Strength: Carrying an unconscious person

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Comments: This started off intriguing enough, with good writing between the two of you, describing a scene where an older gentleman gets visited by the doctor Doran. Then it turns suddenly exciting as they suffer an attack, and Narav nearly gets killed. Good thing Doran was there to save him!

Well done you two.

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