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Rynmere, Andaris
Salvation
Aeon & Faith
Newly freed, Faith runs into Aeon and they discuss their lives, their choices etc.
Warning: no
Fame: maybe? As seen
Devotion: no
Knowledge: whatever seen
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Zvezdana Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: How to Begin
Character(s) Involved: Zvezdana, Vincent
Quick Summary: Having just arrived in Rharne and been robbed, Zvezdana seeks aid in the most demeaning way she knows: begging. Vincent appears to save her and introduce her to the city.
Requested Knowledge: Locations, Rharne Specific Knowledges (Lightening Knights, Thunder Priestesses, Quarters, etc.), Vincent. Probably knowledges about Zvezdana and other Rharne specific knowledges for Vincent as well. Whatever else you see fit.
Other Notes: This is a fun meeting thread between the two and allows for a different insight into the 'new' Zvezdana.
Fame: Definitely positive fame for Vincent for helping a stranger (Zvezdana).
Devotion: Unknown.
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None.
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Rynmere, Andaris, Graveyard
Who Said Dead Men Tell No Tales?
Only me :|
Aeon's madness shows once more as he speaks to the vision of his dead mentor.
Any knowledge seen (though I doubt there are many)
No fame
No magic
No devotion
Warning, lots of edginess and serious talk.
Thank you!
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: I have a question
Character(s) Involved: Doran, Sintih
Quick Summary: Doran gives Sintih a brief and safe introduction to alchemy before they move on to more dangerous experiments.
Requested Knowledge: Alchemy and chemistry? And whatever else you can find.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review!
Fame: Do I get fame for being nice to Sintih? if not, then there's probably no fame to be gained.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No.
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Rynmere, Andaris, Library
When in doubt, go to the library
Just Aeon
In case you haven't figured it out by now, I'm gonna give you a clue. It has something to do with a library.
Some psychology or detection knowledges perhaps? Anything seen really
No fame
No magic
No devotion
No warning
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Pie Chart
Character(s) Involved: Kovic
Quick Summary: Kovic goes looking for a female baker to lure into a relationship. He is not successful.
Requested Knowledge: Kovic was completely IC in this thread, portraying Paplo Ynush, his character for Etzos. This thread, however, I believe was quite light on knowledges, so I'll leave it to the reviewers discretion.
Other Notes: Do you know when you make an NPC with the intention of making it do something, but when the moment comes you realize the NPC wouldn't do that? Well, I know that feeling, and it happened in this thread. Damn you, elitism! Allow me to do whatever I wish!
Fame: Maybe?

Warning: Some politically incorrect thoughts in there, I think. All very mild, and perfectly readable, though.
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Written in the skin
Character(s) Involved: Finn and Ti'niva
Quick Summary: Finn seeks Ti's council again in a matter much deeper than getting a tattoo.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you see.
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Rynmere, Andaris
Thread The Room Pt 2
Faith surprises Padraig with some new furniture and clothes.
Knowledge: whatever seen
Magic: no
Warning: FTB at the end.
Note: In this thread, Padraig and Faith notice that the scars on her back and her slave brands are disappearing / fading. This happened, as they worked out, during the Great Meeting thread.
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Unwelcome Reunions
Character(s) Involved: Zvezdana, Faith, and Padraig
Quick Summary: Zvezdana, while serving in the Prayer chamber, encounter someone she did not expect to see. Faith, has the same feelings. Padraig is a quiet observer.
Requested Knowledge: As the reader sees fit.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: As the reader sees fit.
Warning: Attempted violence.
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: My Candy Crush
Character(s) Involved: Kovic, Tirta
Quick Summary: Tirta is punished by Karma... okay, not really, but she does get in trouble, and Kovic watches because he's a creep.
Requested Knowledge: For Tirta, knowledges about defiance, blades, and unarmed combat. Kovic can always use acting, psychology, and perhaps some discipline/meditation. The more the better! Toss them knowledges right into out pockets, damn it!
Other Notes: We wrapped this thread in half a day! It's been ages since this happened to me, so I think it's great. I think it's a good thread, short and sweet. I hope the reviewer enjoys reading it as much as we did writing it!
Fame: Negative for both. Tirta used magic! *gasp* She's going to curse me for telling, she will! And for Kovic too, for not helping and cutting a guy's neck. #slashswag
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: Yes. Tirta used defiance. Does Kovic's charming smile count as magic? I'm kidding.
Of course it does.
Warning: Attempted rape, a slang or two, and cold-hearted violence. Apt for the general public, I'd say.

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