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Symbri
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Posts: 208
Joined: Tue Oct 11, 2016 2:17 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Monk
Renown: 34
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Dirt between my toes
Character(s) Involved:Sym
Quick Summary: Kinda just a kick in the butt to get me writing again, lots of introspection for Sym
Requested Knowledge: Whatever ya see
Other Notes: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: (Yes or no to indicate whether your character did something that warrants devotion points.) A short prayer to Xiur/Qylios nothin special
Magic XP: (indicate "yes" if you've used magic & would like the Peer Reviewer to note that earned XP can be put towards magic skills) no
Warning: (indicate if the thread is marked as "Mature", as well as any mature themes or extremes that might make the Peer Reviewer uncomfortable) Doubt it unless existential stuff gets ya
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Sabine
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Posts: 461
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 2:27 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Investigator/Priestess
Renown: 116
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Emea
Thread Name: Fraud
Character(s) Involved: Sabine
Quick Summary: Nobility, family, and beautiful silk garments. What might be a dream for some becomes Sabine's worst nightmare.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever is seen.
Other Notes: Thank you so much for the review!
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Sel'ma
Posts: 132
Joined: Mon Mar 02, 2015 10:08 am
Race: Mortal Born
Renown: 0
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place:Ne'haer
Thread Name: A Bounty On Medicine
Character(s) Involved: Sel'ma
Quick Summary: Sel'ma applies for a bounty job but it' s already taken, so she doesn't get the job, just the information. In addition a troublesome mercenary decides to have some fun with the sev'ryn featherhead.
Requested Knowledge: Everything and anything you can find.
Other Notes: Originally I aimed at a bounty board thread, but another player beat me to claiming the job. That's why the thread starts with going to the board. I kept the text and made another story of it.
Fame: Good deed?
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Very few would be able to find this thread worth a warning.
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word count: 125
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Alistair
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Posts: 3421
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Clarity
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Alistair
Quick Summary: Frid and Ali talk about their fight
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Idk
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Xander Andaris
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Posts: 725
Joined: Mon Feb 06, 2017 8:16 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Single father | Duke of Andaris
Renown: 142
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Lost Down South
Character(s) Involved: Xander and Jojha
Quick Summary: Xander meets Jojha, she helps him find a jeweller
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for this
Fame: Maybe for Jojha for helping Xander
Devotion: Don't think so
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None
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Alistair
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Posts: 3421
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos, Surrounding Area
Thread Name: Intricacies of the Rose
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Ali tells Fridgar about his familial abuse, Fridgar is a cutie pie skfnafkalf
Requested Knowledge: Personal knowledges
Other Notes: Thanks bae
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: References child abuse and rape
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Last edited by Alistair on Thu Jun 22, 2017 9:05 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 54
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Tristan Venora
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Posts: 1360
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 11:47 am
Race: Human
Profession: Mad Scientist Socialite
Renown: 869
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Cat King
Character(s) Involved: Tristan Venora
Quick Summary: Tristan writes a comedy about a king who is a cat.
Requested Knowledge: Something writing related would be nice!
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: Probably. According to this thread you get 6 points for Zanik for writing an original play!
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Not really. It's a harmless little solo.
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Last edited by Tristan Venora on Mon May 15, 2017 6:44 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 75
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Posts: 557
Joined: Mon Oct 10, 2016 3:25 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Herbalist and Teacher
Renown: 328
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer/Treth
Thread Name: [Treth] Celebrating Us
Character(s) Involved: Tei'serin Nji'ryn, various NPCs
Quick Summary: Tei'serin's class celebrates the Festival of Languages.
Requested Knowledge: Anything that applies, but knowledges in the following would be especially appreciated: teaching, linguistics (something along the lines of the languages spoken in Western Idalos), Xanthea, Rakahi, Dehasin, Haltunga, Athivelienic, Irarian, Nysin, Anume, Nidtaic, Rifaish, Dregneen, and Naratrien
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for reviewing this!
Fame: If it applies.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: None.
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Vakhanor
Posts: 334
Joined: Wed May 25, 2016 3:27 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Smith
Renown: 50
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Lost
Character(s) Involved: Vakhanor & Elyna
Quick Summary: Ely returns from finding Malcolm and seeks comfort.
Requested Knowledge: N/A
Other Notes: Social.
Fame: Not sure?
Devotion: None
Magic XP: None
Warning: Nothing I can think of.
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Alistair
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Posts: 3421
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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Review Requests 4.0

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Crimson Wineskins
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Kaelrik
Quick Summary: Ali gets drunk and tries to befriend the Lothar
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Kael abandoned ship, so I'm submitting it
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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