Snowy reflections

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The cities and villages of Melrath are as varied and diverse as they come. The capital of Raelia is the the jewel of this western kingdom, playing host to a merchants, artisans, Aesir priests, as well as a cut throat political landscape dominated by the nobles of Raelia. To the south in the depths of the Myrkvior Forest lies Melrath's second largest, and oldest city, Fensalir. Here people have learned to live alongside spirits and the natural world by maintaining their loyalty to traditions laid down the first Melrathi. To the east lies the small fishing village of Noatun, and to the western mountains rests the Mer city of Verimeer, the brewing town of Alivilda and the alpine village Vormund.
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Re: Snowy reflections

Illuvia


Damn. Shame this couldn't have gone on longer, it was just getting good! I liked the contrast of characters here, Goku much more guarded and quiet but Luvi kinda bringing out more words from him. She seemed to have that effect. I enjoyed how you portrayed her reacting to his pendant's compulsion, too. Rather understandingly, really, considering it's essentially low-yield mind control!
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  • Knowledges:
    • Athletics: distributing your weight whilst running in heavy clothes
    • Athletics: Adjusting your stride to factor in enhanced strength
    • Detection: keeping an eye out for ice on the ground
    • Endurance: getting the wind knocked out of you
    • Hone: the rune of endurance relieves fatigue, but it’s only temporary
    • Hone: the rune of regeneration can heal, but it’s only usable by Lucis mages
    • Meditation: recognizing when your mind is being influenced by magic
    • Meditation: trying to create a mental barrier against foreign influence
    • Meditation: x1
    • Socialization: Changing the subject

Goku


Hope to see more from you if/when you get back, mate, and like I said last time: a better avatar picture and a real template would go a LONG way to making this look more polished. The writing itself was okay, but this wasn't a post where much was accomplished. Still, Goku's inner turmoil over using the pendant was interesting, even if he ended up jumping on the first chance to do so lol
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