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Varthakh
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Descent into Chaos Part 2: Choosing the Target
Character(s) Involved: Vluharqih, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Alex and Warren Hire Fridgar for some mercenary work
Requested Knowledge: Strength, endurance for Fridgar. Poison, stealth, tactics for Vlu?
Other Notes: Job request for Mercenary is still pending, hope thats not a problem!
Fame: Any
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Nope!
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Lei'lira
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere/Warrick
Thread Name: [Warrick] Securing the Future
Character(s) Involved: Lei'lira
Quick Summary: Drayas returns, and meets the twins. He isn't happy.
Requested Knowledge: Anything that applies
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: Maybe some positive fame for protecting her kids?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: This thread is marked Mature, and is posted in the Mature Forum for a reason. Lei'lira is raped more than once, and the thread is fairly graphic. There is also a little bit of mild swearing, and Drayas tries to kill Lei'lira's children.
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Padraig
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Location: Rharne

Planning what we see
Faith and Padraig
Part I of a romantic outing in the woods, or what is intended to be uneventful. Planning, packing for the unexpected, talk about ghosts and Famula and Vri
Knowledge: Whatever seen.
Magic: Nope.
Devotion: Whatever seen.
Fame: Nope
Warning: N/A
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Lei'lira
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City/Area Taken Place:Rynmere/Warrick
Thread Name: Broken Wings
Character(s) Involved: Lei'lira, Victor Warrick
Quick Summary: Lei'lira and her uncle discuss the future.
Requested Knowledge: Any that apply.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: If it applies?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: Not as such. This was a modded thread with Griffin, but since they retired, I am resubmitting it for reviewing.
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Ailluin-Yelven
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Joined: Tue Sep 20, 2016 3:22 am
Race: Yludih
Profession: Slave
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Taarserilla
Character(s) Involved: Taarserilla and Ti'niva
Quick Summary: A brief glimpse into the past, a meeting of two who became friends after a humorous incident involving a tree
Requested Knowledge: nothing in particular, maybe something on climbing?
Other Notes: It is a memory thread
Fame: +10 for Taarserilla, +53 for Ti'niva
Devotion: Not sure what this is
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Avrae Kyric
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Joined: Mon Sep 19, 2016 8:34 pm
Race: Aukari
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: -32
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City/Area Taken Place: Sirothelle
Thread Name: Wisdom of an Old Friend
Character(s) Involved: Avrae Kyric
Quick Summary: A solo in which Avrae learns a valuable lesson of wisdom from his mentor, Kabkadu.
Requested Knowledge: I can't think of any in particular so it's up to you guys.
Other Notes: There's nothing much to it. But I would suggest that meditation and blades be taken into account when rewarding skills. However, I'm leaving it up to the reviewer.
Fame: None that I know of.
Devotion: Um... I don't know what devotion points are so I wouldn't know if Avrae earned any.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No, no warning needed.
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Noth
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Wages of Guilt /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=4645
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Petra
Quick Summary: Petra shows up at Noth's old home where his old father still lays dead...
Requested Knowledge:Whatever seems fitting
Other Notes:
Fame:Maybe positive for Petra for doing her work and warning citizens, neutral for Noth.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Remarkably, nothing at all.
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Sabine
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: For Andaris!
Character(s) Involved: Peake Andaris, Vera, Sabine, Faith, Aeon, Vincent D'Ordyn, Aelius Callistus, Yanahalqah, Rita Fenyo, Zvezdana Venora, Alistair, Nivasi Zyq'Dariav
Quick Summary: A response to the Qe'dreki invasion during the Saun 716 civil war! A lot of these characters moved into splinter threads, which is why some of the story seems to be cut short.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever is seen.
Other Notes: This thread was originally modded by Griffin, but she didn't have a chance to review it before retiring. Thank you so much for reviewing - this is a monster thread!
Fame: Whatever is seen.
Devotion: Whatever is seen.
Magic XP: If seen.
Warning: N/A
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Caedhe
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Race: Lotharro
Profession: Hunter
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Cabin in the Willow Woods
Character(s) Involved: Avrae, Caed
Quick Summary: Avrae and Caed meet in the Willow Woods.
Requested Knowledge: Any.
Other Notes: Thanks, dear.
Fame: Any
Devotion: Probably to Karem... I mean, hunting and stuff... with her familiar... god, I don't know ;-; he also uses his mark abilities, Sense of Prey and Pack Leader.
Magic XP: No
Warning: nope
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Vluharqih
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Race: Yludih
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name:Descent into Chaos Part 3: Questionable Morality
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar and Vlu
Quick Summary: They begin to test poisons and stuff, one woman dies a rather painful-looking death and Alex is confused. Tortures the other women to get them to fill in some gaps.
Requested Knowledge: Poisons and Torture for Vlu, Intimidation and unarmed for Fridgar, then whatever else you see
Other Notes: Thanks for reviewing! Looking over part 2 might help.
Fame: Probably some pretty significant negative
Warning:Yes. Dear lord yes. Blood and torture and killing and needles. Stay away if you're squeamish.
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