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- Syhera Ki'hadi
- Posts: 119
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- Race: Biqaj
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Birthday for Baroness
Character(s) Involved: Syhera Ki'hadi & Peake Andaris
Quick Summary: After a fallout with her fake fiance, Peake Andaris, Hera celebrates her birthday. Invited by her mother, Peake comes to apologize and officially attempt to pursue the Biqaj romantically.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see. The more the merrier!
Other Notes: Hoping to get a medal for celebrating a birthday IC. Not sure how recieving gifts will work for this. Kept it fairly vague. Anyway, we had a fun time writing this, and I'm glad to see another installation in the Hera x Peake romance saga. lol
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Nothing.

Thread Name: Birthday for Baroness
Character(s) Involved: Syhera Ki'hadi & Peake Andaris
Quick Summary: After a fallout with her fake fiance, Peake Andaris, Hera celebrates her birthday. Invited by her mother, Peake comes to apologize and officially attempt to pursue the Biqaj romantically.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see. The more the merrier!
Other Notes: Hoping to get a medal for celebrating a birthday IC. Not sure how recieving gifts will work for this. Kept it fairly vague. Anyway, we had a fun time writing this, and I'm glad to see another installation in the Hera x Peake romance saga. lol
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Nothing.
Last edited by Syhera Ki'hadi on Wed Dec 14, 2016 2:46 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 119
- Ashira Ward
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- Race: Human
- Profession: Herbalist/Scrivener
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris/Rynmere
Thread Name: Calm Waters
Character(s) Involved: Ashira Ward
Quick Summary: Ashira goes to the bank.
Requested Knowledge: Maybe Mathematics, Business Management or Forgery? Whatever you see really
Other Notes: None
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None
Thread Name: Calm Waters
Character(s) Involved: Ashira Ward
Quick Summary: Ashira goes to the bank.
Requested Knowledge: Maybe Mathematics, Business Management or Forgery? Whatever you see really
Other Notes: None
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None
word count: 47
Will be finishing existing threads with Nir'wei and Ivy so my partners can get their points. Then I'm out. As such I will not be starting anymore threads.
- Vincent D'Ordyn
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere
Thread Name: Seeking Information
Character(s) Involved: Vincent "Gray" D'Ordyn
Quick Summary: Gray buys a piece of information off a tavern owner.
Requested Knowledge: What ever you see
Other Notes: This is an older thread that I wrote at the start. Was something I never thought about actually finishing as I had hoped originally for others to join. Now, just wrapped it up as a solo.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A

Thread Name: Seeking Information
Character(s) Involved: Vincent "Gray" D'Ordyn
Quick Summary: Gray buys a piece of information off a tavern owner.
Requested Knowledge: What ever you see
Other Notes: This is an older thread that I wrote at the start. Was something I never thought about actually finishing as I had hoped originally for others to join. Now, just wrapped it up as a solo.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
word count: 85
- Symbri
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- Race: Human
- Profession: Monk
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Flips and flops /viewtopic.php?f=192&t=4492
Character(s) Involved:Sym and Kylar
Quick Summary: A pair meets and butts heads
Requested Knowledge:Surprise me?
Other Notes:Nope
Fame:Prolly not
Devotion: no
Magic XP: no
Warning:don't think so.
Andraska Venora
Thread Name: Flips and flops /viewtopic.php?f=192&t=4492
Character(s) Involved:Sym and Kylar
Quick Summary: A pair meets and butts heads
Requested Knowledge:Surprise me?
Other Notes:Nope
Fame:Prolly not
Devotion: no
Magic XP: no
Warning:don't think so.
word count: 52
- Ashira Ward
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- Posts: 90
- Joined: Wed Nov 09, 2016 8:20 pm
- Race: Human
- Profession: Herbalist/Scrivener
- Renown: 43
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris/Rynmere
Thread Name: A Spoonful of Sugar
Character(s) Involved: Ashira Ward
Quick Summary: Ashira makes jam (also it's poisonous and she reads a bodice ripper)
Requested Knowledge: Cooking, Poison
Other Notes: None
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None
Thread Name: A Spoonful of Sugar
Character(s) Involved: Ashira Ward
Quick Summary: Ashira makes jam (also it's poisonous and she reads a bodice ripper)
Requested Knowledge: Cooking, Poison
Other Notes: None
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: None
word count: 51
Will be finishing existing threads with Nir'wei and Ivy so my partners can get their points. Then I'm out. As such I will not be starting anymore threads.
- Faith Augustin Champion
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- Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
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- Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
- Renown: 2120
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere: Eastern Settlement.
Thread Name:Just one key
Character(s) Involved: Padraig and Faith
Quick Summary: So, after three weeks of living together, more miscommunication and near misses than any pair should go through ~ this is the morning after the night before. Where, like the romantics they are, they talk about alchemy and dead people.
Requested Knowledge: Would appreciate Alchemy as seen, especially Padraig. Also, Faith is using an ability from her blessing in the final post, which I explain in there. Knowledge on that would be awesome please! Anything else you see.
Other Notes: None, really.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Couple of Famula prayers and stuff, maybe?
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: There is a discussion on ear dimples and some fairly serious sappiness. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Thread Name:Just one key
Character(s) Involved: Padraig and Faith
Quick Summary: So, after three weeks of living together, more miscommunication and near misses than any pair should go through ~ this is the morning after the night before. Where, like the romantics they are, they talk about alchemy and dead people.
Requested Knowledge: Would appreciate Alchemy as seen, especially Padraig. Also, Faith is using an ability from her blessing in the final post, which I explain in there. Knowledge on that would be awesome please! Anything else you see.
Other Notes: None, really.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Couple of Famula prayers and stuff, maybe?
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: There is a discussion on ear dimples and some fairly serious sappiness. Thanks so much for reviewing!
word count: 134
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."
~ Rharne HQ
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- Sintih
- Posts: 493
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- Race: Yludih
- Profession: Student
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City/Area Taken Place: Midtown Andaris
Thread Name: Lowtown Snow Party in Midtown
Character(s) Involved: Faith, Padraig, Sintih, Lili(NPC), Marik(NPC)
Quick Summary: Sintih invites Faith to a street party to celebrate the start of Zi'da and meets her boyfriend, much to his dismay.
Requested Knowledge: The game answers would be preferred and anything else you see.
Other Notes: No
Fame: Maybe a small amount for Sin being part of organizing the event, otherwise no.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: There's enough jealousy to go around.

Thread Name: Lowtown Snow Party in Midtown
Character(s) Involved: Faith, Padraig, Sintih, Lili(NPC), Marik(NPC)
Quick Summary: Sintih invites Faith to a street party to celebrate the start of Zi'da and meets her boyfriend, much to his dismay.
Requested Knowledge: The game answers would be preferred and anything else you see.
Other Notes: No
Fame: Maybe a small amount for Sin being part of organizing the event, otherwise no.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: There's enough jealousy to go around.
word count: 91
- Faith Augustin Champion
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere: Andaris
Thread Name: Tea for Three
Character(s) Involved: Padraig, Tristan and Faith
Quick Summary: Faith and Padraig visit Tristan's house. The two men hate each other, shout a bit, it's very very awkward.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see
Other Notes: This has been one of my favourite threads of all time. These two lads can write!
Fame: Whatever you see?
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: There is a discussion about the definition of 'consensual' I guess, and some comments about sex. Nothing likely to scare, scar or otherwise damage, though
Thanks so very much for reviewing!

Thread Name: Tea for Three
Character(s) Involved: Padraig, Tristan and Faith
Quick Summary: Faith and Padraig visit Tristan's house. The two men hate each other, shout a bit, it's very very awkward.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see
Other Notes: This has been one of my favourite threads of all time. These two lads can write!
Fame: Whatever you see?
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: There is a discussion about the definition of 'consensual' I guess, and some comments about sex. Nothing likely to scare, scar or otherwise damage, though

Thanks so very much for reviewing!
word count: 105
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."
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- Mal
- Posts: 400
- Joined: Mon Sep 12, 2016 11:15 pm
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- Profession: Thief
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer Outskirts
Thread Name: The Becomer and the Beast
Character(s) Involved: Mal
Quick Summary: Mal and his mentor arrive at the outskirts of Bayward. Mal is ordered to kill a Lotharro for a totem.
Requested Knowledge: Strength, Stealth, Unarmed, Becoming, Endurance, Discipline, Tactics, anything you see!
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Infamy for murdering a man whilst in a form wrought by magic?
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Becoming
Warning: [M] Sexual reference, detailed gore and violence.
Thanks for the review <3

Thread Name: The Becomer and the Beast
Character(s) Involved: Mal
Quick Summary: Mal and his mentor arrive at the outskirts of Bayward. Mal is ordered to kill a Lotharro for a totem.
Requested Knowledge: Strength, Stealth, Unarmed, Becoming, Endurance, Discipline, Tactics, anything you see!
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Infamy for murdering a man whilst in a form wrought by magic?
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Becoming
Warning: [M] Sexual reference, detailed gore and violence.
Thanks for the review <3
Last edited by Mal on Mon Dec 12, 2016 10:42 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 87