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Tio Silver
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris, Scaltoth Jungles
Thread Name: First Step Along the Road
Character(s) Involved: Tio Silver
Quick Summary: Tio is initiated into the art of necromancy.
Requested Knowledge: Various necromancy related knowledges.
Other Notes: None
Fame: None
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: A little smidgen of foul language.
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Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Ismene
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Joined: Thu May 04, 2017 7:22 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Baker
Renown: 30
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Sugar and Spice
Character(s) Involved: Ismene
Quick Summary: Ismene starts her job at a bakery and gets to know the people who work there
Requested Knowledge: Baking I guess, and knowledges about the NPCs encountered.
Other Notes: Not much happens, sorry! It's more of an introductory thread.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Lorena
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Waste Not, Want More
Character(s) Involved: Lorena
Quick Summary: Lorena helps taking cargo from Rhakros to Andaris
Requested Knowledge: Seafaring, Strength, Acrobatics?
Other Notes: Job Thread. I am so sorry in advance, lol.
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Not really. A little flirting but nah.
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Padraig
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris Town
Thread Name: [The Menagerie] Old Friends, New Customs
Character(s) Involved: Faith and Padraig
Quick Summary: This is the last in a series of threads where Faith and Pad solve the mystery of animals escaping from the local menagerie. It originates from a local bounty advert.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: They solve the mystery of how the animals are escaping?
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: No warning.
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Violet
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Race: Human
Profession: Soldier and Painter
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Life of a Soldier
Character(s) Involved: Violet (solo)
Quick Summary: Violet goes through a day of training with the Iron Hand
Requested Knowledge: Anything related, Thrown Weapons particularly
Other Notes: Job thread, may be boring
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: None
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 4.0

Ishallr, Scalvoris

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Just Faith (solo)
As part of the whole "I'm going to cure the incurable diseases" part of her tripartite obsession (cure incurable diseases, abolish slavery and end poverty... #smallgoals) Faith is working with a professor at the Scalvoris Campus. They are looking at the effect of sub-zero temperatures on mortal forms - so they go to the frozen island of Ishallr and collect up a few dozen bodies to take back to the mainland.
Knowledge: As seen.
Devotion: As seen.
Fame: As seen.
Notes; If possible, I'd like the 2 x snowflake crystals, please. She's going to use them on Nir'wei's brain. Thanks!
Warning: Dead people, it's kinda morbid. Very PG13 though.

Thanks so much for reviewing my weird little pc.
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Moon
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Rymere (in the ocean)
Thread Name: Mysterious chest part 2
Character(s) Involved: just Moon
Quick Summary: Moon escapes from an attack on shore and prepares for another trip on land.
Requested Knowledge: I really need what ever Metemorphis knowledge you can give me, I don't even care about other skills I just really need some of that. knowledges on slime production, how calm it is being in a cocoon, how you shouldn't do it to often, basically any of that.
Other Notes: My mer used to be a legged mer until I requested the change. If there is any reference to my character having legs when they shouldn't I apologize for that. Also I hope this thread isn't too grindy, it felt grindy as I did it but I tried to make it interesting.
Fame: nope
Devotion: nope
Magic XP: nope
Warning: if slime cocoons gross you out then probably best to avoid this thread but otherwise its very tame.
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Xander Andaris
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Profession: Single father | Duke of Andaris
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: A person with your skills
Character(s) Involved: Edalene, Xander and Melody
Quick Summary: Xander goes to meet Edalene to discuss an intelligence job and his aims but they are interrupted by Melody. Xander tries to see it just as coincidence but in the end loses his nerve and decides it better he just leave.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Nope
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Market Day
Character(s) Involved: Tei'serin Njy'ryn
Quick Summary: Tei'serin is ordered to go to Ne'haer and follow some odd instructions.
Requested Knowledge: Anything that applies would be appreciated. But I am hoping to earn some Gardening knowledges (the use of plant boxes for a small garden, and the purpose of a soil sifter), as well as some Agriculture knowledges (the purpose of a seed sower, and a horse drawn hoe), and Animal Husbandry knoweldges (1) a dairy cow must be pregnant in order to produce milk, 2) the gestation period for cows, 3) it is a good idea to let a milking cow rest for at least the last ninety trials before they give birth so the damage done to their udders as you milk them can be healed before they have to nurse their calves, 4) mares are irritated and distracted when they are in heat, 5) the instinct to mate is strong when a mare is in heat, 6) being in heat is uncomfortable for a mare, 7) mares give birth in Ashan, and some knowledges on how to shoe a horse, the names and uses for the tools used to do so, the parts of a hoof, and some of the things that can go wrong when shooing a horse). Possibly some location knowledges as well.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: I doubt it applies.
Devotion: Yes, to Moseke for praying to Moseke in the Southern Temple, and participating in a festival (Traveler's Day)
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: It's a shopping thread, so I don't know how interesting it is, but I did at least try to make it more interesting with a bit of foreshadowing of things to come.
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Last edited by Tei'serin Nji'ryn on Thu Jun 08, 2017 4:56 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 301
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Arlo Creede
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer/Willow Woods
Thread Name: [Seraas en Avellach] Where Fools Go, Trouble Follows
Character(s) Involved: Vega and Arlo
Quick Summary: Vega and Arlo decide to search out and explore an abandoned fortress in the heart of Willow Woods. They look around an old outpost first, then enter the fortress and after a short time and some disturbing experiences, decide to turn back.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: According to the writeup for the Seraas en Avellach there's fame attached to stepping inside the place, etc.
Devotion: Yes. Whatever seen
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Little creepy but nothing outrageous

Thanks!
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