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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Skyline
Character(s) Involved: Alistair Venora
Quick Summary: Alistair finally masters the Rend, the strongest portal of all, becoming a legendary Rupturer.
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks! <3
Fame: Any
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes
Warning: N/A
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Peake
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Profession: A**hole
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Just like the trial before
Character(s) Involved: Peake Andaris
Quick Summary: Peake's current lifestyle is interrupted by an unexpected letter from his former fiance, Syhera.
Requested Knowledge: Wasn't really interested in any knowledges as I wrote this. Maybe some endurance, but don't look too hard.
Other Notes: The feels, bro.
Fame: Surely negative.
Devotion: Pass, lol.
Magic XP: Hell naw.
Warning: It's Peake, so... Sex references, language, fury, allusions to previous abuses. The full PG-13 edgy kid stuff.
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Patrick
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Thread Name: Fun and Misery, Both Love Company
Character(s) Involved: Avrae
Quick Summary: First meeting together
Requested Skills: Anything
Requested Knowledge: Maybe something related to Aukari, anything you can see honestly
Other Notes: Avrae seems to have left, so I went ahead and edited the latest post to reflect the thread ending.
Warning: Short thread.
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Patrick
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Coded Secrets
Character(s) Involved: Brodolf
Quick Summary: I don't even know.
Requested Knowledge: Surprise me with this one.
Other Notes: Seriously. Surprise me.
Fame: Maybe something for giving him food?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Incredibly short.
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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rymere
Thread Name: Right or Wrong
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Memory. After a lesson on leadership from his mother, Andras has a chance to put it into practice. Things don't quite play out like he imagined.
Requested Knowledge: As many leadership knowledges as you see. Immortal: Pier & Pre, and Languages: Rakahi and/or Language: Common Sign. Everything else is a bonus.
Other Notes: I had a lot of fun writing this. Another memory of Andraska's childhood wrapped up. Pretty pleased with it myself.
Fame: I think Andras did the right thing, standing up for the people (general good deed or enforcing the law), so I hope I get something out of this, tbh.
Devotion: Probably not.
Magic XP: Nope.
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Ivy Gawyne
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: In Need of a Friend
Character(s) Involved: Faith, Ivy
Quick Summary: Faith and Ivy meet after Faith beats up a thug harassing Ivy
Requested Knowledge: Anything you find
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Anything you find
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Faith beats up a thug but that's about it.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Rharne:

Closing In
Padraig and Faith
Part 2 of their investigation into "The Strangler", a serial killer in Rharne. Part one is linked in there. In this thread they start to build up a profile of the victims and the killer and use clues gained to start to narrow down where to find "The Strangler".
Knowledge: As seen.
Devotion: Yes, please, if seen. Faith prays to Famula, dedicates this investigation to Famula. She also prays to Vri, teaches Pad a bit about him and declares love in Vri's name. It's less romantic than it sounds
Magic: Nope
Fame: As seen
Thanks very much for reviewing!
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Padraig
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A Clear Solution
Faith and Padraig work together to create liquid, durable bandages to help repair the skin without stitches, and to draw out and prevent further infection of wounds. Also a solvent to remove them.
Knowledge: Chemistry, alchemy, cooking, whatever seen
Devotion: For Faith?
Magic: Nope
Fame: As seen
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Sabine
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Dead on Arrival
Character(s) Involved: Sabine, Vincent D'Ordyn
Quick Summary: Sabine arrives in Rharne and meets Vincent on the Docks. Things do not go as planned. A follow-up to Wrecked, Forget You, and Aches and Pains (spoilers!).
Requested Knowledge: Locations, people, skills (Intimidation, maybe?). Whatever is seen.
Other Notes: This thread was written for plot purposes, so there may not be much knowledge to be found. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Fame: Whatever is seen.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Surprise Meetings
Kura, Padraig, Faith
A surprise meeting in the Bronze Boar leads to Kura recognising Faith and the three of them chat. About ghosts, mostly.
Magic: no
Knowledge: whatever you see, please. Faith uses her "See the Dead" ability as part of the Zuuda mark - so any knowledge on that would be great for her.
Fame: we all try very hard to help? As seen.
Devotion: Yes for Faith, please, if seen.
No mature content - but some discussion of unpleasant topics like slavery, scars, murder, assault etc. Very mild and glossed over, though.
Thank you for reviewing :)
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