City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere - Warrick Region
Thread Name: Revalations
Character(s) Involved: Vivian and Lei'lira Warrick
Quick Summary: Vivian meets Lei'lira before she leaves Rynmere and finds out what has happened to her while she was in Jorrick's Keep.
Requested Knowledge: A bit of cooking knowledge for both Lei'lir and Vivian, anything else that fits.
Other Notes:
Fame: Some positive for Vivian taking care of Lei'lira in this thread, maybe some for Lira for not being willing to endanger her children.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Vivian contemplates murder and Lei'lira talks about her rape, but nothing explicit.
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- Vivian Shiryu
- Approved Character
- Posts: 629
- Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2016 8:14 pm
- Race: Mortal Born
- Renown: 648
- Character Sheet
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- Templates
- Wealth Tier: Tier 8
- Ti'niva
- Approved Character
- Posts: 315
- Joined: Fri Sep 16, 2016 3:41 pm
- Race: Mortal Born
- Profession: Hunter
- Renown: 98
- Character Sheet
- Plot Notes
- Templates
- Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Review Requests 2.0
City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer Surrounding Territories, Willow Woods
Thread Name: [Willow Woods] Find Your Calling
Character(s) Involved: Finn and Ti'niva
Quick Summary: Finn and Ti'niva find Finn's mentor who appears to be sick. Ti'niva leaves in the end chasing his Familiar.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in Advance for the review
Fame: Maybe? Good Deed- Helping a friend, possibly.
Devotion: Yes, to Moseke for Ti. A prayer and a few other little things, but really just a prayer.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: No warnings
Thread Name: [Willow Woods] Find Your Calling
Character(s) Involved: Finn and Ti'niva
Quick Summary: Finn and Ti'niva find Finn's mentor who appears to be sick. Ti'niva leaves in the end chasing his Familiar.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in Advance for the review
Fame: Maybe? Good Deed- Helping a friend, possibly.
Devotion: Yes, to Moseke for Ti. A prayer and a few other little things, but really just a prayer.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: No warnings
Niv!
word count: 95
- Faith Augustin Champion
- Approved Character
- Posts: 4809
- Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
- Race: Human
- Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
- Renown: 2250
- Character Sheet
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- Plot Notes
- Personal Journal
- Templates
- Letters
- Point Bank Thread
- Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Review Requests 2.0
Rharne
Blackett Family Values
Faith, it's a solo.
She's taken on a job from the odd job board to tutor a pair in Andaris etiquette. She does!
Knowledge: whatever seen, really.
No devotion
Fame - maybe for donating the money to the Order of the Adunih?
No magic
No warning.
This is job #3 from the Rharne Odd Job Board. Faith will claim her money then go donate it straight away so if that could be noted in the review that'd be great. Thanks for reviewing!
Blackett Family Values
Faith, it's a solo.
She's taken on a job from the odd job board to tutor a pair in Andaris etiquette. She does!
Knowledge: whatever seen, really.
No devotion
Fame - maybe for donating the money to the Order of the Adunih?
No magic
No warning.
This is job #3 from the Rharne Odd Job Board. Faith will claim her money then go donate it straight away so if that could be noted in the review that'd be great. Thanks for reviewing!
word count: 88
This PC is dead. See this thread for details.
- Faith Augustin Champion
- Approved Character
- Posts: 4809
- Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
- Race: Human
- Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
- Renown: 2250
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- Letters
- Point Bank Thread
- Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Review Requests 2.0
Rharne:
Testing
Just Faith
Faith tests out the raft bandages which she and Padraig have made when she's doing her rounds for the Order of the Adunih.
Knowledges: Surgery please! And Order of the Adunih specific knowledge if possible. Especially about Mattieus I'm grooming him to be my mentor.....
Magic - nope.
Fame - maybe some good deeds in there?
Devotion - couple of prayers
Warning: It's about medical stuff- there's pus and the after effects of childbirth. But it's ok.
Thanks for reviewing.
Testing
Just Faith
Faith tests out the raft bandages which she and Padraig have made when she's doing her rounds for the Order of the Adunih.
Knowledges: Surgery please! And Order of the Adunih specific knowledge if possible. Especially about Mattieus I'm grooming him to be my mentor.....
Magic - nope.
Fame - maybe some good deeds in there?
Devotion - couple of prayers
Warning: It's about medical stuff- there's pus and the after effects of childbirth. But it's ok.
Thanks for reviewing.
word count: 86
This PC is dead. See this thread for details.
- Alistair
- Approved Character
- Posts: 3421
- Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
- Race: Human
- Profession: Wanderer
- Renown: 1000
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- Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Review Requests 2.0
City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Pipe Dream
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair deals with a troubling case. Job thread.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks, bae
Fame: Any
Devotion: Idunno.
Magic XP: No
Warning: Eh, not really.
Thread Name: Pipe Dream
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair deals with a troubling case. Job thread.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks, bae
Fame: Any
Devotion: Idunno.
Magic XP: No
Warning: Eh, not really.
word count: 42
- Tristan Venora
- Approved Character
- Posts: 1436
- Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 11:47 am
- Race: Human
- Profession: Mad Scientist Socialite
- Renown: 934
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- Letters
- Point Bank Thread
- Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Review Requests 2.0
City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Missing the point
Character(s) Involved: Tristan Venora, Kylar
Quick Summary: Tristan asks for a sword teacher, and Kylar shows up - with a crossbow!
Requested Knowledge: Some crossbow and teaching knowledge maybe? And whatever else you can find.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Up to you!
Devotion: Up to you!
Magic XP: No. Unless you consider the fact that Tristan actually hit a target magic?
Warning: No.
Thread Name: Missing the point
Character(s) Involved: Tristan Venora, Kylar
Quick Summary: Tristan asks for a sword teacher, and Kylar shows up - with a crossbow!
Requested Knowledge: Some crossbow and teaching knowledge maybe? And whatever else you can find.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Up to you!
Devotion: Up to you!
Magic XP: No. Unless you consider the fact that Tristan actually hit a target magic?
Warning: No.
Last edited by Tristan Venora on Mon Jan 23, 2017 8:02 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 77
- Noth
- Approved Character
- Posts: 829
- Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2016 4:51 pm
- Race: Mixed Race
- Profession: Monster
- Renown: -370
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- Partner
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- Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Review Requests 2.0
City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Trust Hurts /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=4709
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Kovic
Quick Summary: Noth and Kovic carry a body back towards a copse, but are interrupted by a trio of kidnappers.
Requested Knowledge: Noth- Longbow, Stealth, Intimidation. Kovic- Acting, Psychology, Deception, Storytelling, Discipline.
Other Notes:
Fame: Negative
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: Maybe for Kovic
Warning: Nothing too terrible. There is a dead body from the beginning, and then there are more dead bodies.
Thread Name: Trust Hurts /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=4709
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Kovic
Quick Summary: Noth and Kovic carry a body back towards a copse, but are interrupted by a trio of kidnappers.
Requested Knowledge: Noth- Longbow, Stealth, Intimidation. Kovic- Acting, Psychology, Deception, Storytelling, Discipline.
Other Notes:
Fame: Negative
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: Maybe for Kovic
Warning: Nothing too terrible. There is a dead body from the beginning, and then there are more dead bodies.
word count: 83
- Faith Augustin Champion
- Approved Character
- Posts: 4809
- Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
- Race: Human
- Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
- Renown: 2250
- Character Sheet
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- Letters
- Point Bank Thread
- Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Review Requests 2.0
Andaris, Rynmere
Tristan Learns to Cook!
Tristan and Faith
Faith teaches Tristan to cook - in their own unique fashion.
Knowledges: As seen
Fame: As seen
Magic: No
Thank you for reviewing!
Tristan Learns to Cook!
Tristan and Faith
Faith teaches Tristan to cook - in their own unique fashion.
Knowledges: As seen
Fame: As seen
Magic: No
Thank you for reviewing!
word count: 31
This PC is dead. See this thread for details.
- Aerlan
- Approved Character
- Posts: 36
- Joined: Thu Dec 08, 2016 4:57 pm
- Race: Eídisi
- Renown: 24
- Character Sheet
- Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Review Requests 2.0
City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: How to Pick a Victim 101
Character(s) Involved: Aerlan
Quick Summary: Aerlan's addiction hits him while he's walking around Etzos. He purchases a dagger from a craftsman stall, lying during the negotiation. Once done, he scouts the northern outer perimeter and seeks a victim to Flay. He ends up choosing a pair of twins for his nefarious plans.
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: This is part 1 of 2. It is continued in "Victimizing the Innocent".
Fame: N/a
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None in this thread. The continuation will have murder and potentially light torture.
Thread Name: How to Pick a Victim 101
Character(s) Involved: Aerlan
Quick Summary: Aerlan's addiction hits him while he's walking around Etzos. He purchases a dagger from a craftsman stall, lying during the negotiation. Once done, he scouts the northern outer perimeter and seeks a victim to Flay. He ends up choosing a pair of twins for his nefarious plans.
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: This is part 1 of 2. It is continued in "Victimizing the Innocent".
Fame: N/a
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None in this thread. The continuation will have murder and potentially light torture.
word count: 108
"Whoso would be a man must be a nonconformist. He who would gather immortal palms must not be hindered by the name of goodness, but must explore if it be goodness. Nothing is at last sacred but the integrity of your own mind. Absolve you to yourself, and you shall have the suffrage of the world... No law can be sacred to me but that of my nature. Good and bad are but names very readily transferable to that or this; the only right is what is after my constitution, the only wrong what is against it. A man is to carry himself in the presence of all opposition, as if every thing were titular and ephemeral but he. I am ashamed to think how easily we capitulate to badges and names, to large societies and dead institutions."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson, "Self-Reliance"
~Ralph Waldo Emerson, "Self-Reliance"
- Aerlan
- Approved Character
- Posts: 36
- Joined: Thu Dec 08, 2016 4:57 pm
- Race: Eídisi
- Renown: 24
- Character Sheet
- Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Review Requests 2.0
City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Victimizing the Innocent
Character(s) Involved: Aerlan
Quick Summary: After having chosen his victims, Aerlan hides using his Defiance magic until they are asleep. He breaks into their home via Aberration. His addiction consumes him and he Flays one twin. The second awakes and after a brief struggle and another deception, he murders the woman with his dagger. He goes on to clean himself up and loot anything of worth in the residence.
Requested Knowledge: Defiance & Aberration if possible, pretty pleaaaaaaase.
Other Notes: This is part 2 of 2. It is continued from "How to Pick a Victim 101"
Fame: Probably negative. I assume someone will eventually find the bodies.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: Flaying and murder. Nothing too gruesome, but it's there.
Thread Name: Victimizing the Innocent
Character(s) Involved: Aerlan
Quick Summary: After having chosen his victims, Aerlan hides using his Defiance magic until they are asleep. He breaks into their home via Aberration. His addiction consumes him and he Flays one twin. The second awakes and after a brief struggle and another deception, he murders the woman with his dagger. He goes on to clean himself up and loot anything of worth in the residence.
Requested Knowledge: Defiance & Aberration if possible, pretty pleaaaaaaase.
Other Notes: This is part 2 of 2. It is continued from "How to Pick a Victim 101"
Fame: Probably negative. I assume someone will eventually find the bodies.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: Flaying and murder. Nothing too gruesome, but it's there.
word count: 133
"Whoso would be a man must be a nonconformist. He who would gather immortal palms must not be hindered by the name of goodness, but must explore if it be goodness. Nothing is at last sacred but the integrity of your own mind. Absolve you to yourself, and you shall have the suffrage of the world... No law can be sacred to me but that of my nature. Good and bad are but names very readily transferable to that or this; the only right is what is after my constitution, the only wrong what is against it. A man is to carry himself in the presence of all opposition, as if every thing were titular and ephemeral but he. I am ashamed to think how easily we capitulate to badges and names, to large societies and dead institutions."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson, "Self-Reliance"
~Ralph Waldo Emerson, "Self-Reliance"