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Limbo
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Foster's Landing, Etzos
Thread Name: The Terror Disease /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=5227
Character(s) Involved: Kovic, some NPC mages.
Quick Summary: Vuda wants to scare people from the Rhakros guys. He finds Kovic to be a good subject for that, so he starves him out and sends him to wreck havoc upon a small town to the South East of Etzos.
Requested Knowledge: Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Quick Healing
Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Infesting Foreign Bodies
Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Mutating Foreign Bodies
Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Controling Foreign Bodies

& anything else you can see about this awesome, awesome ability.

Other Notes: Lovely thread for Kovic. It may not be for the taste of everyone, but I love having the chance to use Kovic's abilities to the limit and see them evolve in such an awesome manner. Special thanks to my main man Maltruism, who was the genius behind this thread idea as well as opening it up in such a grim way. You're the coolest, bro!
Fame: Surely negative. Many bodies. MANY.
Devotion: Naw. I'll make my own religion soon. JK I already have
Magic XP: Not for Kovic.
Warning: Totally a mature thread. There's depictions of gore, murder, and all sorts of weird shit. Not adult forum stuff, but still capable of triggering someone, even if unlikely

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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: The Hotlands
Thread Name: Ninurta the Foundation Sandform (Stage 2)
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis
Quick Summary: Beginning his first generation of new thralls Kaladis experiments with Golem creation. They further do some work on the arcane research site's foundations. Finally ending with selling some of the water they've been working on and hinting at for a few threads.
Requested Knowledge: Nercomancy: Golemcraft, Operation| Business Management: Supply and Demand | Construction: Skeletal Structure, Golems | Sculpting: Stone
Other Notes: How much they made on the sandstone and a third of a barrel of water (not the barrel itself) I left up to you. Water being a precious commodity in the desert.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: No
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki
Thread Name: A Tale of Two Jewels, The Value of Life (Part 3)
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis
Quick Summary: Told by the Aurora in no uncertain terms to give them the location of the jewel. The only problem is what jewel are they talking about! The cost of cleaning up the mess from the last thread (linked at the top). Spirits, a greedy assassin, and a choice which could have consequences!
Requested Knowledge: Shield Fighting | Tactics | Leadership | Investigation | Spirits | Intelligence
Other Notes: If you need a reference, the last thread is linked at the top of this one as usual. The character at the end may or may not be a spirit herself ;) I haven't decided.
Fame: Probably some for the fate of those below.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No. Dungeon setting, no blood, mild violence.

Thanks for whoever picks these up.
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Last edited by Kaladis Anar on Wed Apr 19, 2017 10:39 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 150
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Honathor Longreach
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City/Area Taken Place: Ulthaldria
Thread Name: One Unfine Mess Indeed
Character(s) Involved: Honathor
Quick Summary: Farm Work with a Mystery Uncovered
Requested Knowledge: Agriculture | Animal Handling | Polearm: Spear | Whatever you see, some food prep here.
Other Notes: Simple Thread, 2 NPCs.
Fame: Sometimes given for a steady days work.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Celeste Andaris
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Rynmere, Krome

An Unexpected Interlude
Xander Krome and Celeste Andaris
Following an attempted mugging (linked in the thread, but not necessary for you to read it), Celeste asked Xander if they could just stay in an Inn. This is the conversation they have in there.
Fame: Celeste gets Xander a gift, he's very kind to her.
Knowledge: As seen
Warning: Celeste comes close to telling Xander about being attacked previously - so some touching on dark themes. Also, he kissed her cheek (gasp
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Scalvoris

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Just Faith
Last of a series of threads where Faith has worked out (she hopes) a cure for 'lightbane' - she tests it out on the four men who have been afflicted.
Knowledge: specific to the Order of the Adunih and Galena (her mentor), please. All else, as seen.
Devotion: as seen
Fame: as seen
No warning. :) Thank you for reviewing.
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Arlo Creede
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: The Golden Flask]No nonny nonny here...
Character(s) Involved: Vega and Arlo
Quick Summary: Vega and Arlo check into The Golden Flask for a night, a bath and a meal after arriving in Ne'haer, and talk about what they'll do in the city.
Requested Knowledge: Knowledge about Ne'haer, etc, whatever else seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: no warning

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Arlo Creede
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Stories
Character(s) Involved: Vega and Arlo
Quick Summary: After an appearance by Cassion in this thread, Vega and Arlo return to their campsite and discuss what happened.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Not sure?
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: no warning

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Arlo Creede
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Getting into a routine
Character(s) Involved: Vega and Arlo
Quick Summary: Just Vega and Arlo practicing acrobatics, and squabbling as usual
Requested Knowledge: acrobatics, strength, endurance, whatever else seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: no warning

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Scalvoris

Taking Stock
Padraig & Faith
This is the beginning of Faith starting to think about anesthesia (in quite a few seasons time) and a chance for them to work together to deliver medical treatment via alternative means of delivery.
Knowledge: Chemistry, please. Other than that, as seen.
Devotion: Don't think so
Fame: As seen - gifts are exchanged.
No warning - thanks for reviewing.
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