Completed Review Requests

[Vluharqih]

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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Getting Information
Character(s) Involved: Tristan Venora and Vlu
Quick Summary: Alex shows up because he's a noble, buys a statue and gossips.
Requested Knowledge: As seen.
Other Notes: Pretty light thread, but we hate on Pad some more.
Fame: As seen
Warning: I believe I mention the fact that I want to kill someone briefly, but that's it. Its one of my 'good' threads.

[Alistair]

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Ne'haer or Far
Character(s) Involved: Ali/Patty
Quick Summary: Ali uses the sundial to visit Patrick in Ne'haer, and they discuss their future
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks, love
Fame: -2 ... Act of... Magic... /wrists
Devotion: Sesser: +5 Commit an Act of Lust, +5 Seduce Someone to Commit an Act of Lust
Magic XP: Yes, for Ali
Warning: Naw

[Alistair]

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Damn, You Let Him Get Away
Character(s) Involved: Avrae, Alistair
Quick Summary: Avrae and Alistair meet... and get off on the wrong foot. And leg. And body.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: -2 Act of Magic, fml
Devotion: Sesser: +7 for provoking someone to act in fury
Magic XP: Yes for Ali, no for Avrae
Warning: Naw

[Limbo]

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer, its surroundings... somewhere. A dead beat village.
Thread Name: Zealous Vices /viewtopic.php?f=88&t=5003
Character(s) Involved: Kovic
Quick Summary: An even younger Kovic is adopted by a family.
Requested Knowledge: Not looking for anything but them points.
Other Notes: Part one of a saga I'm gonna try to dish out sometime soon. I tried to use a somewhat different writing style for this one (show don't tell kinda deal), so let me know if its any good to read, interesting, and so forth.
Fame: -
Devotion: -
Magic XP: -
Warning: Safe to read, for once.

[Gangui]

City/Area Taken Place:Etzosi Wilderness
Thread Name: (Solo)Fording the Westride
Character(s) Involved: Gangui
Quick Summary: Gangui departs his traveling companions and fords the Westride, officially marking his crossing of the threshold into Etzos and the beginning of the chapter of his saga in unknown lands of Etzos.
Requested Knowledge: Crossing the First Threshold, Fording the Westride, anything pertaining to Field craft knowledge.
Other Notes: First time writting in a long time so I not sure how I performed. Regardless I had fun writing it. Constructive critique welcomed.
Fame: no
Devotion: no
Magic XP: no
Warning: n/a

[Nightshade Eld]

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Woof
Character(s) Involved: Nightshade Eld
Quick Summary: A memory thread where Night learns what she is to the powerful.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you find.
Other Notes: This is a character development based thread. Later in the thread I go into a little detail on Night hearing two voices in her mind and no I'm not trying to make her seem crazy. One in her conscious, the moral and logical half of her mind. The other is her subconscious which has the darker thoughts she often tries to ignore. I made it a little more savage and pronounced because I feel it's the kind of voice an avriel would hear that makes them go savage for a time during childhood.
Fame: No.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: The word bitch is thrown around a lot but it's used in it's definition meaning a female dog. The Master is also a pervert who likes beating up a five year old.

[Avrae Kyric]

City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Fun and Misery, Both Love Company, Part 2 /viewtopic.php?f=139&t=5018
Character(s) Involved: Avrae & Patrick
Quick Summary: Avrae remembers the time he met Patrick in a bar on his birthday- effectively continuing our old thread that got graded unfinished because of my hiatus. It's a memory thread.
Requested Knowledge: Any you see fit.
Other Notes: Thanks. <3
Fame: Any you see fit.
Devotion: Not that I know of.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Hmm, a bit of suggestion and flirting but not really needing a warning, no.

[Neronin]

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Price of Arrogance
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin takes on a bit more than he can handle in fighting some muggers.
Requested Knowledge: Necromancy, Overstepping
Other Notes:
Fame: Magic!
Devotion: Who needs Immortals?
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: Yea, violent combat and undead stuff.

[Atashi]

City/Area Taken Place: The eastern settlement
Thread Name: For old times sake, snake (Atashi)
Character(s) Involved: Atashi, Kylar
Quick Summary: Atashi and kylar have a heart to heart regarding what they saw in 'Burning Winter Snow' and make plans to leave the hand
Requested Knowledge: Any applicable
Other Notes: This wasn't a very nice thread to write, tbh
Fame: Any
Devotion: Up to reviewer
Magic XP: None
Warning: Scary hallucinations (gore, death), lots of emotional stuff

[Alistair]

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Dashing Through Snow
Character(s) Involved: Patrick/Ali
Quick Summary: Beginning of an expedition
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: -2 Act of Magic... /rips hair out
Devotion: Uh... I don't think so. He's kind of just being silly the whole thread.
Magic XP: Yes for Ali
Warning: Naw