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Atashi
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Preparations
Character(s) Involved: Ivy Gawyne, Atashi Oxitash
Quick Summary: Ivy and Atashi meet in Andaris and get attacked
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: It was agreed upon OOC that Atashi dealt with the assailants, I'm not hogging the fight!
Fame: Any
Devotion: Ethelynda for Atashi
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Broken bones, violence, cursing
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Atashi
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Snake in a sweater?
Character(s) Involved: Symbri, Atashi Oxitash
Quick Summary: Atashi and symbri meet the morning after their first encounter and make plans to go into town.
Requested Knowledge: Any applicable
Other Notes: We didn't actually get around to the actual shopping and spent too many posts in the inn, so we decided to split it in two and get another PC involved in the second half.
Fame: Any.
Devotion: None
Magic XP: None
Warning: None, all safe! Except the mention of underwear.
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Atashi
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City/Area Taken Place: The eastern settlement
Thread Name: In the red corner... Snake-maaaann!!!!
Character(s) Involved: Sintih Rhataan, Atashi Oxitash
Quick Summary: Sintih and Atashi spar with two squires and learn a lot about eachother
Requested Knowledge: Shielded combat for me, Anything for Sintih
Other Notes: We had so much to write about in the previous thread that we had to split it in two.
Fame: Any
Devotion: Ethelynda for Atashi
Magic XP: None
Warning: Violence
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Brynjar
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Joined: Sun Nov 06, 2016 6:30 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: Farmer
Renown: 30
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer Surrounding Territories, Treth
Thread Name: [Treth] Milk, glorious milk.
Character(s) Involved: Brynjar
Quick Summary: Job thread for Brynjar, he works on his farm milking the cows and then taking it to town.
Requested Knowledge: Anything Argiculture or Animal Husbandry related. Anything else seen.
Other Notes: This is a job thread so it does not have a huge captivating story, sorry. Thanks in advance for the review anyway.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Kura Wolfsdotter
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne - Stormlands
Thread Name: The Hunt Begins
Character(s) Involved: Kura Wolfsdotter
Quick Summary: Kura investigates a missing child. The opening thread to a larger plot.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever fits.
Other Notes: This thread is the prologue to a group story.
Fame: Possibly for helping to find the child, but since she didn't actually find her in this thread...I dunno.
Devotion: Yes, for hunting a criminal to save an innocent. Karem please.
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Aeon
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Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
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Profession: Hero :|
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Andaris, Rynmere
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Aeon & Rey'na
A simple meet & greet thread, I'd say :)
Fame according to the reviewer
No Magic
Maybe Lisirra devotion for Rey? I dunno
There's just a tiny bit of edginess from Aeon, oh and it gets emotional near the end.
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Ti'niva
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City/Area Taken Place: Emea
Thread Name: A Clearing In The Woods
Character(s) Involved: Ti'niva and Faith
Quick Summary: Ti'niva and Faith meet after Ti has found his familiar. He can't wait to tell Faith about her.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for the review.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Nope
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Kura Wolfsdotter
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Jail Cell Investigation
Character(s) Involved: Kura Wolfsdotter
Quick Summary: Kura takes a bounty to find a jailbreaker. She finds him.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever fits
Other Notes: Bounty for Ciaran Langdon - 50GN
Fame: Some for hunting and catching Langdon please.
Devotion: Yes, for Karem, for hunting and catching an evil man.
Magic XP: No
Warning: Phelan mauls a dudes leg, that's about it.
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Ti'niva
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Nature's Bounty
Character(s) Involved: Ti'niva and Ini'ra
Quick Summary: They go on a hunt together.
Requested Knowledge: Hunting for both of us and anything else seen. Ranged combat for Ti'niva definitely.
Other Notes: It is pretty long.
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Yes, both prayed to Moseke and maybe honouring the kill, I am not sure.
Magic XP: None
Warning: Nope
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Welcome to the Request Thread! Here you may make requests for your finished threads to be reviewed. The Prophets here are more than happy to help! Posting your review requests here makes it easy for all Prophets and Reviewers to keep track of who asked for what and when so that we can all work together to ensure that your threads are reviewed quickly and fairly.

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