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Alexa
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Joined: Tue Jan 10, 2017 9:37 pm
Race: Naerikk
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City/Area Taken Place:Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: By Axe and Shield
Character(s) Involved: Alexa
Quick Summary: With her familiar's help, Alexa works on honing her shield and axe skills.
Requested Knowledge: Shield. Axe. Tactics. Strength. Endurance. Etc.
Other Notes: Thanks for the review!
Fame: Probably none.
Devotion: Don't think so.
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None.
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Honathor Longreach
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Joined: Fri Mar 03, 2017 7:10 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: Farmer
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: A Mighty Fine Mess
Character(s) Involved: Honathor
Quick Summary: Grappling, Drinking, Meeting an Old Friend.
Requested Knowledge: Grappling. Examples: Bear Hugs, Head Locks, Hip Toss, Taking the Leg, Getting the Inside Grip. Characters: Dowebee, Tobathon. Immortals: Ilaren's Nosehairs. Locations: Bales of Ale, Dispute Ring. Anything you can think of.
Other Notes: Simple Thread.
Fame: Probably Not.
Devotion: No. Ilaren is the immortal of brawling so I don't think she'd care, up to you.
Magic XP: No
Warning: Nothing Much. PG Wrestling. PG Cursing. Relieves himself on a tree.
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Gangui
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Posts: 483
Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2017 11:03 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Faction Leader
Renown: 196
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City/Area Taken Place:Eztos
Thread Name: [Losten Armory]Mere Armor Doesn't Make a Warrior
Character(s) Involved:Solo
Quick Summary:Gangui is fitted for armor and takes on the new responsibility.
Requested Knowledge:Whatever you feel is best.
Other Notes: None
Fame:Do I get any for making my intent to be armed known despite not being in the army?
Devotion:n.a
Magic XP: n/a
Warning: n/a
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Gangui
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City/Area Taken Place:Farmlands near Eztos
Thread Name: Farmer unions have no names
Character(s) Involved:Lecia, Gangui
Quick Summary:Corrupt state negligence leads to political action by common citizens.
Requested Knowledge:Whatever you think we earned.
Other Notes: Story will be continued in another thread.
Fame: I think we both deserve fame for our words/actions in front of the audience of farmers.
Devotion: n/a
Magic XP: n/a
Warning: n/a
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Andráska Venora
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Profession: Political Figurehead
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora
Thread Name: Embrace The Pain Pt. I
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Andraska continues wanting to kill his father. In case he fails, he trains in a prison cell, simulating torture and an interrogation.
Requested Knowledge: Endurance, resistance, discipline, torture
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Slightly graphic. Gets his legs/arms beaten, and waterboarded.
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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Emea
Thread Name: Dreaming of Something New
Character(s) Involved: Nixie & Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: A sweet dream, reminiscent of The Little Mermaid
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see.
Other Notes: Got cut short.
Fame: Dunno.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Safe n' sound
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Vega
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Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Dweeb
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Desnind

Work is a Four Letter Word
Arlo & Vega
The pair of them have been hired to go hunting (job thread) ~ they go into the woods and they have slim pickings in terms of hunting ~ faced with the prospect of returning home empty handed, they realise that they're lost. They bicker a bit and then it all comes good when they find turkeys and eggs.
Knowledge: Hunting, Fieldcraft, Bow - that kind of stuff?
Devotion: Yes, please - Arlo devotes the journey to Cassion, we find new places, get lost, which turns out well in the end.
Fame: Prolly not
Magic: Nope
Note: We ended the thread with them still lost and having chosen a direction. We did that because it had gotten to ten posts and we're just about to start the second bit of it - and also, because this first bit is the job thread bit of it too.

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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Scalvoris:
Reconnecting
Jus' Faith
Faith approaches the Order of the Adunih now that she's moved to Scalvoris, to volunteer and get a mentor. It's a sort of meet and greet, really.
Knowledge: Specific to the Order on Scalv and to Galena (her new mentor) would be great, please!
Devotion: Famula, if you see it.
Magic: Nope
Fame: Volunteering her time, I guess.
Warning: Nope
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Lei'lira
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City/Area Taken Place: Emea
Thread Name: Dancing in the Forest of Wonders
Character(s) Involved: Lei'lira
Quick Summary: Lei'lira meets an old friend and dances with him in a dream.
Requested Knowledge: Anything that applies.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: Nothing I can think of.
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Honathor Longreach
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Joined: Fri Mar 03, 2017 7:10 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: Farmer
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Mending Fences, Cold Ground
Character(s) Involved: Honathor
Quick Summary: Working for his old friend Fingal the farmer. The thread introduces Fingal, Ingamas and the other farmhands.
He learns lumberjacking, fence building. He remembers a small part of one of his past reborn lives. They have an encounter with a predator. To be continued in part 2.
Requested Knowledge: Carpentry. Examples: Diagonal Fence Building, How to Reinforce a Fence. Field Craft. Examples: How to build a fence directly from a tree, how to Safely Cut down a tree. Endurance and Strength where you feel appropriate. Anything you like related to animals, npcs, his former life Alondasath, locations, or the predator.
Other Notes: Left in an obvious place to continue a part 2.
Fame: Possibly a small boost from the farm and warning the neighbors.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None. PG Described Foot Injury. A few NPCs to keep track of.
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