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Celeste Andaris
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Review Requests 3.0

Rynmere, Krome

Darkest Before Dawn
Xander & Celeste
The morning after Xander and his father got into a fight, the pair discuss said situation.
Devotion: No
Knowledge: As seen
Magic: No
Fame: As seen
Warning: None.

Thank you for reviewing.
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Limbo
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Fite Club /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6361
Character(s) Involved: Kovic
Quick Summary: Kovic wakes up in a cage fight, gets beaten badly, then he accidentally uses his Misty Mania ability and all is fixed.
Requested Knowledge: Considering how rarely I get to use Kovic's mortalborn abilities almost freely, I've got some knowledges I really want to get. This thread is a goldmine of knowledges, too. Getting them or not depends on the reviewer's opinion, of course.
  • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Temporary Pain Receptor Shutdown
  • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Temporary Amputation
  • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Squeezing past Bars
  • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Black, Ink-like Smoke
  • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Causes Insatiable Hunger (On others)
  • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Removes Hunger Sensation (On Kovic)
  • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Doesn't Affect Kovic
  • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Resilient to Currents
All that aside, I'd also like to request Discipline knowledges, and anything else the reviewer sees. I love you, annonymous hero!


Other Notes: Kovic also encounters some hunger/famine spirits. I tried to display their bipolarity with Mortalborn, considering Kovic is the Mortalborn of Famine but also has mortal origins.
Fame: Surely negative. Just read the thread.
Devotion: Always happy to get Syroa devotion. I plan on cashing it out eventually for a happy ending, if you know what I'm saying.

You don't know what I'm saying, trust me. :evil:
Magic XP: Naw
Warning: It is marked Mature indeed. There's some very mild gore and some brutality, but it wasn't anything too bad. Can't say the same about the next thread of this series... XD
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Yrmellyn Cole
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Great Hunt
Character(s) Involved: Nir'wei and Yrmellyn
Quick Summary:A wild jacadon is causing trouble on the countryside. Nir'wei is sent to search for it. Yrmellyn is just in the wrong place at the wrong time. When troubles arise the two of them are smart enought to leave.
Requested Knowledge:What you can find.
Other Notes:I wrapped this thread with Nir'wei's consent. The end was agreed on OOC. If it's possible I would like to get a mysterious print named "The Jacadon's Hand" as loot.
Fame: Hardly.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: Some attempts from Yrmellyn to use attunement (on novice level) despite how it's not released. Would be fun if counts, though I'll be content with whatever you decide.
Warning: I don't think so.
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Limbo
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Hell's Kitchen /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6367
Character(s) Involved: Kovic
Quick Summary: Kovic cooks for the first time in his life. It's horrible and it lacks salt.
Requested Knowledge: Got the chance to write Kovic's Mortalborn ability almost freely in this thread series, so I wanted to get some specific ones. It's a knowledge gold mind, this! If they are awarded or not depends entirely to the reviewer, of course.
  • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Creating a Full Head Mask
    Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Modifying Skin Tone
    Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Shredded Bone Skin Coating
    Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Claw-like Formations
Other than that, knowledge on cooking and whatever else you can find would be appreciated.
Other Notes: The next thread will be the last part, I promise.
Fame: Pretty sure it's negative.
Devotion: Always happy to get Syroa points.
Magic XP: Eww, no.
Warning: Marked Mature. I was unsure if to put it into the adult forum or not, tbh. It didn't strike me as too gruesome, as it made me laugh when I was writing it. Just be warned that Kovic eats his genitalia in a totally non-sexual way. I love this character
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Limbo
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Birth of an Original Being /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6370
Character(s) Involved: Kovic
Quick Summary: Kovic is caught in the site of a massacre. He has his disguise on, so he convinces the witness that he's an ancient deity.
Requested Knowledge: I'd love some persuation.
Other Notes: It's a short ending to this small thread series I had. PHEW
Fame: Surely negative?
Devotion: As usual, Syroa devotion is apprecaited.
Magic XP: NoPe
Warning: Safe. Children welcome! XD
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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: The Hotlands
Thread Name: Capturing Some Cobalt
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Mining some Cobalt. Accidents Happen. A gold rush of sorts before the authorities show up to strip it bare.
Requested Knowledge: Mining | Deception | Detection | Strength | Endurance | Haggling - Business Management or Negotiation.
Other Notes: I don’t know if matters for knowledges, but this is 6 not 5 posts. They are all visible in the topic view, the 500 error gave it a counting hiccup. I also use these mining threads so I can say he's got ore for when he works on weapons/armor for himself at the forge.
Fame: Probably Negative
Devotion: This thread was a dedication to Audrae.
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki
Thread Name: A Tale of Two Jewels, The Chase [Part 2]
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Kaladis and Ralari try to escape pursuit of a vengeful Laventia, a mage they have history with. The plot deepens.
Requested Knowledge: Necromancy | Running | Stealth | Whatever else you see. - Detection, Deception etc.
Other Notes: 2nd of a continuation, which is linked at the top on the thread. I don’t know if matters for knowledges, but this is 7 not 6 posts. They are all visible in the topic view, the 500 error gave it a counting hiccup.
Fame: Definitely Negative
Devotion: Two very minor comments referencing Audrae.
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: No

Appreciate anyone taking the time for these.
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: Let the Journey Begin
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Xander
Quick Summary: Ali and Xander ride a Drexion towards Andaris.
Requested Knowledge: Mount knowledges for both
Other Notes: Thanks bae
Fame: Doubt it
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Vega
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Review Requests 3.0

Orm'del Sea

One fish, two fish, red fish.... where fish?
Arlo and Vega
On the way to Ne'haer, the pair of them are on a boat. Arlo's getting bored, so they go fishing and have a bit of friendly competition.
Magic: Nope
Devotion: Don't think so
Fame: He lets her win. I suppose.
Knowledge: Fishing (both), cooking (Arlo), navigation (both), seafaring (Vega) - as seen please!
No warning.

Thanks!
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Vega
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Orem'del Sea

Storms at Sea
Arlo and Vega
They're at sea - there's a storm - they have to fix some broken flibbertygibbet on the sails.
Knowledge: Cooking (Arlo), Seafaring (Vega), Navigation (both), Climbing (both), Acrobatics (both) - anything else as seen.
Magic: Nurp
Devotion: Cassion for Arlo, Xiur and U'frek for Vega, please.
Fame: We save the ship! Kinda. It's a good deed.
No warning. Thanks for the review!
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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