Name: Sintih
Knowledge:
Atashi: The Ithecal who saved him from Kylar
Atashi: Uses a hammer
Atashi: Has a good sense of Humour
Atashi: Feels guilt for not defending Sinith earlier
Atashi: Friends with Kylar
Kylar: Known as blondie
How to clean Volareon tackle
Discipline: Doing work you hate
Investigation: Learn by watching
Camp: Busy and loud
Juggling was not invented to help carry more
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A (unless you include pain from laughter)
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: N/A
Comment: No issues with Story, Collaboration or Structure, all done well. Having read how Aeon felt following his demotion I think it was interesting to see the difference in response to the situation between the two of your characters, I get the picture that Sin regrets what he had done and has not given up on regaining his position. The play between the two of you was good I liked the very comedic interactions that took place within the thread. You did a good job at accepting an apology even when Sintih's pride is wounded and good job making the two grow closer and become in some ways, friends. Good job, I look forward to reviewing more of your stuff.
Name: Atashi
Knowledge:
Sintih: Regrets his actions
Sintih: Hates the consequences of his actions
Sintih: Has a good sense of humour
Sintih: Will not forgive Kylar without a direct apology
Sintih: Shadow to Emily
Combat: Shield: Cleaning weaponry is important
Atashi: Memories and guilt haunt and control you at times
Juggling was not invented to help carry more
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 General good deed (apologising to Sintih)
Devotion: N/A
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: N/A
Comment: Nice thread, no issues with Story, Collaboration or Structure. It was an enjoyable read and very nice to see the two PC's forming a new friendship. It was amusing to see the banter between the two and very funny to see how they reacted to eachother's questions. As requested I gave some fame for your attempt to make amends with Sintih, very well done, the two seemed to hit it off. I look forward to reading some more of your posts enjoy the rewards!
Send a PM my way if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions.
Knowledge:
Atashi: The Ithecal who saved him from Kylar
Atashi: Uses a hammer
Atashi: Has a good sense of Humour
Atashi: Feels guilt for not defending Sinith earlier
Atashi: Friends with Kylar
Kylar: Known as blondie
How to clean Volareon tackle
Discipline: Doing work you hate
Investigation: Learn by watching
Camp: Busy and loud
Juggling was not invented to help carry more
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A (unless you include pain from laughter)
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: N/A
Comment: No issues with Story, Collaboration or Structure, all done well. Having read how Aeon felt following his demotion I think it was interesting to see the difference in response to the situation between the two of your characters, I get the picture that Sin regrets what he had done and has not given up on regaining his position. The play between the two of you was good I liked the very comedic interactions that took place within the thread. You did a good job at accepting an apology even when Sintih's pride is wounded and good job making the two grow closer and become in some ways, friends. Good job, I look forward to reviewing more of your stuff.
Name: Atashi
Knowledge:
Sintih: Regrets his actions
Sintih: Hates the consequences of his actions
Sintih: Has a good sense of humour
Sintih: Will not forgive Kylar without a direct apology
Sintih: Shadow to Emily
Combat: Shield: Cleaning weaponry is important
Atashi: Memories and guilt haunt and control you at times
Juggling was not invented to help carry more
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 General good deed (apologising to Sintih)
Devotion: N/A
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Magic: N/A
Comment: Nice thread, no issues with Story, Collaboration or Structure. It was an enjoyable read and very nice to see the two PC's forming a new friendship. It was amusing to see the banter between the two and very funny to see how they reacted to eachother's questions. As requested I gave some fame for your attempt to make amends with Sintih, very well done, the two seemed to hit it off. I look forward to reading some more of your posts enjoy the rewards!
Send a PM my way if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions.