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Tristan Venora
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Venora] Tea for Three
Character(s) Involved: Tristan Venora, Teddy Venora, Zvezdana Venora
Quick Summary: Three Venoras meet for tea.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can find.
Other Notes: Zvezdana would like her thread rewards for completion's sake.
Fame: I don't think so.
Devotion: Probably not.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No. This is a harmless thread.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Scalvoris

Shall we do lunch?
Padraig & Faith
The pair have lunch, Padraig talks about getting a job, Faith goes crazy buying things for him, there's an ongoing rivalry with a professor. All good fun!
Knowledge: As seen
Fame: As seen (gifts?)
Devotion: As seen
Magic: Nope
No warning.

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Scalvoris

Three Little Words
Faith (solo)
Job thread where Faith is asked (instructed) to judge a cookery competition in the restaurant where she works.
Knowledge: I thought it would be nice to try and do something with Business Management, Logistics, Appraisal, Detection - those kind of secondary skills which are related to Cooking and Baking
Devotion / Fame = as seen
Magic: nope
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word count: 63
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Freya DuCarinos
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Race: Biqaj
Profession: Drug Trafficker
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Orm'del Sea
Thread Name: Welcome Aboard the Arbiter
Character(s) Involved: Valkan and Freya
Quick Summary: Freya tells Valkan that they are drug smugglers and Valkan tells Freya he's a wanted deserter. She hires him onto the crew.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: None
Fame: Any
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Vaughn
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City/Area Taken Place: Burhan, Rynmere.
Thread Name: [Burhan] Saying Goodbye.
Character(s) Involved: Lorena and Vaughn.
Quick Summary: Lorena comes to tell Vaughn she has to leave and they get into an argument.
Requested Knowledge: Any you see, this was more a social thread.
Other Notes: Lol, should have been called 'Shouting Goodbye'. :)
Fame: Whatever you see.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: They have an argument. There's a little bit of kissing but mainly they fight. :D Nothing too crazy.

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Niv
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris
Thread Name: Standing on the shoulders of Giants
Character(s) Involved: Niv, Amaris, Faith, Anos, Padraig (lots of people in other words)
Quick Summary: A meeting of the Intellectsia attract a group of nerds, who end up working towards helping Anos figure out his mysterious problem.
Requested Knowledge: What ever you see, probably not a lot until the small bit of research that happens near the end.
Other Notes: Thank you in advance for reviewing this massive thread, we all appreciate it.
Fame: What ever you see
Devotion: I don't think there was
Magic XP: nope
Warning: Nope
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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki.
Thread Name: The Art of a Strong Defense
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis
Quick Summary: Training in Open Palm. A preparatory unarmed fighting form.
Requested Knowledge: Unarmed Combat | Resistance (Effects of Fatigue) | Endurance (Repetitive Technique). Anything else you like the look of. Unarmed Combat: Fighting Forms: Open Palm. Would be great thanks.
Other Notes: He has the maker hall location, but increased notes on it are always welcome. The NPC is new. Really would like to try and get a resist knowledge in here, been trying but not nailed one yet!
Fame: Probably None, maybe a +1 for swaying his reputation back a bit?
Devotion: None.
Magic XP: None.
Warning: None. Minor technicalities in martial arts, though I am stretching into a style I have little except theory on.
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Violet
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: One Plus One is Three
Character(s) Involved: Violet and Malcolm
Quick Summary: Violet comes for one of her private tutoring lessons with Malcolm and learns about Draketh and other things.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see, probably definitely teaching for Mal
Other Notes: It was Mal's job thread so, some boredom might apply but we tried to keep it interesting
Fame: None I don't think unless Mal gets some for giving her private lessons with no real payment exchanged
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: None
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Faldrass, Scalvoris

A Diamond Geyser
Padraig & Faith
Having taken care of his pesky eye problems the two take a walk. They discuss the charity / business Faith is setting up and she asks Pad if he can help her with an aspect of it. They agree what he needs.

Knowledge: as seen
Fame: as seen
Devotion: as seen
No magic

No warning. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Vega
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Emea

Dreams of Home
Arlo and Vega
Having just been initiated into Dreamwalking, Vega is quick to show off to Arlo. The two of them chat.
Knowledge: As seen (NB: As they are both initiated dreamwalkers, they can both gain skill knowledge in Emea, although not physical skills ~ has been checked with Anomaly)
Devotion: Jesine for Arlo, please.
Magic: nope
Fame: don't think so
No warning. Thanks for the review!
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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