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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome
Thread Name: May We Meet Again
Character(s) Involved: Alexa and Sky
Quick Summary: Sky goes after Alexa in hopes of validating affections he elicited through manipulation.
Requested Knowledge: At your discretion.
Fame: Don't think so.
Devotion: Probably no Karem for Alexa, but Sintra for Sky.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Nothing.
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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki
Thread Name: It Only Gets Hotter Yet. - Thread Link
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis (Solo)
Quick Summary: Arrives at the city. Gets rejected by several smithies. Gets accepted by a lone blacksmith. Gets more training as an apprentice, he had 10 skill previous. The smithy isn't what it seems. Kaladis is offered a deal. Unknown to him, yet, the smithy is tied to a hidden group which operates here, and in a place which isn't very popular, more to come on that, to be revealed in stages. With approval of the group's nature as it is designed.
Requested Knowledge: Apprentice Blacksmithing: I covered a foundation, desert fuel sources, basic temperature information, sorting and readying iron, cleaning up, ash for cleaning your hands when there is no water, keeping the forge at the right temperature, grey powder to mask the smell etc. Other than that, The unnamed Smithy Location and the White Solace Inn, Tavern (or equivalent) location would be good.
Other Notes: I researched the blacksmithing prior, especially in desert locations, and except the grey powder which is a fictional aromatic substance, everything uses real world examples.
Fame: Your discretion. Perhaps negative fame, given the group that owns the smithy is clandestine, and this one isn't all that welcome.
Devotion: He gave recognition to Audrae for his journey, for the fear along it, and navigating the shadows of Cylus.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No. There is dung shoveling :) but that was my first poke at his pride.
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Last edited by Kaladis Anar on Thu Mar 09, 2017 12:50 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 255
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Kaladis Anar
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City/Area Taken Place: Nashaki
Thread Name: Of Serpent, Song and Swords [Part 1] - Thread Link
Character(s) Involved: Kaladis (Solo)
Quick Summary: Meeting the Makers, a secret society in Nashaki.
Requested Knowledge: Longswords. Pommel Grip, A Basic Fighting Stance, The three basic attacks - stab, slice and cut. The safe distance to draw your weapon. Anything else you like. Some examples: Knowledge of the rarity of trees, and the guarded healing garden. Knowledge of the Maker's Hall. Knowledge of Aaranius. Knowledge of an Enemy he made at the garden, for later. Fledgling Knowledge of Secret Societies. His Necromancy Mentor Ralari.
Other Notes: The Makers I will be submitting for official approval, if I use them again. For the purposes of the thread review, I picture them a stabilizing force for neutrality within the city.
Fame: I am not sure, you'll have to decide. If there was a neutral version of fame, I'd say yes a minor blip.
Devotion: There is a minor reference to Audrae and Vhalar in his thoughts, but that's about it.
Magic XP: No
Warning: No. A complicated plot beginning, with a lot of plotholes to be filled as I go.
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Last edited by Kaladis Anar on Sat Mar 11, 2017 8:49 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 198
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NPCs: Ralari - Alaya| Themes: Social - Dreams - Nightmares
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Andaris, Rynmere

A Brief Reunion
Tristan Venora, Faith
Faith visits Tristan to say goodbye as she and Padraig are leaving for Scalvoris the next trial.
Knowledge: As seen
Devotion: As seen
Fame: There was mutual gift giving.
Magic: Nope
No warning.
Thanks for reviewing!
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Finn
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Festivities and Dance
Character(s) Involved: Finn and Symbri
Quick Summary: It was meant to be a thread where the two met. Unfortunately, due to inactivity it had to be finished and closed
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: It's tied up rather abruptly after sitting around for quite a while, but it was time to clear it off the list.
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: New Eden
Character(s) Involved: Alistair and Finn
Quick Summary: A thread where they were meant to meet and engage in some religion discussion that would question Finn's belief in Ashan.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Tied up suddenly as it needed to be cleared of the list for long period of inactivity.
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Xander Andaris
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Profession: Single father | Duke of Andaris
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Household
Character(s) Involved: Just Xander
Quick Summary: Xander checks his servants are doing their allocated work. And checks his father isn't doing something he shouldn't.
Requested Knowledge: Leadership maybe, and anything else seen.
Other Notes: it's not super long but it gives a little insight into Xander's life and sets the ball rolling in a plot that might come out in the future.
Fame: don't think so
Devotion: nope
Magic XP: nope
Warning: no mature tag but some implied sexual misconduct nothing serious and rather tame. Should be fine for all reviewers.
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Next Trial
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Ali initiates Fridgar into Rupturing, and the two learn that they love each other
Requested Knowledge: Rupturing knowledges for Frid please - just about the initiation process should be good
Other Notes: Thanks!
Fame: Any
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes for both Ali and Frid
Warning: Homosexuals! Gasp!
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Rharne,
A Much Needed Talk
Kura, Padraig, Faith
Faith is pregnant, Kura visits, they dissect the situation and make plans. They talk about slavery, childbirth, the Eternal Empire, monogamy and marriage.
Knowledge: as seen.
Fame: as seen
Devotion: as seen.
Magic: nurp.
Thanks so much for reviewing.
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Varthakh
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: [Mature] Acquiring the Totem: Bronze Boar
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgar buys a bronze boar, boar escapes, fridgar cries, an npc joined in and helped him out, he took the boar home, gobbled it up and made a totem.
Requested Knowledge: Becoming
Other Notes: uhhh... Thanks for reviewing!
Fame: Probably none? I think? Though probably negative for acts of magic
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Yes please
Warning: Yes, gore, swearing (maybe), Fridgar being a weirdo, etc.
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Sky
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Joined: Tue Apr 19, 2016 4:22 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Bandit
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City/Area Taken Place:Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: Of Strength and Servitude
Character(s) Involved:Sky
Quick Summary: Sky Kills some people, and frees someone
Requested Knowledge:Guess hammer-fisting with the club... uh... Logistics maybe?
Other Notes: I tried to keep the gore minor
Fame: Dunno if positive or negative?
Devotion: Don't think so.
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Some killing but the gore is very minimal.
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