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Xander Andaris
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Posts: 725
Joined: Mon Feb 06, 2017 8:16 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Single father | Duke of Andaris
Renown: 142
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place:Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Krome] First Dates
Character(s) Involved: Xander and Celeste
Quick Summary: Xander and Celeste have their first formal dinner with his parents and things get a little heated.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen, knowledge about the Baron and Baroness Krome maybe.
Other Notes: Thanks for the review in advance
Fame: Maybe
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Some sexual implications, mild violence and some passionate shouting.
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Jachiel
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Posts: 150
Joined: Tue May 03, 2016 2:45 pm
Race: Human
Renown: 95
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Burning out a trough
Character(s) Involved: Jachiel
Quick Summary: Jachiel makes a wooden water trough
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see
Other Notes: Thanks for the review in advance
Fame: Doubt it
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Nope
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Vega
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Posts: 2470
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Dweeb
Renown: 1474
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Review Requests 3.0

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Arlo & Vega
Having gotten into all sorts of bother over the last half-season, the pair decide to spend one night in an Inn, with a bath and a bed each. They also decide where they're going to go to next and generally squabble.
Devotion: Cassion & Jesine for Arlo, nope for Vega
Fame: as seen
Magic: Nope
Knowledge: As seen -
Thanks for reviewing. No warnings.
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Edalene
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Posts: 409
Joined: Wed Mar 08, 2017 3:15 am
Race: Human
Profession: Seeker
Renown: 39
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Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Price of Good Intentions
Character(s) Involved: Edalene, Narav
Quick Summary: Edalene and Narav try to help a friend, but the prank goes fatally awry...
Requested Knowledge: Personal lores, lores around Deception, Disguise, Forgery, etc etc. Whatever is found.
Fame: Possibly for killing a man. But no one else knew it was them.
Devotion: Nope!
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: You will have feelings.

Thank you!
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Mal
Posts: 400
Joined: Mon Sep 12, 2016 11:15 pm
Race: Naerikk
Profession: Thief
Renown: -92
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City/Area Taken Place: Ankila, Krome
Thread Name: The Maladjusted Hunter
Character(s) Involved: Mal, Sky
Quick Summary: Mal hunts some prey, but finds an odd kinship instead.
Requested Knowledge: Mal: Unarmed Combat (All you see, even basic stuff!), Discipline, Endurance, Acrobatics, Flying, Strength, Tactics, Detection, Becoming, Hunting. Sky: Field Craft, Discipline, Melee (Mere-club), Acrobatics, Endurance, Detection, Persuasion, Deception, Animal Handling
Other Notes: New scar for Sky
Fame: Mal: -2 Magic Use?
Devotion: Sky: Sintra +5 Manipulation
Magic XP: Yes (Mal, Becoming)
Warning: Mature subject matter at times, but nothing racy.
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Edalene
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Posts: 409
Joined: Wed Mar 08, 2017 3:15 am
Race: Human
Profession: Seeker
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Not A Morning Person
Character(s) Involved: Edalene, Duncan Oison, Aeodan
Quick Summary: Edalene has brought a man (Duncan) home, and he meets her brother. Then feelings happen because Edalene is super sad about Narav.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can see. It's most likely just personal lores.
Fame: Negative.
Devotion: Negative.
Magic XP: Negative.
Warning: Edalene and Duncan wake up together after having spent the night before together, but there is nothing sexual in this thread at all.

Thanks bbs!
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Aeon
Posts: 529
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: 183
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Review Requests 3.0

Ne'haer
Bounty Hunting
Aeon & NPC decide to make moneys by hunting a bounty, and they do, but they get it back more dead than alive.
Possibly strength knowledge, anything seen beyond that
Anything seen for fame
No devotion
No magic
No warning
Thank you! (be sure to get me that bounty reward tho)
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"A hero is someone who steps up when everyone else backs down"
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Alistair
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Posts: 3421
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Rift
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Alistair
Quick Summary: Ali teaches Frid Rupturing. Then they get it freaky, ofc.
Requested Knowledge: Endurance for Ali, heavy rupturing knowledges for Frid
Other Notes: Thanks bae
Fame: Idk
Devotion: Maybe Syroa for Ali
Magic XP: Yes for both
Warning: Some PG-13 sexual content
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Honathor Longreach
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Joined: Fri Mar 03, 2017 7:10 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: Farmer
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Are we there yet?
Character(s) Involved: Honathor Longreach
Quick Summary: The conclusion of a four part intro to the character. Here the character arrives to the city, after a mini adventure or two. He looks for more Ellune, to assist the single confused Ellune that he met a few threads ago. He also again looks for a healer. At this point he's been through a few challenges looking for one, and his patience has run out.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can see. It's more a casual thread.
Other Notes: You'll find the previous thread link at the top of this one if you need it. The nature of the amulet I left up to you, I think this is the first loot for three of the four threads in the series.
Fame: Possibly yes.
Devotion: A small dedication to Moseke.
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Ae'garn
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Posts: 72
Joined: Fri Mar 03, 2017 7:28 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Renown: 21
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City/Area Taken Place: On the way to Scalvoris
Thread Name: Wetward We Are!
Character(s) Involved: Ae'garn
Quick Summary: Ae'garn and the priest board the ship to Scalvoris, having no money, they are roped into paying for their journey by helping make up the crew, which is lacking in numbers.
Requested Knowledge: Seafaring | Endurance (perhaps) | Writing | Deception | Anything you see.
Other Notes: First part of a longer series. As usual with an Ae'garn thread, expect it to drift anywhere.
Fame: No
Devotion: Yes, a few immortals, as always.
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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