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Pash Raj'oriq
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Posts: 1200
Joined: Fri May 05, 2017 5:31 pm
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Tankbard
Renown: 315
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Weft of the Heart, Part 1
Character(s) Involved: Pash and an NPC (Ari'nne)
Quick Summary: Pash finally convinces his musician friend/partner/magician to initiate him in Empathy magic.
Requested Knowledge: Empathy magic. Relationship stuff.
Other Notes: It's mushy. I'm a dork. Sorry.
Fame: Nothing outside the bedroom, nope.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: Yes.
Warning: PG, maybe? I don't know. This sort of had a mind of its own. I just ... yeah.

Thank you! This is my first thread for grading. YAS.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Sat Jul 01, 2017 7:07 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 94
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Aeon
Posts: 529
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: 183
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Review Requests 4.0

Uthaldria
Pleasure
Aeon has his first experience in a brothel ._.
Any knowledge seen
No fame
No devotion
No magic
Warning: It's mature tagged, has some darker topics and sex, but nothing really graphic, it's fade to black in the end
Thank you!
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"A hero is someone who steps up when everyone else backs down"
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Varthakh
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Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:44 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Jeger
Renown: 580
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: [Mature] Acquiring the Totem: ...Goose??
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgar is given goose. Fridgar kill goose. Fridgar eat goose. Fridgar make totem of goose. Fridgar dedicate totem of goose. Fridgar become goose.
Requested Knowledge: As seen
Other Notes: Goose
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Magic XP: Doesn't qualify
Warning: Fridgar ate raw goose.
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Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Review Requests 4.0

Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

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Just Faith, tis a solo
Knowledge: As seen
Devotion: I don't think so. She's marked by Famula, Moseke and Vri if that helps, but I don't believe there's anything.
Fame: As seen
Overview: This is Faith's job thread for the season as a chef. I've tried to do it a bit differently - her skill in cooking is 103 and she has over 50 knowledges. So I tried to focus on the product rather than the cooking processes - on her "secondary" skills - like detection and how she's running the business (this is a pc run business). So, I've kind of just assumed that the cooking is awesome and looked at how she does that with new things. Hope that works (I think it works!)

Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Doran
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Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2016 3:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Alchemist
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: School for Everyone
Character(s) Involved: Doran, Elyna
Quick Summary: Elyna and Doran meet at the university and talk - about turning from the Immortals, among other things.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can find.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review.
Fame: No idea.
Devotion: Doran thought about Syroa and prayed to her. I'm not sure if Elyna has done anything to warrant devotion though.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No.
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Noth
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Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2016 4:51 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Monster
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Hustler
Character(s) Involved:Noth
Quick Summary:Noth finds a hustler, beats him up, and then recruits a gang of fellow patrons.
Requested Knowledge:Intimidation, Leadership, Unarmed for punching him in the solar plexus, whatever seems fitting after that.
Other Notes:
Fame: Negative if possible, but possibly positive since he did beat up a hustler.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Remarkably nothing.
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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