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Vega
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Desnind

Flips, Trips, Bends & Breaks
Arlo Creede and Vega
Arlo teaches Vega some acrobatics. They maintain their hat-war. Vega wins.
Knowledge: Acrobatics (both), teaching (for Arlo), maybe a little bit of linguistics? As seen!
Magic: nope
Fame: It's very nice of him to teach her.
Devotion: Nope
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Rharne

A light in the darkness
Faith - solo - job thread.
Working as a medic, Faith spends about 2/3 of this thread starting her quest to save Nir'wei and then bloodletting on a woman who needed it.
Magic: nope
Devotion: yes please - she devotes the search for a cure to an incurable disease to Famula and Vri and bloodlets in Famula's name.
Knowledge: Surgery and Medicine, please? (Mostly medicine, there, I think).
Thanks in advance!
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Adrienna
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City/Area Taken Place: Athart
Thread Name: Prized Possession
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: How Adrienna got her prized possession, the stiletto dagger.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you see.
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Negative most likely
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Vulgarities
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Eddrick Brodon
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City/Area Taken Place: Hotlands

Thread Name: Bringing Down the House
Character(s) Involved: Eddrick and Adrienna
Quick Summary: Eddrick anticipates treachery in an agreement with a young merchant from a past thread, and is not disappointed. His handling of the problem serves to recruit a new member.
Requested Knowledge: Brodon - Unarmed (Brawling), Knife (dagger), Acting, Intimidation, Negotiation
Adrienna - Axe, Negotiation, Detection, Intimidation. And of course, anything else you see.
Other Notes: Adrienna is joining the Rhakrii faction. I just need one more to make it official. :D
Fame: Negative. Chanutti will surely need to give an account of her new husband's death.
Devotion: pffft...I invite the Immortals to enjoy intercourse with themselves.
Magic XP: Nope, none of that sissy stuff.
Warning: Well-deserved bloodshed, but nothing else
Additional note: I am hoping that there will be assumption of 400gn loot off the wagons in the caravan, or the stripping of Kalid'hi's guards. This is not anything I will be putting in my ledger, it is to complete the 800gn that is required as start-up money to prep a PC-run faction. I already have the first 400 on my CS.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Rharne

The Diagnosis
Faith and Nir'wei
Having experienced headaches and other symptoms for some time, Nir'wei comes to see Faith. She realises that he is terminally ill, although she doesn't tell him yet but she treats the immediate symptoms.
Fame: I think Faith does a few good deeds, in fairness.
Devotion: Famula and Vri for Faith please.
Knowledge: as seen, but any medicine for Faith please (I know I have lots, but she's pursuing her qualification at Viden Academy so needs it!)
Also: Faith uses the ability "Servant's Mark" from her Zuuda blessing. Any and all knowledge about that is very gratefully received, please? Thanks!
Warning: This is a thread about a former slave who finds out that her friend who she loves like a brother is terminally ill and he bleeds out of every available facial orifice. It's not a happy thread.
Thanks for reviewing! :D
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Rharne

Self Fulfilling Prophecy
Kura and Faith
They go clothes shopping, pour their hearts out (Faith) and sort things out (Kura).
Knowledge: as seen
Devotion: as seen
Magic: nurp
Fame: Kura helps out a complete emotional wreck. Has to be worth some fame!
Thanks for reviewing!
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"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

~ Rharne HQ
Dust Quarter Satellite Clinic ~ Order of the Adunih~Soup Kitchen & Community Center
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Zvezdana Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Go the Distance
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Zvezdana
Quick Summary: All the dirty laundry is finally aired between the two of them. Secrets are shared and reconciliation is had.
Requested Knowledge: This is really at the discretion of the reader. Alistair knowledges for Zvezdana and Zvezdana knowledges for Alistair would be grand +/- some magic knowledge for both of them.
Other Notes: We hope you enjoy reading this thread as much as we had writing it!
Fame: I don't think Alistair deserves negative fame as Zvezdana was neither fearful and actually accepted him for who he is (a mage).
Devotion: Maybe some Ilaren for Zvez? Maybe some Syroa (positive or negative as secrets were shared). Reader discretion.
Magic XP: Alistair probably gets some.
Warning: Nope.
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Deceased. Wrapping up open threads.
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Woe
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris Dungeons, Rynmere
Thread Name: Other end of the Chain
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: Job thread as a jailer. Woe plays with a prisoner's head a bit before framing him for resisting escort as he's dropped off at the Courthouse.
Requested Knowledge: Torture, Psychology, Deception. As seen.
Other Notes: It's pretty short.
Fame: As seen.
Devotion: As seen for Sintra.
Magic XP: no
Warning: References to torture, actual light torture, references to rat feces, mind games. Maybe one or two cuss words.
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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome
Thread Name: Something Haunts These Woods
Character(s) Involved: Alexa and Sky
Quick Summary: Alexa is kidnapped by Sky and his pet mandrill
Requested Knowledge: Anything you might deem appropriate.
Other Notes: Thanks for the review in advance!
Fame: Whatever you deem acceptable.
Devotion: Yes, Karem for Alexa (surviving a difficult situation, hunting evil people, etc.). Yes, Sintra for Sky (maybe Manipulation of Others, etc.)
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Mild mature content. Violence, some torture, etc.
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Avrae Kyric
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Not You Again
Character(s) Involved: Alistair Venora, Avrae Kyric, and Ailluin Yelven.
Quick Summary: Avrae and Alistair meet again at the bounty board, where they have a brief fight over a bounty, resulting in Avrae punching Alistair and then Alistair going savage on both Ailluin and Avrae.
Requested Knowledge: Unarmed, Strength? Knowledge about each other, too. And anything you find.
Other Notes: Fun thread to do.
Fame: Whatever is seen.
Devotion: Probably yes for Alistair, who worships Syroa. Whatever is seen, though.
Magic XP: Yes for Alistair, no for Ailluin and Avrae.
Warning: Quite a bit of swearing, otherwise is fine.
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