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Zvezdana Venora
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Joined: Sat Apr 02, 2016 7:30 pm
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Profession: Thunder Priestess
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City/Area Taken Place: Burhan, Rynmere; Out at Sea; Rharne
Thread Name: The End of a Venora
Character(s) Involved: Zvezdana
Quick Summary: This is the journey that Zvezdana takes from Burhan, Rynmere to Rharne. The beginning of a new chapter in her life.
Requested Knowledge: Negotiation, Xiur Lore, Locations, etc.
Other Notes: Please see OOC notes at the bottom of Posts 1, 2, and 4.
Fame: At your discretion.
Devotion: At your discretion (Probably negative Syroa if any)
Magic XP: None.
Warning: None.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Posts: 4764
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
Renown: 2120
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: the bored ward snored....etc
Character(s) Involved: Nir'wei and Faith
Quick Summary: Faith and Nir'wei almost hunt a gorde, then realise they're too far away and can't be bothered. :)
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see?
Other Notes: Thanks!
Fame: as seen!
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None
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Aeon
Posts: 529
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: 183
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Dragonsitting
Character(s) Involved: Aeon and some NPCs
Quick Summary: Aeon watches the jacadon in the Skye Verath Lodge for a day while Gaspard is out of town
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen.
Other Notes:Thank you!
Fame:Don't think so
Devotion: No
Magic XP: NO
Warning: I said badass once.
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"A hero is someone who steps up when everyone else backs down"
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Ti'niva
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Posts: 315
Joined: Fri Sep 16, 2016 3:41 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Hunter
Renown: 98
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City/Area Taken Place: Emea
Thread Name: The Panther
Character(s) Involved: Ti'niva
Quick Summary: Ti'niva briefly meets his familiar for the first time in a forest somewhere he has never been before.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks!
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Kura Wolfsdotter
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Posts: 621
Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2016 12:39 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Council Member
Renown: 645
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City/Area Taken Place: Hotlands (Flashback)
Thread Name: [Flashback] The Owl's Song of Death
Character(s) Involved: Nell, Kura
Quick Summary: Kura meets, recruits, and sort of befriends Nell.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever fits.
Other Notes: Kura and Nell get a bit suggestive towards the end, but all the fun happens behind an FTB
Fame: Whatever fits.
Devotion: Possibly some for Raskalarn, but that'd be stretching it a bit maybe. I'll leave it up to reviewer discrestion.
Magic XP: No
Warning: Bit of strong language and the two openly discuss sex.
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Sabine
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Posts: 461
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 2:27 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Investigator/Priestess
Renown: 116
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Dead or Alive
Character(s) Involved: Vincent D'Ordyn, Sabine, Kala
Quick Summary: A continuation of the Fade Away Fighting Arena thread from Ymiden. Gray is shot with an arrow and Sabine helps bring him to Kala. Secrets are uncovered along the way!
Requested Knowledge: Skills, people, locations, news. Skill knowledge for Endurance, Medicine, Storytelling, and possibly Strength & Deception would be much appreciated. Whatever else you're able to find would also be wonderful!
Other Notes: This was a very fun story to tell. Thank you for reviewing!
Fame: Yes please! +2 for Gray giving a gift at the end of the thread, and whatever else you can find (maybe something for Kala & Sabine helping Gray?).
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Lei'lira
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Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:41 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Farmer
Renown: 267
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, Warrick
Thread Name: Broken Wings
Character(s) Involved: Lei'lira, Victor Warrick
Quick Summary: Lei'lira has a discussion with her uncle.
Requested Knowledge: Any that applies.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: If it applies.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: Maybe? There's no violence, and nothing graphic. But the discussion is about what to tell Lei'lira's family about her being raped.
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Finn
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Posts: 356
Joined: Mon Sep 19, 2016 10:06 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Priest and doctor assistant
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City/Area Taken Place: Desnind
Thread Name: Diary entry - Vhalar 64, Arc 709
Character(s) Involved: Finn
Quick Summary: This is a bit of an odd one. I have decided to make Finn write diary and post these in cities where he wrote them. So there isn't story going on but a lot of reflection. So this is a trial (and maybe an error) to see if it can be reviewed and what can be squeezed out of it. In this particular entry, Finn reflects on the lesson on Xanthea that Ti gave him.
Requested Knowledge: I am guessing anything Linguistic related, but I am curious if perhaps detection could be earned through these as well.
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: It might be challenging to peer review but it might as well be a good exercise and challenge to the peer reviewers abilities/patience? =D
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They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

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Kylar
Posts: 161
Joined: Mon Oct 24, 2016 12:14 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: Mercenary/Skyrider
Renown: 27
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, Venora
Thread Name: Good people drink (/viewtopic.php?f=196&t=4314)
Character(s) Involved: Atashi and Kylar
Quick Summary: The two friends go out for a drink, only to get in a violent encounter
Requested Knowledge: Anything combat for Kylar, and some shield for Atashi
Other Notes: Nope
Fame: Maybe?
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Minor violence, but still not really
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Last edited by Kylar on Mon Dec 05, 2016 1:57 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 68
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Elyna
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Joined: Wed Mar 30, 2016 12:31 pm
Race: Naerikk
Profession: Official Troublemaker
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere
Thread Name: Retribution
Character(s) Involved: Elyna (Stolen Malcolms NPC's with permission)
Quick Summary: Elyna faces Avari after she attacked Malcolm and Elsie
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Anything seen
Devotion: Pre points?
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Threat and peril? Weird creepiness
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