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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome
Thread Name: Howling for Home
Character(s) Involved: Alexa
Quick Summary: A short continuation from Cry Wolf wherein the pup is returned to its pack.
Requested Knowledge: Wolves, Velduris, etc.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: Don't think so.
Devotion: Yes, Karem. (Helping an injured wolf, killing prey in one shot, and etc.)
Magic XP: None.
Warning: None.
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Varthakh
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City/Area Taken Place: Woodlands, Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Mature] Acquiring the Totem: Ryon
Character(s) Involved: Just me!
Quick Summary: Fridgar stumbles across a stray Ryon, thinks it's his master and accidentally angers it, kills it, eats it and makes it into a totem.
Requested Knowledge: Becoming, medicine
Other Notes: I know Ryon are typically in Warrick and Venora, but the write up states that they don't head up north due to the cold, but I figured that the south is just as cold as a little higher north during Cylus and the Ryon got lost.
Fame: Any
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Yes, lots of becoming. Echoing, chrysalis, blending, basic transformation...
Warning: Gore, sorta. Described the totem creating with detail
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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Barges, Burns, and Boxes
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin witnesses the result of a Flaying attack and retrieves a mysterious dangerous package as well as sees an old acquaintance!
Requested Knowledge: Flaying stuff, well making stuff, Gavrel - ALIVE?!
Other Notes:
Fame: Not much I don't think.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Vega
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Review Requests 2.0

Desnind:

Bits of Bob & Bob's in Bits
Arlo and Vega
Having vanquished a beastie in a previous thread they clean it off and get the useful bits. They also squabble quite a lot.
Knowledge: Fieldcraft, please. Other than that, as seen.
Fame: As seen
Devotion: As seen, don't think so but Arlo is Jesine and Cassion and Vega is U'frek and Xiur.
Magic: nope
Warning: erm - it's cleaning a dead animal so a bit gross, but not really.

Thank you for the review!
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: Set Awry
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Xander
Quick Summary: Ali and Xander formulate plans and share an awkward kiss
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks bae
Fame: Idk
Devotion: Doubt it
Magic XP: Naw
Warning: Naw
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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Body in Motion
Character(s) Involved: Alexa
Quick Summary: Alexa tries to work on her physique and develop into her new role.
Requested Knowledge: Strength, running, endurance, etc.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: Not likely, but Karem.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Nope!
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Duncan Oisin
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: The Importance of Using Protection
Character(s) Involved: Duncan, Syhera
Quick Summary: Abandoned, didn't get too far
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you're capable of digging out
Other Notes: Sorry this is unfinished!
Fame: None?
Devotion: Nope.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: This does take place in a Whore House, but nothing explicit happens.
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Duncan Oisin
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Books and Beauties
Character(s) Involved: Duncan, Celeste
Quick Summary: Abandoned, didn't get too far
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you're capable of digging out
Other Notes: Sorry this is unfinished!
Fame: None?
Devotion: Nope.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: None.
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"Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night,
and when you move fall like a thunderbolt"
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Duncan Oisin
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: To Catch A Cook
Character(s) Involved: Duncan, Liarra
Quick Summary: Abandoned, didn't get too far
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you're capable of digging out
Other Notes: Sorry this is unfinished!
Fame: None?
Devotion: Nope.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: None.
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word count: 49
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"Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night,
and when you move fall like a thunderbolt"
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Professor Amputate
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Faith
Quick Summary: Ali and Faith meet and Ali allows Faith to attend university courses
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: If you want, I can add a wrap-up post. Just let me know, please.
Fame: Any
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Nah

Sorry, I ended up abandoning this thread. This was totally my bad - I just got overwhelmed and a bit stressed out around this time. I messaged Faith about putting it up for grading.
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