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Hey Frid, just some ideas/suggestions before I stamp my approval:

1. I believe you should change their weight. Tigers, much smaller than these creatures, can get up to 670 lbs - yet the Llewnos can only get to 600.

2. Their price should be changed. The Sohr Khal, moderate-highs, are 1000 GN untrained. Kejradin, highs, are 1500 GN untrained, 2500 GN trained. I suggest making them 2,000 GN trained, 1,200 GN untrained.

3. They are a high danger beast, yet do not feel like it. I would emphasize their reflexes, agility, speed to make it more clear just how nimble and dexterous they are.

4. Please reference the age of adulthood in the development section.

Will all of these, I can approve these. Good submission!
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Fixed, sir!
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Alright, all monster submissions are approved. :)
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Name: Halden Wayne
Created by: Fridgar
Race: Lotharro
Birthday/Age: 33rd Saun 658
Title: Dire
Skills: 70 Hunting, 90 Blades (Dual Daggers), 60 Strength, 50 Tactics, 45 Fieldcraft, 40 Leadership
Details: Halden is a renowned prick among the hounds and pups of Kaer Jeger, though is always open and friendly toward other dire and Packmasters alike. He has little patience for those he sees as beneath him and is always aggressive despite being the oldest Dire in the path. He's verbally abusive, provocative, crude and difficult to work with. It is believed that his pack isn't new and that pups and hounds deliberately avoid it in fear of being scrutinised or constantly attacked both verbally by this renowned dickhead and the monsters that he will have you throw yourself to in the field. It's also rumoured that he cost a hound his left arm by sending him to fight a Solghannon by himself.

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Name: Rachel
Created by: Fridgar
Race: Human
Birthday/Age: 94th Ashan 692
Title: None
Skills: Strength: 40, Endurance: 70, Unarmed Combat: 55, Defiance: 85, Dancing: 40, Intimidation: 30
Details: Rachel came to Uthaldria a rough seven arcs ago after being initiated in defiance. Seeking strength and glory, she trained hard on killing the beasts of Gauthrel and has killed one of nearly every monster in the east with trophies to show for it. Words that are often used to describe her include; angry, scary, loud, annoying, fighty, narcissistic and determined. She's quick to pick fights with monsters and Lotharen alike. Many have approached her in search of initiation to Defiance, because the Lotharen think magic is cool. None have been granted the spark however and most will return home with blunt force and burn injuries.

She has named the elements of earth and fire as her kin and rightly so. She's more durable than some Lothar and fights with the white hot intensity of a thousand suns. Some find it embarrassing to be knocked off their feet by her, but those who know her know there is no shame in such defeat.

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Name: Ren Norendel von Lordaeron
Created by: Alistair
Race: Biqaj
Birthday/Age: 18
Title: Plaguebearer
Skills: Yithnai (1), Sovereign - 80, Endurance - 70, Acrobatics - 65, Dustforge - 60, Blades: Longsword - 55, Stealth - 50, Persuasion - 50, Deception - 40, Poisons - 40
Details: Ren Norendel von Lordaeron, usually only called Ren even in public occasions, is the son of Lucien Lordaeron (Wilder Roksgard) and Demavend Norendel (Kriger Roksgard). Loaded with political and public scandal, Ren is known as one of the most batty men in Uthaldria, demonstrating a variety of vulgar, inhumane, hyper-sexual and violent behaviors.

Recently, he has become overwhelmed with illness, resulting in him being sent to Kaelserad to be treated as a long-term patient by Alistair Venora.

In truth, he has been blessed by Lisirra for his volatile, chaotic behavior and his will to undermine the society around him. Ren now openly seeks to spread great diseases through Clan Stahlmark's holdings, an act of vengeance for what he deems to be an unacceptably mindless society.
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Danger Level: Low (If somehow they engage in combat, High-Exceptional)

Details: Roamers live in the plains of Mac Tegan. Their largest and oldest beast stands more than thrice the size of a lurker, estimated at a hundred feet tall. All Roamers are twice as long as they are tall including their tail length, walk on four massive legs that appear to be giant trees with roots and all. Moss, grass and all kinds of foliage grow all over these creatures. They appear parasitical, as though they're growing off of and leeching from the host when this really isn't the case. They travel in one large herd that constantly roams at a very slow pace across the plains of Mac Tegan in the east.

Lifespan and Development: Roamers are asexual, like plants. Every few arcs, the herd will settle down and spread seeds grown from the variety of plants on their back. The seeds will sow and from them grow balls of tangled roots. These tangled roots form over the course of three seasons and eventually take the shape of miniature, or baby roamers. They do not stop growing but all form at around two feet tall and four feet long. The oldest and longest living Roamer stands over a hundred feet tall and measure more than two hundred feet long.

The roamers were roaming Mac Tegan before the land was even discovered by the original beings, predating all mortal history. This implies that the dragons are the ones who created them or put them there, for reasons long forgotten.

Diet: The Roamers do not eat. The plants on their bodies absorb sunlight and feed it toward the whole system, evenly distributing energy to the Roamer. They do drink, however. Often times, they stop by rivers for trials on end and drink enough to drain the river in some parts. This could eventually become problematic for mac tegan, but so far, few problems have arose.

Temperament: Docile and curious. Roamers will often appear fascinated by beings made of flesh, just as their creators were. If a person crosses their path, the creature will actively avoid trampling them and the herd will split around them. If not that, the Roamer will stop and lower its head to get a better look of the person, observing intently.

Roamers have even been known to separate from the herd to guide lost children back to Shaelenberg, safe, sound and well fed with vegetables and fruits grown from the back of the Roamer.

Abilities: They absorb sunlight and convert it to energy, do not feel pain and live ageless, no one has ever seen or heard of a dead Roamer.

Weaknesses: They're very slow and presumably weak to fire. Each step can take up to ten trills to complete and they move at turtle-like speeds.

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