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Alistair
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Review Requests 2.0

City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Shield
Character(s) Involved: Jericho, Alistair
Quick Summary: Jericho and Ali defend an orphanage from criminals, and Alistair decides to take the boy under his wing
Requested Knowledge: Combat knowledges
Other Notes: Thanks bae
Fame: Any
Devotion: Doubt it
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Violent
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Doran
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Krome] The art of the blade
Character(s) Involved: Doran, Xander Krome
Quick Summary: Doran tutors Xander in using a longsword.
Requested Knowledge: Blades, mostly.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Up to you.
Devotion: Probably not.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 2.0

Scalvoris

First Impressions
Faith attends her first trial of class at the Scalvoris Campus of the Viden Academy. She meets one nice professor, the other one not so much
Knowledge: as seen. The only thing I'd like would be stuff on Sev'ryn neurology.
Fame: As seen
Devotion: Don't think so?
Magic: no
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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: Working as One
Character(s) Involved: Alexa and Sky
Quick Summary: Sky, Alexa, and Venom set out on Ankila's first collaborative hunt.
Requested Knowledge: Hunting, Ranged Combat, Bears, Deer, Etc.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: Yes. Karem for Alexa, Sintra for Sky.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No.
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Niv
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City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris
Thread Name: Begin Again
Character(s) Involved: Niv and Anos
Quick Summary: Niv and Anos do a bit of studying in the Scalvoris library
Requested Knowledge: Niv: mostly I'd like some knowledge on the common language, linguistics if possible, climbing, stealth, Alchemy(maybe) and research. Anos: would like Knowledge on Research, Magic and Tunawa. I think we both want some knowledge on the Scalvoris library, and Knowledgesia.
Other Notes: nope
Fame: Anos defended Niv and let her study with him.
Devotion: Not that I know of.
Magic XP: nope.
Warning: Naw it's tame as hell.
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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: A Boy and His Blade
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Andraska receives a sword fighting lesson.
Requested Knowledge: Blades, Strength, Tactics and/or Endurance
Other Notes: Nice and sweet. Simple training thread where Andras learns a lot of sword fighting.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: You're safe... for now.
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Anos
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City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris
Thread Name: What did I stumble Into?
Character(s) Involved:Anos and Atashi
Quick Summary: Continuation of previous thread here. We find a tortured girl, quiz the captives and prepare to turn the woman over to the authorities.
Requested Knowledge:Investigation, Detection, Intimidation
Fame: Positive for both (Saved a girl, brought the girl to the authorities, successfully arrested several lawbreakers and brought them to the authorities,etc).
Devotion: Atashi for Ethyl
Warning: Discussion of the wounds of a woman after torture, some threats and intimidation. Not too bad, but not G-rated either.
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Varthakh
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City/Area Taken Place: Sabaissant, Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Mature] Progress
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgar teaches Ali about becoming following a sucky night in Ali's office, Ali gets creepeed out, Fridgar gets creeped out, They mutually agree that becoming is creepy and decide its not for Alistair, Alistair agrees to teach Fridgar rupturing, Alistair hugs Fridgar bare chest, Fridgar ploughs Alistair (fade to black)
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: I'm so sorry, Rey'na
Fame: Acts of magic?
Devotion: Alistair for Syroa
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: I'd planned for Fridgar to be a potty mouth when I tagged this mature, and the gruesome transformations too. It quickly turned into something so much more deserving of a mature tag than that!
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Finn
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Profession: Priest and doctor assistant
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Once Upon a Time
Character(s) Involved: Yrmellyn and Finn
Quick Summary: How they met
Requested Knowledge: Anything the reviewer sees
Fame: There might be some, not sure.
Devotion: Most likely none.
Magic XP: Definitely none.
Warning: Nothing.
Note: Apologies for the fugly looking template for Finn. I haven't been able to fix my photobucket problem nor fix the templates themselves yet.

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Scalvoris

The FInal Step
Faith (solo)
Having previously found some bones which had been used for Necromancy, Faith brings them to the Glass Temple in Scalvoris to ensure that they get a proper burial. She visits the shrines to Famula and Vri whilst she's there and meets Stan, the Tunawa who's in charge of the place.
Knowledge: I'd like knowledge on Scalvoris funerary customs, please (durn weird pc, I know) - other than that, as seen.
Devotion: Yes please, Famula and Vri please and thank you.
Fame: as you see fit.
Magic: Nope
Warning: It deals with death and necromancy and loss. Nothing overstated, but it does.
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