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Niv
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City/Area Taken Place:Scalvoris
Thread Name: Cup of Tea and a Good Book
Character(s) Involved: Niv and Padraig
Quick Summary: Niv and Padraig study in the Scholars Nook.
Requested Knowledge: Chemistry, Physics, Research, and Climbing for Niv, Teaching and Research for Padraig for sure but also some Chemistry stuff I think too. Language knowledges are much appreciated for Niv
Other Notes: Nope
Fame: Padraig was very nice and helpful to Niv
Devotion: nope
Magic XP: nope
Warning: nope
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 2.0

Scalvoris

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Solo - jus' Faith.
She's researching Famula and Vri and who their allies and enemies are. She comes across Aelig as Famula's enemy and that makes her totes emosh, she has a chat with the resident ghost and comes to a conclusion of sorts about freedom and choices.
Knowledge: Research, please. Knowledge about the relevant Immortals.
Fame: Don't think so
Magic: Nope.
Devotion - it's kind of all about her devotion, really.
Warning: Don't think so
Thanks for reviewing my weird little pc. :)
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Ae'garn
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: A Busy Walk Through a Quiet Life
Character(s) Involved: Ae'garn
Quick Summary: Ae'garn goes to by some potions for the priest. Ends up running across roof tops, and eventually having a small prayer.
Requested Knowledge: Acrobatics | Local Lore.
Other Notes: Simple Thread.
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nearly always possible in his threads, balanced by the fact it is to multiple immortals who often don't like each other.
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: No, and if you are new to reviewing it's a simple one to start on.
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Xander Andaris
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Krome] Fortune favours the fit
Character(s) Involved: Just Xander
Quick Summary: Xander does some exercise and starts making some back up and possible contingency plans.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen, running and maybe endurance, possibly some tactics or politics. It is up to the reviewer really.
Other Notes: Thanks for the review.
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: All good, it is only a solo and kinda skill based I tried to make it less boring by not just being running so I hope its all good and doesn't put you to sleep.
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Welcome to the Request Thread! Here you may make requests for your finished threads to be reviewed. The Prophets here are more than happy to help! Posting your review requests here makes it easy for all Prophets and Reviewers to keep track of who asked for what and when so that we can all work together to ensure that your threads are reviewed quickly and fairly.

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 3.0

Scalvoris

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Padraig & Faith
Faith's new professor tells her that she's not very clever - he's going to be a bit of a perennial villain in their lives for a bit, so we introduce him here. They chat and get bordeline smoochy.
Knowledge: as seen
Fame: as seen
Devotion: as seen
Magic: nurp.
Warning: extreme cuddling, but the dog gets in the way... no warning!
Thanks for reviewing! :)

First one! :)
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Doran
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City/Area Taken Place: Emea
Thread Name: In the Dark of the Night
Character(s) Involved: Doran, Vega
Quick Summary: Doran and Vega dream that they are father and daughter.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can see.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No.
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Eddrick Brodon
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City/Area Taken Place: Hotlands
Thread Name: Skeletons in the Closet
Character(s) Involved: Eddrick Brodon and Kaladis Anar
Quick Summary: Eddrick tracks undead, and runs across them attacking Kaladis.
A bond and new member in the 'Rhakrii Raiders' faction is formed.
Requested Knowledge: Eddrick asks for Kaladis' PC and race, Immortal Vri (should have it already, really), Location: Solace Rock.
Skills: Ball and Chain, Hunting (Tracking), Negotiation, Leadership and Storytelling.
Kaladis asks for Eddrick's PC, NPC 'Korieji', NPC 'Reader of the Sands', Immortal Vri, Locations: Solace Rock, The Boneyard
Skills: Mining, Blades, Pickaxe (probably 'bludgeon')
Other Notes: Kaladis discovers that his necromancy does not work on these particular undead, because of their origin.
But it would still be knowledge gained, I believe.
Also, that makes three PC members in the faction WOOHOO!
Fame: Probably not
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Necromancy/Bonesong for Kaladis
Warning: Nah
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Vera
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City/Area Taken Place: The Infirmary, Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Fiddle Web
Character(s) Involved: Vera, NPC
Quick Summary: Vera studies and experiments upon a patient utilizing her blessing.
Requested Knowledge: Musical Enchantment lores, Psychology, Writing
Other Notes: Whisper, Do Not Touch. Old Blessing system, before Devotion was implemented. Please do not penalize me for not having the devotion for the ability she used.
Fame: -2 Magic, anything else
Devotion: Sintra: +5 (Manipulation, manipulating the man's emotions?), +2 (Prayer to Sintra, Labrae)
Magic XP: No
Warning: N/A
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Vera
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City/Area Taken Place: The Infirmary, Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Spiderbite
Character(s) Involved: Vera, NPC
Quick Summary: Vera practices Webweaving, gets some exercise, and buys a dagger. Basic thread.
Requested Knowledge: Basic Webweaving Lores, various fitness lores, anything you see pertaining to the purchase of the dagger, such as a Dagger lore from the demonstration.
Other Notes: Whisper, Do Not Touch. Old Blessing system, before Devotion was implemented. Please do not penalize me for not having the devotion for the ability she used.
Fame: -2 Magic?
Devotion: Sintra +2 (Prayer to Sintra, Labrae)
Magic XP: Yes, Webweaving (From Lethroda, since Exp can be allocated to it)
Warning: N/A
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