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Nightshade Eld
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Monster In The Woods
Character(s) Involved: Night and Noth
Quick Summary: Night and Noth go monster hunting because that's what best friends do. They also almost die together. Almost.
Requested Knowledge: Night- Anything you see fit. Blade would be nice.
Noth- Intimidation, weapon skills, maybe some medicine.
Other Notes: It is implied that Noth got Night to a doctor for treatment.
Fame: Fame for Night, Infamy for Noth
Devotion: Ethelynda-senpai please notice me(Some devotion to Ethelynda for Night, lots of dead bandits and anything else worthy that you see.)
Magic XP: We aren't filthy magic users. Who in their right mind uses magic?
Warning: Lots of gore. Lots, lots, lots of gore. That's to be expected in the thread that has Noth of course.
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Caedhe
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Cabin in the Willow Woods, Part 2
Character(s) Involved: Caedhe, Avrae
Quick Summary: Continued from Cab Pt. 1
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Any
Devotion: Maybe to Karem? Not sure.
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Nope
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Niv
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: My Hero
Character(s) Involved: Niv and Ti'niva
Quick Summary: Niv is rescued from a blood thirsty bumble bee by the heroic Ti'niva. She then develops a crush on him.
Requested Knowledge: I would like some Running, climbing and Poison knowledge for Niv and I'm sure Ti'niva would like some strength, endurance and unarmed combat for talking on that large snake, He also wants some Ranged combat for his bow practice at the beginning of the thread.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for grading this thread :)
Fame: Ti'niva rescued Niv so 1 point for general good deed he did also defeated a snake in single combat which could earn him 1-4 points.
Devotion: Ti'niva prayed to Moseke which is a plus one.
Magic XP: nope
Warning: This thread is a little silly other than that it's as tame as they come.
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Alexa
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City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: Monkey Business
Character(s) Involved: Alexa
Quick Summary: Alexa outsmarts the mandrill babysitter and a plan to escape Sky's captivity begins to come to fruition.
Requested Knowledge: Maybe things along the lines of hand-axe use, felling trees, chopping/gathering firewood, scavenging, cooking, etc.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Maybe at least +1 for doing a good deed (chopping wood for shared cave dwelling, feeding pets, cooking food, etc.)
Devotion: Yes, Alexa utilized all parts of an animal that could be salvaged and made efforts to increase chances of continued survival in the remote wilderness. (Karem)
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No obvious reason to provide a disclaimer for this one.

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Avrae Kyric
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City/Area Taken Place: Outside Ne'haer, Ne'haer
Thread Name: An Initiate in the Making
Character(s) Involved: Mal, Avrae
Quick Summary: Avrae gets the news that he has to go back to Sirothelle. He and Mal have a discussion about Becoming, and Avrae decides that someday he would like to learn to Become.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see.
Other Notes: I had to wrap this post up, as it had gone unactive due to my hiatus and Mal focusing more on his alt. As a result, it might seem a bit unfinished or awkwardly ended.
Fame: Whatever you see.
Devotion: None that I know of.
Magic XP: Maybe for Mal? I'm not sure.
Warning: No warnings.
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Avrae Kyric
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City/Area Taken Place: Outside Ne'haer, Ne'haer
Thread Name: Iron Will
Character(s) Involved: Mal, Avrae, Ailluin
Quick Summary: Avrae and Ailluin get caught in a Cylus storm, Mal helps them back to his cave.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see.
Other Notes: I had to wrap this post up, as it had gone unactive due to my hiatus and Mal focusing more on his alt. As a result, it might seem a bit unfinished or awkwardly ended.
Fame: Whatever you see.
Devotion: None that I know of.
Magic XP: Maybe for Mal? I'm not sure.
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Nightshade Eld
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Poker Face
Character(s) Involved: Night
Quick Summary: Night starts the long road on learning how to keep a strait face and endure countless pain.
Requested Knowledge: Deception, Discipline, Resistance, Endurance, anything else you find.
Other Notes: Memory thread.
Fame: Don't think so.
Devotion: Don't think so.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Child abuse. The Master is slightly perverted. Light cursing.
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Ti'niva
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Under the Lights
Character(s) Involved: Ti'niva and Na'liya
Quick Summary: Ti meets Nana in this memory thread.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for the review
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Moseke prayer Ti
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None
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Delta
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Joined: Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:07 pm
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Profession: Slave
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City/Area Taken Place: Outside Etzos
Thread Name: Itching for Release
Character(s) Involved: Delta
Quick Summary: Delta watches the animals while considering her situation.
Requested Knowledge: Stuff about drugs and slavery please
Other Notes: Very, very old thread. Thank you!
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nup
Magic XP: No
Warning: Talk of drugs and drug withdrawal.
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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place: Outsaide Etzos, Farmlands
Thread Name: Through Dead Eyes
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin oversteps trying to combine magics, his first mutation manifests in this thread. (Approved mutation by Plague via PM)
Requested Knowledge:Necromancy: Link, Rupturing: Blink maybe?
Other Notes: I described some overstepping, hope that is okay.
Fame: magic stuff
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Yes, Neronin does necromancy and rupturing, though it fails miserably.
Warning: Nope, presence of a helpful animated skeleton is all.
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