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Elyna
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere
Thread Name: A little light
Character(s) Involved: Elyna
Quick Summary: Elyna is on the road and needs to get some sewing done. Job thread.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Probably not
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Nope
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Celeste Andaris
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Andaris, Rynmere

Settling In
Xander and Celeste
The pair meet Celetse's advisors for the first time in her role as baroness. She starts making some decisions.
Knowledge: People, politics, that kind of thing if you see it, please.
Magic: Nope
Devotion: Nope
No warning, it's a job thread, getting settled etc.

Thanks for the review!
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 4.0

Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

The Soul of a Slave
Faith (solo)

Faith is doing her daily rounds of the Temple in Scalvoris Town when she sees a ghost. It's a young boy who was a slave, he has not moved over because he has not completed his service to his owner. Faith finds his body, carries it back to town and takes it to the Temple. She takes the key he was carrying to his master and the boy passes over.
Knowledge: The Bellinos ability, please, as requested in the thread. Strength is possible, maybe endurance. As seen, though.
Magic: Nope.
Devotion: Yes, please, if considered appropriate. This is vey focused on Vri and Famula, with bits of Moseke in there too. As seen for those, please?
Fame: I believe there are good deeds etc in here.
Warning: Faith is a ghost whisperer talking to the ghost of a slave who died when he was stabbed. She experiences his death, there's a body etc. Nothing graphic, but it's not a pleasant subject.

Note: I don't say what happens to the body once she got to the Temple, because that's going to be a separate thread. Thanks :)


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Elyna
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere
Thread Name: Be still
Character(s) Involved: Elyna and Malcolm
Quick Summary: Malcolm is setting off on a mission, leaving a pregnant Ely behind
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Not sure.
Devotion: Probably not.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: None.
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Doran
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Alluring Potion of Eternal Life
Character(s) Involved: Doran, Yrmellyn Cole
Quick Summary: Doran offers to analyze a potion for Yrmellyn.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can find.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: I don't know. Doran is about to commit an act of lust (=Syroa devotion), but then Yrmellyn's attunement kicks in.
Magic XP: Maybe for Yrmellyn?
Warning: No.
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Vakhanor
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Bond of Blood and Fire: The Beginning
Character(s) Involved: Vakhanor
Quick Summary: Memory: Vakhanor is called away from Andaris by an envoy sent by his father.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you can find.
Other Notes:
Fame: Unsure, probably a minus somewhere.
Devotion: None
Magic XP: None
Warning: No warning tags applicable.
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Vakhanor
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Bonds of Blood and Fire: The Seed of Hatred
Character(s) Involved: Vakhanor
Quick Summary: Memory: Vakhanor is introduced to the crew.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you can find.
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: None
Magic XP: None
Warning: Nothing overboard, but there is mature language.
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Alistair
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Acquiring the Totem: Kaiserion
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Alistair
Quick Summary: Ali, Frid and Kaiserion meet and make a totem for Fridgar
Requested Knowledge: Haltunga for both, idk
Other Notes: Fridgar now has a bitchboy totem lol
Fame: Nah
Devotion:
nah

Magic XP: MAYBE
Warning: NAH
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 4.0

Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

Cryogenics 101
Faith (solo)
Faith is studying with a visiting professor on the impact of sub-zero temperature on flesh. She's doing it as research for her ongoing search for a cure for the Rot. In this thread she's doing a lot of reading on hypothermia and trying to keep focused on that, but thinking about how she can use the information to cure the Rot, also.
Knowledge: Research, please? Otherwise, as seen.
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Don't think so.
Magic: Nurp

Thanks for reviewing. Sorry for the geek-fest. :)
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Noth
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Glass Eyed Doctor
Character(s) Involved: Noth
Qui[/url]ck Summary: Noth seeks assistance for his fractured wrist from a strange doctor in the woods
Requested Knowledge: Small amount of medical, anything else that seems fit.
Other Notes:
Fame: Probably not. Negative if possible.
Devotion: Nah.
Magic XP: Nope, unless you count my charismatic charm as being magical.
Warning: No, but it's weird. :P
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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