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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 2.0

City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Decisions
Character(s) Involved: Padraig & Faith
Quick Summary: Fifteen trials after being informed by Aelig that Faith is pregnant by Tristan Venora, Faith still doesn't look it, although she is now about six months. They have a conversation about what they're going to do.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever seen
Other Notes: Lots of emotions in this thread.
Fame: As seen
Devotion: As seen
Magic XP: No
Warning: Nope.

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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Grand Advisor
Character(s) Involved: Andraska Venora
Quick Summary: Job thread, where Andras works on his advice column for the Rynmere Gazette.
Requested Knowledge: Persuasion, Writing, Rhetoric, if that's still a thing.
Other Notes: Short and sweet.
Fame: Publish a piece of writing.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP:Nope
Warning: Safe and sound.
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Jachiel
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Turnip for the books
Character(s) Involved: Jachiel
Quick Summary: Job thread, harvesting turnips
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for the review
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None
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Freya DuCarinos
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Business and Pleasure
Character(s) Involved: Patrick and Freya
Quick Summary: Freya sets up a meeting with one of the drug lords of Rharne. Then gets tipsy and does something explicit.
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Maybe?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Very Mature
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Descent into Chaos Part 4:The Turning Point
Character(s) Involved: Vluharqih
Quick Summary: Warren tries to kill Fridgar, but only succeeds in beating him senseless.
Requested Knowledge: Endurance, Unarmed for me, As the reviewer sees fit for Vlu
Other Notes: Feel free to slap me with as many scars as you like.
Fame: Any
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Yes, becoming
Warning: Oh, totally. Graphic descriptions of Fridgar's injuries and plenty of blunt force trauma to boot - (Blood, broken bones, bruising, swelling, concussions - all that lovely stuff) Oh, and Vlu decided to throw acid on him too, for good measure (she was aiming for Warren)
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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora
Thread Name: For The Children
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Andraska goes to his duchy's orphanage and makes a donation.
Requested Knowledge: Leadership. Whatever you see.
Other Notes: Didn't expect to get too much knowledge out of this. Was kind of an exercise.
Fame: I hope so! Andras donates a substantial amount of money, so perhaps general good deed and funding a celebration. Whatever you see.
Devotion: Not sure.
Magic XP: No
Warning: N/A. This is a warm and fuzzy thread.
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Ti'niva
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Friends and Immortals
Character(s) Involved: Ti'niva and Finn
Quick Summary: Finn and Ti go to a temple together.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen for Ti and Discipline and anything seen for Finn
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for the review
Fame: Anything seen
Devotion: Yes, for both Ti (Moseke) and Finn (Ymiden)
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Nope all good and safe
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Nightshade Eld
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: As Seasons Pass
Character(s) Involved: Night
Quick Summary: Night does her seasonal work as a Cartographer and is pleasantly surprised with her treatment.
Requested Knowledge: Anything Cartography, whatever else you can find.
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Anything you an find.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Nothing of note.


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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Requests 2.0

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Thread: Misfits
Involved: Padraig & Faith
Summary: Following a dream (linked in the thread) involving Vri and Aelig, Faith is revealed as being very very pregnant. She and Padraig discuss the possibilities and what they're going to do. They decide, in the end that they are in agreement as to the fate of the child.
Magic: No
Devotion: As seen - maybe Famula / Vri?
Knowledge: As seen, but would appreciate you looking for knowledge on the Immortals involved (for both) maybe some Physics (Pad explains center of gravity etc to her) for Pad. Maybe Endurance for Faith?
Fame: As seen
Warning: None. Lots of emotions going on there.
Thanks for reviewing. x
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Dionysia
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Dark Things Within The Woods
Character(s) Involved: Javlen and Dionysia
Quick Summary: Javlen saves Dia and Vuharu from being a Skinbane's lunch.
Requested Knowledge: Fighting knowledges for both Javlen and Dia. Animal command knowledges if any are possible.
Other Notes: Combat heavy.
Fame: Javlen, for saving an ambassador.
Devotion: No?
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Combat and blood.
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