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Varthakh
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, beyond the walls somewhere
Thread Name: The Boulder Thread Part1: A Theory of Strength
Character(s) Involved: Only me :)
Quick Summary: Fridgar agrees to do some mercenary work and escorts a miner dude to some cave he thinks holds promise.
Requested Knowledge: Strength! Strength regarding diet, form, methods of exercise! All the strength! PLEASE GIVE ME STRENGTH!
Other Notes: I did a bunch of research OOC for this thread, regarding the strength stuff.
Fame: Any!
Devotion: Nope.
Magic XP: Nuh-uh, can't become and get strength knowledge.
Warning: Fridgar gets molested.
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Yanahalqah
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Yvithia's fakes
Character(s) Involved: Yanahalqah, Sintih
Quick Summary: Yana and Sintih hang out together
Requested Knowledge: Maybe on conversation/social skills? And on each other?
Other Notes: Neither of us are really good at this sort of thread, so... yeah. We did our best though!
Fame: Doubt it.
Devotion: Maybe Sintih for kind of praying to Aelig? (He calls him Father)
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Nope.
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"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Jachiel
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Caught in the rain
Character(s) Involved: Jachiel
Quick Summary: Jachiel takes shelter in the Rusty Anchor
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see
Other Notes: Slice of life thread, Cylus challenge prompts
Fame: Unlikely
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Very wet?
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Emea

The Festival
Faith & Niv
The pair dream about a dance and then cooking and it's a little weird and surreal.
Knowledge, Devotion, Fame: as seen
Magic: nope.
Thanks! :)
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Rorom
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'Haer and the surrounding area.
Thread Name: Netting the Surf: Take Two
Character(s) Involved: Just Rorom
Quick Summary: A job thread. Rorom is a fisherman. He goes out to sea, gets his net damaged but manages the make the haul anyways.
Requested Knowledge: Fishing stuff, hopefully, but other things as seen if any.
Other Notes: I was going to wait until it was signed off for pay, but figured I'd just put this here for review.
Fame: I don't think so.
Devotion: He made a small, ambiguous offering to what he deems the spirits or gods of the seas, or the mer. He's a bit ignorant of the immortals, so probably don't give him any devotion. Sok.
Magic XP: None.
Warning: It's pretty tame. I don't think I crossed any lines there.
Extra Note: Whosoever should give feedback and grade this thread shall forevermore be known as awesome.

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Avrae Kyric
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City/Area Taken Place: Warrick, Rynmere
Thread Name: A Student Seeking a Teacher
Character(s) Involved: Avrae and Fridgar.
Quick Summary: Back in the past, Avrae decided he wanted to learn Becoming. So he sought out Fridgar, a new Becomer himself at the time, and requested he teach him. In this thread, they met and talked a bit before planning to meet up again the next day.
Requested Knowledge: Becoming, maybe? And some knowledge about each other, as they just met.
Other Notes: Thank you for the review!
Fame: Whatever you see.
Devotion: Not that I know of.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: No warning needed.
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer/Treth
Thread Name: [Treth] Four Legged Friends
Character(s) Involved: Tei'serin Njiryn
Quick Summary: Tei'serin learns how to ride.
Requested Knowledge: I would love to get at least five mount knowledges for this since I am hoping to use it for the writing challenge. Aside from that, maybe teaching knowledges, and anything else that applies.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: If it applies.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: None used
Warning: None that I can think of.
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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Burnhan wilderness
Thread Name: Run, Girl, Run
Character(s) Involved: Alexa
Quick Summary: After Alexa's drunken father's battering of his family results in his unintentional mauling, the recent Velduris blessed girl flees her home into the wilderness only to find surviving alone will be far more challenging than ever imagined.
Requested Knowledge: Finding/creating shelter, etc.
Other Notes: Thanks for the review!
Fame: Maybe.
Devotion: Yes, Karem. (Surviving a difficult situation, etc.)
Magic XP: No.
Warning: None.
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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome wilderness
Thread Name: Nose to the Trail
Character(s) Involved: Alexa
Quick Summary: Alexa ventures out alone with her wolf to test her Velduris instincts and hunt.
Requested Knowledge: Identifying deer tracks, skinning a kill, etc.
Other Notes: Thanks for the review!
Fame: Maybe.
Devotion: Yes, Karem.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: None.
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Vega
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Desnind

Can't See The Wood

Arlo and Vega
Arlo and Vega respond to a seasonal event, go and collect wood for the city of Desnind. They discuss a strange noise Vega can hear (the beginning of her familiar quest) and find an odd old campfire. They talk about stuff.
Knowledge: As seen, please.
Devotion: Cassion & Jesine for Arlo.
Fame: Vega gives a gift, Arlo agrees to teach her some stuff. They're both doing good deeds for Desnind and doing timely delivery of goods.
Magic: nope

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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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