Sintih
Points!:
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Alchemy: The differences between Practice and Domain Magic
Alchemy: Use of binders
Chemistry: Deals with many dangerous substances
Chemistry: Phosphorescence from stones
Chemistry: White phosphorus properties
Chemistry: The difference between phosphorus and phosphorescent
Chemistry: Phosphorescence and the properties of phosphorescent stones
Detection: Noticing when someone is using safety equipment
Doran: A chemist and alchemist
Investigation: Using contextual detail to infer safeety
Location: Rynmere University
Location: Doran's Office
Location: Doran's Classroom
Tactics: Use of fire (or glowing weapons) to misinform the enemy
Loot:
Fame:
Devotion:
Magic:
Doran
Points!:
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Using calcite to make glowing paint
Alchemy: Transferring properties
Alchemy: The differences between Practice and Domain Magic
Alchemy: Use of binders
Chemistry: Phosphorescence and the properties of phosphorescent stones
Chemistry: Density of water vs alcohol
Chemistry: White phosphorus properties
Chemistry: The difference between phosphorus and phosphorescent
Endurance: Power naps and coffee help stave off sleep deprivation.
Sintih: Quite observant
Strength: Breaking down calcites is good for building up strength in your arms.
Tactics: Use of fire (or glowing weapons) to misinform the enemy
Loot:
Fame:
Devotion:
Magic:
Overview:
General comments. Great fun, I really love you guys and your relationship together. It's really developing well and it's a pleasure to read!
Story Lovely story, no worries all good.
Structure Well written, both!
Please do PM me if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions!
