Completed Review Requests

Look at all we did!!

0th of Cylus 0

For completed review request threads only.

Moderators: Staff, Peer Reviewer, Wiki Worker, 18+ Peer Reviewer

User avatar
Padraig
Approved Character
Posts: 1158
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:22 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Renown: 939
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 9

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 3.0

Scalvoris: Scalvoris Town:
Thread Name: It's a Dog's Life
Character(s) Involved: Faith and Padraig
Quick Summary: Faith and Padraig take their new nightpup to a puppy training class
Requested Knowledge: Whatever seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Don't think so
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Nope

Thanks!
Image
word count: 55
User avatar
Kaladis Anar
Approved Character
Posts: 326
Joined: Thu Mar 02, 2017 5:41 pm
Race: Eídisi
Profession: Apprentice Blacksmith
Renown: -5
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Contribution

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki
Thread Name: Go Blow your own Horn why don’t You.
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Learning the Horn (Carnyx, long celtic horn), and the Frame Drum (Open back hand drum)
Requested Knowledge: Musical: Carnyx Horn, Frame Drum | Nashaki Lore: Blue Snake Tattoo Origin | NPCs: Shinvar, Bombast, | Locations: Bombast's Shop and Teaching Rooms
Other Notes: Technical music thread covering the basics of both horn and drum. I debited myself 2gn for the lesson, if you think its worth more let me know please.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
ImageYndira
Last edited by Kaladis Anar on Thu Mar 30, 2017 7:34 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 101
Image
NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
User avatar
Kaladis Anar
Approved Character
Posts: 326
Joined: Thu Mar 02, 2017 5:41 pm
Race: Eídisi
Profession: Apprentice Blacksmith
Renown: -5
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Contribution

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki Outskirts
Thread Name: A Time for Training
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Training Abrogation with his mentor Ralari. Kaladis undertakes a shadow walk at the end, a rite of alignment with Audrae.
Requested Knowledge: Abrogation | Discipline | Intelligence | Necromancy | Spirits: Reflective Shadow | Locations: Place of Practice
Other Notes: I left the two items of loot at the end vague, I was hoping for one being the gift of sight in the dark ;). Up to you what the items were ultimately. I am working off the pm of Abrogation Mal kindly gave me, so it might be hit and miss when the new write up is finalized.
Fame: No
Devotion: Yes a Shadow Walk to Audrae and a heavy emphasis on the immortal.
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: None

As always thanks to whoever picks up these two, much appreciated.
 ! Message from: Plague
Review pending.
word count: 148
Image
NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
User avatar
Andráska Venora
Approved Character
Posts: 462
Joined: Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:23 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Political Figurehead
Renown: 247
Character Sheet
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 6

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: Garden Confessional
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: After a beating from his father, Solomon (his sword fighting instructor) gives Andraska a lesson on immortals and seeking your own truths, and not to be fooled by the harsh words (or hands) of others.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see.
Other Notes: Didn't really have anything particular in mind, but I wanted to implement the fable/folktale for the Cylus 717 challenge into a thread.
Fame: Not sure.
Devotion: Pier and Pre?
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Suggestions of abuse. Minimal cursing.
ImageKaladis
word count: 101
User avatar
Anos
Approved Character
Posts: 92
Joined: Tue Jan 24, 2017 4:46 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Monster Hunter
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris
Thread Name: [Bounty Part 3] What good is a Rescuer who Becomes a Victim
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: Anos gets captured, tortured, then saved by a member of the Elements
Requested Knowledge: Discipline/Endurance/Some about Vri
Other Notes: Short little thread, just finishing off a bounty and the beginning of getting hired by the Elements.
Fame: Some positive for leading the Elements to One Eyed Jake
Devotion: Yes
Warning: Torture isnt described, but the aftereffects are, so be warned. I didn't go too in depth, howver.
ImageKaladis
word count: 96
Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he does not become a monster. And if you gaze into the abyss long enough, the abyss will gaze back into you
User avatar
Lei'lira
Posts: 652
Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:41 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Farmer
Renown: 267
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 8

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere/Andaris
Thread Name: The Marking of a Slave
Character(s) Involved: Lei'lira, Eri, and Teirue (Eri and Teirue are NPCs)
Quick Summary: Since Lei'lira is unable to free Eriana, she registers her as a slave and has her marked as such.
Requested Knowledge: Any that apply; maybe some medicine and location knowledges?
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: Maybe positive fame for helping Eri?
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: It isn't graphic, but Eri was branded three times.
ImageYndira
word count: 89
User avatar
Varthakh
Approved Character
Posts: 1311
Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:44 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Jeger
Renown: 580
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 8

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: [Mature] Oops
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgar sterilises and tends to a wound that he forgot to treat after being bit by a boar.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Literally just because it can't be assumed that frid wouldn't sit there and watch his wound get infected.
Fame: Any
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Cursing and graphic descriptions of the treatment including stitches, disinfecting, bleeding.
Image
word count: 77
Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
-- Bertrand Russell
User avatar
Vivian Shiryu
Approved Character
Posts: 562
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2016 8:14 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Renown: 498
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, Warrick, 704
Thread Name: Trouble With Bullies
Character(s) Involved: Vivian Warrick, Lei'lira Warrick
Quick Summary: Some bullies attempt to pick on Lei'lira. Vivian is having none of it. And there's a snowball fight.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever
Other Notes: We'd like the rocks as loot, please.
Fame: If any can be gained, I'd be surprised.
Devotion: Nein
Magic XP: Nyet
Warning: Not really.

Image
word count: 73
Please send all PM's to Basilisk.
User avatar
Kaladis Anar
Approved Character
Posts: 326
Joined: Thu Mar 02, 2017 5:41 pm
Race: Eídisi
Profession: Apprentice Blacksmith
Renown: -5
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Contribution

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki
Thread Name: A Tale of Two Jewels, Meet your Makers [Part 1]
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Called to answer, again, for the loss of the research team by their employers the Makers. They enlist the help of an unlikely musician to try and track down the identity of Laventia's apprentice. They use the same tattoo learned about here and seen here.
Requested Knowledge: Intelligence | Business Management or Negotiation (Haggling) | Persuasion | Deception | Tactics | Psychology | Storytelling
Other Notes: This is a non combat intrigue thread, I am going heavily for things like persuasion, detection, deception, subtle conversation cues, him hiding his motives etc.
Fame: Yes, Negative, you'll see why at the end. The plot continues on from here if you need it. A few weeks later.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No mature content, a heavy NPC thread.
Image
Last edited by Kaladis Anar on Mon Apr 24, 2017 8:20 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 147
Image
NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
User avatar
Kaladis Anar
Approved Character
Posts: 326
Joined: Thu Mar 02, 2017 5:41 pm
Race: Eídisi
Profession: Apprentice Blacksmith
Renown: -5
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Contribution

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 3.0

City/Area Taken Place: The Hotlands
Thread Name: Prospecting for an Enclave
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Two Eidisi go deep into the cold Cylus desert and try to found their first arcane research site. They battle against cold, fatigue and make a small impression into the sandstone.
Requested Knowledge: Mining | Necromancy: Swarm Handling | Endurance | Strength | Discipline | Field Craft: Windbreaks | Intelligence | Resistance (Cold)
Other Notes: Loot of some sandstone would be great for them to cart back. They probably recovered a fair amount but also it isn't probably that valuable in the desert. Some estimation of stone price here would be useful, thanks.
Fame: No
Devotion: Yes - Audrae Dedication.
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: No

Appreciate whoever takes the time for these two. :)
Image
Last edited by Kaladis Anar on Sun Apr 23, 2017 10:54 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 125
Image
NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
Locked Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Archive Review Request Threads”