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Welcome to the Request Thread! Here you may make requests for your finished threads to be reviewed. The Prophets here are more than happy to help! Posting your review requests here makes it easy for all Prophets and Reviewers to keep track of who asked for what and when so that we can all work together to ensure that your threads are reviewed quickly and fairly.

Please limit your requests to one thread per post... so if you have 5 threads you want reviewed, please make sure 5 individual requests are made.

Remember, although there is a section for Requested Knowledge in the template, please be aware that what you say are just guidelines. It is at the discretion of the person grading your thread whether or not they take into account your specific requests while they read the thread and come to their own conclusions about what your character deserves. Also, be aware that quantity does not necessarily equal quality, and may not equal more points. Once you reach expert or higher in any given skill it will get harder and harder to gain points for those skills as your character grows in competency. If you go into careful detail of your actions, you are more likely to get larger amounts of experience points.

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Rynmere/Andaris

Thread Two in the Crows Nest
PCs: Faith and Tristan
Summary: Tristan is seasick, they discover that he's not seasick when he's high up. Faith is afraid of heights.
Knowledges: Whatever seen.
Warning: They have a canoodle in the crows nest. Nothing to concern anyone
Magic: nope.
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Thread Name: Black Barbra.
Character(s) Involved: Quio, Bronik, but Bronik retired so the thread is finished as a solo.
Quick Summary: Quio and Bronik chase Black Barbra's bounty. There's a bit of an offski and Quio ends up having to deal with the pirates on his own. Erm. A bit of questionable stuff happens.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you see.
Other Notes: Kingdom said to leave this for her to grade, thanks!
Fame: Maybe positive for completing a bounty? But then again, maybe negative for the methods used.
Magic XP: Nope!
Warning: There's some foul language and death and blood and stuff. I'm going to mark it as Mature just in case.

Thanks!.
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Rynmere/Andaris

Thread Name: Along the Road
Character(s) Involved: Sol!
Quick Summary: Sol and Hesphali are chased because bandits are mad, it goes poorly.
Requested Knowledge: Some blades and meditation would be nice, but really whatever you see.
Other Notes: Nonso
Fame: More negatives! Buwha
Magic XP: Always
Warning: Violent, as usual.
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Viden


Topic Summary: Linika hears a warning of trouble for Audrae and must arrange a message in a place where no one trusts her.
Who Was Involved: Linika and Whisper
What You Hope To Receive:
Knowledges of Seduction, Negotiation, Persuasion, Tactics, Deception...that sort of thing. As well as the "Unseen" (the shadow creatures), the Ranger's Lodge location, and the NPCs within.
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Topic Summary: Memory thread. Homework for Padraig from his classes at the university, dealing with perpetual motion, gravity, inertia. First thread in pursuit of a letter in physics. Have pm'd Kingdom in advance and deducted 100 gn from my ledger.
Who Was Involved: Padraig + npcs Myron and Professor Karre, mother ( professor ) and son.
What You Hope To Receive:
Knowledges in physics, gravity, perpetual motion, maybe teaching. Whatever seems relevant.
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Scalvoris

Thread: Journey from Gunvorton
Player(s) Involved: Eir, Amphitrite
Timestamp: ARC 716th, Vhalar 1st Trial
Location: Gunvorton
Grade Requests: A speedwagon and a horse.
Other: The thread is a prelude to the thread currently being moderated by Djinn, involving Amphitrite, Eir, and Nixie. Though, the thread is still underway at the time of this post. Thread link here, The Shadows' plunder.
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Etzos

link to thread: /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=2771
Players involved (including mods): Nauta (because no one else wanted to join me, boo hoo)
Knowledge you were hoping to acquire Razorfins, Razorfins and more Razorfins.
Expenses/Rewards anticipated: Razorfin oil (3-4 applications maybe?) Fame (for returning tool belt if possible, otherwise keeping that, and for giving out nice fishies to the neighbours because that is some rare shit)
Additional Notes: Omnomnomnom
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Etzos

link to thread: /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=3371
Players involved (including mods): Nauta
Knowledge you were hoping to acquire RAZORFINS!
Expenses/Rewards anticipated: -1 frostbite. 3 applications of razorfin oils maybe? And fame, because that has to be some real good fish.
Additional Notes: RAZORFINS! SUSHI!
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link to thread: On Shaky Wings
Players involved (including mods): Nightshade and Myself
Knowledge you were hoping to acquire Me: Surgery/Medicine Stuff, some Poison stuff regarding the effectiveness of Leechbane as a poison, maybe a flying one or two?

Nightshade: Some blades, if you can find any,
Expenses/Rewards anticipated: Injuries Galore, but we both will receive proper medical attention.

Positive fame for Nightshade (helping the man, saving me twice, etc.)

Positive fame for Alex (only counts while she's Human form), or negative while Valyeria (if you can find any).

Nightshade also did collect the carowa's horns, so please include that as well.
Additional Notes: A longer thread, though I personally found it entertaining to write. Hope you enjoy!
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