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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Candle-Stick Maker
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin breaks into a home to steal the corpse of the recently deceased father, but comes out with two corpses.
Requested Knowledge: Necromancy, particularly the corrosive affect of Sap on dead flesh.
Other Notes:
Fame: probably some negative or non at all, definitely nothing positive.
Devotion: Negative
Magic XP: Yes please! (Necromancy)
Warning: Necromancy, undead, murder
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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place:Etzos
Thread Name: A Helping Hand
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin kills a dog that is terrorizing his neighbor's daughter, then brings it home for experimentation.
Requested Knowledge: Necromancy
Other Notes:
Fame: Saves a girl, uses necromancy.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: Yes, necromancy
Warning: Light violence and a dog dies, he also brings it back as undead.
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Vluharqih
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name:Descent into Chaos Part 1: Reminders of Youth
Character(s) Involved: Just me
Quick Summary: Lots philsophical stuff (right vs wrong, evil or not, etc), not terribly interesting unless you like that sort of stuff. Oh, and a murder gets thrown in at the end.
Requested Knowledge: As seen
Other Notes: Might be a tad boring, so sorry for that, but I enjoyed writing it.
Fame: As seen
Warning: Discussion of murder, a glossed over murder. Nothing gory.
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word count: 87
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Vluharqih
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City/Area Taken Place: Outside of Etzos
Thread Name: Those Damn Birds
Character(s) Involved: Sor'ren and Myself
Quick Summary: A misunderstanding nearly kills Vluharqih when she's mistaken for a true avriel.
Requested Knowledge: As seen
Other Notes: A longer thread. This begins my second animal form, but was abandoned by Sor'ren so I tried to tie it up as neatly as I could. Took some liberties with controlling him. Don't think you need to review his part, as I haven't heard from him since the last post seen here.
Fame: As Seen
Warning: Bit of blood
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word count: 104
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Alistair
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Profession: Wanderer
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: In Depths We Tread
Character(s) Involved: Patrick/Alistair
Quick Summary: Ali and Patrick say goodbye, for now
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks, love
Fame: -2 act of magic for Ali... uuuuugh
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Yes for Ali, no for Patty
Warning: Naw
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Rey'na
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Joined: Thu Dec 15, 2016 1:25 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Judge, Jury and Executioner
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: News and Drinks
Character(s) Involved: Vluh and Rey'na
Quick Summary: Rey'na attempts to poison someone with alcohol, and ends up getting her and Vluh in a mess
Requested Knowledge: Poison would fit, but anything you see fit :)
Other Notes: Nope
Fame: Negative, almost definitely
Devotion: Perhaps for Rey'na
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Nope
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Location: Rharne

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Padraig and Faith
This is the final thread in the series of threads where they close in on a serial killer known as The Strangler. It all started in On the 72nd trial of Zi'da and then continued in Closing in. This is the culmination of those where Faith and Padraig finally find the baddie!
Knowledge: Whatever seen.
Magic: Nope.
Devotion: Whatever seen.
Fame: Yes please! We stopped a serial killer
Warning: The serial killer is as mad as a box of frogs and there are some ashes in an urn... but nothing too gruesome.
Also: this is a bounty from Rharne's bounty board with a reward of 250gn, please and thanks.
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Yanahalqah
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Race: Yludih
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Hunter, Hunted
Character(s) Involved: Yana
Quick Summary: Yana heads home after having successfully retrieved Kurt White's head from the Grimvale but runs into trouble along the way
Requested Knowledge: Maybe something on Yludih's shapeshifting abilities, tactics and combat maybe?
Other Notes: This a short thread which is part of a small series of threads I wrote for hunting down a bounty for the bounty board. Haven't received any payment yet.
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Fame: ???
Devotion: nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: A giant spider leg. Some swearing. Nothing else I think.
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Varthakh
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Profession: Jeger
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Pieces
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Rey'na
Quick Summary: Fridgar meets Rey'na and strips for her
Requested Knowledge: Becoming
Other Notes: It was with good reason, I swear
Fame: Any
Devotion: None
Magic XP: Yes, Becoming
Warning: Nudity, Transformation
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Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
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Ti'niva
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Profession: Hunter
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer, surrounding territories and city
Thread Name: [Willow woods] A prized horse (Odd Job)
Character(s) Involved: Ti'niva
Quick Summary: Ti goes out to catch an escaped horse.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen, maybe hunting?
Other Notes: Thanks for the review
Fame: Don't think so.
Devotion: He said a prayer to Ashan, maybe that?
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None
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