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Atashi
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Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2016 1:16 am
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Profession: Knight, Blacksmith
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Venora][Job Thread] A theory of Iron
Character(s) Involved: Atashi
Quick Summary: Atashi does some studying, then is interrupted to go to work
Requested Knowledge: Smithing
Other Notes: The good ol' days
Fame: Any
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: The mention of snake ass, you have been warned.
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Andráska Venora
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Posts: 462
Joined: Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:23 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Political Figurehead
Renown: 247
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora/Rynmere
Thread Name: Unwanted
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Teen Andras is late for dinner and gets disciplined.
Requested Knowledge: Endurance (choking/emotional), Discipline?
Other Notes: Short & (not so) sweet. Completes one of the thread requirements for the Cylus 717 writing challenge.
Fame: Don't think so, unfortunately.
Devotion: Not sure. Don't think so.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Some violence and cursing.
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Arlo Creede
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Link: Fair Exchange
PCs: Arlo and Vega
Summary: Vega and Arlo trade stories and snippets of common sign, talk about culture, cooking, religion, etc.
Knowledge: Cooking, storytelling, language, religion, culture
Magic: No
Devotion: Maybe for Arlo? Not sure.
Fame: Nope
Other notes: Thanks for reviewing
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Rharne

Chapter 1: Sleep
Faith and Padraig
Summary: Faith's suddenly very pregnant, the pair of them are completely unprepared. They decide they've got to do something. So they combine skills to make a cradle.
Knowledge: Carpentry, anything seen.
Devotion: As seen.
Magic: no
Fame: if seen?
Thanks for reviewing. No warning!
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Limbo
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Joined: Sat Jun 04, 2016 1:16 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Parasite
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City/Area Taken Place: Orm'del Sea
Thread Name: Every Wave a Tear /viewtopic.php?f=86&t=4768
Character(s) Involved: Syhera Ki'hadi, Kovic
Quick Summary: A vessel starts running low on supplies. Kovic starts devouring the crew and panic slowly sets in.
Requested Knowledge: Hera: Negotiation, Persuation, Investigation
Kovic: Things about his Mortalborn abilities, Stealth, Discipline. Disguise? Tactics? Endurance?

Whatever you find, really.
Other Notes: I hope it's a good read.
Fame: *shrugs*
Devotion: Syroa for Kovic, please!
Magic XP: Naw
Warning: Blood, gore, murder, freaky mutation.
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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: The Diary of a New Mother
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Andras wins an egg in a game of Loot or Shoot, and it hatches the same night.
Requested Knowledge: Animal Husbandry!!! I have about 5 that I want specifically, but it's up to reviewer's discretion whether or not you agree.

Animal Husbandry (Birds): Some Birds Born Featherless
Animal Husbandry (Birds): Nestlings Need To Be Kept Warm
Animal Husbandry (Birds): Building A Makeshift Nest
Animal Husbandry (Birds): The Hatching Process
Animal Husbandry (Birds): Gentle Hands Necessary for Safe Handling

I could probably argue there are more, but everything is up to the reviewer.

Other Notes: Written in first person, so it was a challenge. Thought it was an interesting approach to the thread. I hope you like it.
Fame: Whatever is seen.
Devotion: Not sure.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Safe and sound.
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Limbo
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Silence of the Caravans: Planning /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=4724
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Aerlan, and Kovic
Quick Summary: Noth gathers useful information and calls Paplo for help. Paplo brings Aerlan. Al'Angyryl's roots are born
Requested Knowledge: Noth: Tactics, planning, persuation, LEADERSHIP.
Kovic: Persuation, acting, psychology maybe.
Aerlan: N/a

Whatever y'all see, give it to us. We like quantity.
Other Notes: Took us long enough, lol. We were supposed to wrap up four of these threads before the end of December. Thanks for reviewing this. I'll send a long PM to whoever reviews this, in which praise and devotion is given to your kindness. I <3 you stranger.
Fame: Noth gets some negative, I think. Not sure.
Devotion: Kovic could use some Syroa points if possible.
Magic XP: Aerlan used magic, yes.
Warning: NOPE.
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Vex
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Race: Aukari
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris (specifically the Andaris Farmlands)
Thread Name: thread
Character(s) Involved: Just Vex
Quick Summary: Vex has been tasked by Faction VIII to confirm the identity of a woman who had been kidnapped so she could be ransomed off. First thread of what will be a little mini series
Requested Knowledge: Stuff pertaining to Psychological Torture and Interrogation, perhaps. Other than that, surprise me
Other Notes: I'd like to add the necklace Vex took from the woman to my inventory, if possible, so I can use it in a follow-up thread.
Fame: Up to your judgment, though I will say that only a few people within Faction VIII would even know Vex is doing this job
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: I made an attempt at some psychological torture in this thread, so keep that in mind. It isn't the most graphic, in my opinion, but yeah
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Zvezdana Venora
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Joined: Sat Apr 02, 2016 7:30 pm
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Profession: Thunder Priestess
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Beginning Anew
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: One of two job threads for Zi'da. Second one pending. Zvezdana helps a young girl pray to Ilaren.
Requested Knowledge: Reviewer discretion.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Reviewer discretion.
Devotion: Ilaren?
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: None.
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Deceased. Wrapping up open threads.
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Neronin
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Joined: Tue Jan 10, 2017 4:34 pm
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Profession: Mage
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos, the Underground
Thread Name: That Which Hides in Shadow
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin has just been discovered doing necromancy and is chased by two old veterans.
Requested Knowledge: Necromancy: Haunt, Necromancy: Wither, and anything else you deem fitting!
Other Notes: Nothing much.
Fame: Probably negative
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes, please
Warning: Murder, shadow-monsters, decay
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