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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Troubles of Twerking
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Andras invents twerking and while showing it to a bunch of buddies, is insulted. As a result, Andras gets in a fight, offended by the homophobia and ignorance. He uses the man's fears against him to try and gain the advantage.
Requested Knowledge: Any unarmed combat (armbar? breaking an arm?, etc), endurance or strength, dancing or substance related? Tactics? IDK ANYTHING PLS.
Other Notes: Hope you enjoy it. :)
Fame: I think he should get fame for inventing a dance. It's not on the chart, but that's my opinion. Please? lol More officially: A public performance, winning a fight? Whatever you see. I looove fame.
Devotion: He sort of prays to Illaren here? Maybe, not really?
Magic XP: Nah.
Warning: Homophobia and cursing.
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Last edited by Andráska Venora on Tue Dec 20, 2016 5:56 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 144
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Andráska Venora
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Finding Pebbles
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Andras is given a community notice to complete, and as a result is on a quest to find a "magical" cat that heals those that are hurting. In the process, he meets a sick little girl, and sings her to sleep.
Requested Knowledge: Anything. Anything at all.
Other Notes: I had no real plans for this thread so it was interesting to see where it went.
Fame: +5 (for completing the notice), and whatever else you see. Fame is bae.
Devotion: Don't think so?
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Yeeeah, still kinda sad.
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Last edited by Andráska Venora on Tue Dec 20, 2016 5:56 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 111
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Rynmere: Eastern Settlement

Thread The Patter of Tiny Feet
PCs Padraig and Faith
Summary: They go for a walk, find some stuff, including a four tailed cat, snip at each other a bit and decide that sleep is not for the weak.
Requested Knowledge: Alchemy as you see, please. Faith is using her Zuuda "see the dead" ability so knowledge in that is great, if appropriate. Other than that, what you see. Thanks
Other Notes: The cat is bought with Faith's point bank points. Ledger is up to date
Fame: as seen
Devotion: as seen
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Nope. Well, there's a dead cat. They talk about souls and dead people. But nope, nothing graphic etc.

Thanks for the review!
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Last edited by Faith Augustin Champion on Tue Dec 20, 2016 2:04 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 124
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Vluharqih
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City/Area Taken Place:Etzos
Thread Name: Professor Poison Pt. 2
Character(s) Involved: Nauta and I
Quick Summary: Continuation of a very short thread, and we actually learn poisons in this one.
Requested Knowledge: Poisons, Business Mgmt
Other Notes: Nauta is retired, so its just a grade for myself
Fame: None
Warning: We talk about killing people..not really disturbing.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Coal Hands, Warm Heart
Involved: Padraig & Faith
Summary: They discuss visiting Pad's grandfather, how frogs keep alive in the cold and Faith is demanding of him making some sort of nice warm flibberysnippet with his alchemy which keeps the house warm whilst they're out.
Knowledge: Alchemy, chemistry for Pad. Whatever, really. :)
Fame: He insists on walking her home cos it's not safe, maybe? Not sure whatever you see.
Magic: nope
Warning: Nope
Devotion: Nope
Anything else: thanks for reviewing! x
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Rafael Warrick
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City/Area Taken Place: Emea, Willow Woods (Ne'haer)
Thread Name: /viewtopic.php?f=88&t=4375
Character(s) Involved: Rafael Warrick, Nabarra (NPC at Willow Woods Outpost)
Quick Summary: Rafael travels through the portal Labrae made (this thread is a continuation from a thread between Rafael and Labrae) and into Emea to reach the Willow Woods Outpost. He believes he is going there because he's not safe in Rynmere, but in truth he's being sent there to be brainwashed into the Webspinners faction by Nabarra.
Requested Knowledge: Endurance, Acrobatics (for the climbing section that takes place in Emea)
Other Notes: Skimming through Basilisk's last post in the thread that this is a continuation of (link is provided in the first post of this thread) might help make it more clear where Rafael is coming from and where he's going to (and how).
Fame:
Devotion: I suppose he's following Labrae's orders which are an extension of Sintra's wishes?
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Nothing crazy here :)

Many thanks in advance for reviewing. I enjoyed writing this, and I hope you'll enjoy reading it!
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Rafael Warrick
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer, Willow Woods Outpost
Thread Name: Purpose
Character(s) Involved: Rafael Warrick, Nabarra (NPC at Willow Woods Outpost. Member of Webspinner faction)
Quick Summary: The veil is lifted on the plans the Webspinners have for Rafael.
Requested Knowledge: Qe'dreki lore is always welcome.
Other Notes: It's a solo, and there's a lot of talking, but I think it'll be interesting to read! (Hope so!)
Fame:
Devotion: Difficult to say. The Webspinners are Sintra's faction, and Rafael is kind of rolling with them...but I'm not sure if that's devotion or brainwashing.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Nothing crazy here :)
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Malcolm
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Area: Rynmere, Eastern Settlement
Thread: Tapatea
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Aerlan
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Why?
Character(s) Involved: Just lil 'ol me.
Quick Summary: Aerlan's quick trip by boat up to Etzos, a small bit of dialogue & internal observations, and a Flaying.
Requested Knowledge: Anything. :)
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Fame: Probably for murder and magic?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes?
Warning: Just a simple murder. Nothing gruesome.
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"Whoso would be a man must be a nonconformist. He who would gather immortal palms must not be hindered by the name of goodness, but must explore if it be goodness. Nothing is at last sacred but the integrity of your own mind. Absolve you to yourself, and you shall have the suffrage of the world... No law can be sacred to me but that of my nature. Good and bad are but names very readily transferable to that or this; the only right is what is after my constitution, the only wrong what is against it. A man is to carry himself in the presence of all opposition, as if every thing were titular and ephemeral but he. I am ashamed to think how easily we capitulate to badges and names, to large societies and dead institutions."
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Elyna
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris: Eastern Settlement
Thread Name: What killed the cat?
Character(s) Involved: Elyna and Sinith
Quick Summary: Elyna pulls Sinith aside after he jumped into spar with Malcolm
Requested Knowledge:Anything seen
Other Notes:N/A
Fame: Maybe?
Devotion: Probably not
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Nope
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