Review Requests 2.3

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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)


Thread: [Rosebay] Unsleeping
City/Area: Towns and Settlements
Skills: Detection (comp), Endurance (comp), Combat (Polearms & Staves) (comp), Fieldcraft (gm), Animal Husbandry (comp). Tactics (nov)

Knowledges
Combat (Polearms & Staves): the correct grip for a pitchfork
Combat (Polearms & Staves): tossing things accurately with a pitchfork
Animal Husbandry: mucking out a pony
Endurance: going a night without sleep
Tactics: patrolling a settlement
Tactics: patrols should cover the whole area



Renown: (how much and for what?) Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) No
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Collaboration: (Yes/No) No
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) No
Local Language Thread? (Yes - Name of Language / No) No
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Last edited by Dandelion on Tue Feb 07, 2023 3:11 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 139
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: This is a nonlucid dream


Thread: Glass Castle
City/Area: Dreamscapes & The Veil

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Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Language. Drugs. Etc.


Thread: Dancing Bait
City/Area: Western: Etzos
Skills Used:
GM: Detection
Master: Tactics
Expert: Leadership, Resistance, Seduction, Socialization

Knowledge Requested: None


Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: This is an adult forum thread with sexual stuff in it.


Thread: Cold Evening
City/Area: Adult Forum
Skills Used
Socialization: expert
Seduction: competent
Detection: expert

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none

Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Last edited by Eternity on Thu Jan 26, 2023 11:08 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 50
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: None :-)


Thread: [Sweetsong] A timeshare kitchen?
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

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When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

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Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: None, though I'm using the two NPC from the cooking competition Enid and Angela.


Thread: Come now Mr Miller - Part 1
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: 5 - Meeting with a reporter and taking an interview.
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: None, though I'm using the two NPC from the cooking competition Enid and Angela.


Thread: Come now Mr Miller - Part 2 ~ Adrift
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: 5 - Potentual shenanigans exposed to the reporter and details of Angela and Winston's platonic home-share.
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Darius and secret-Nir'wei (and Jarad the builder) construct a sally port for the barony.


Thread: The Front Of It
City/Area: Faldrass Island
Knowledge:

Darius:
Skills Used:
Engineering (Novice)
Logistics (Expert)
Tactics (Master)
Teaching (Novice)

Knowledges:
Engineering: Designing a sally port to be in a defensibly strong part of a structure.
Engineering: Creating an entrance above ground level.
Engineering: Modifying the design of a structure after construction has begun.
Logistics: Managing limited resources when a design changes.
Tactics: A sally port enables defenders to sally forth.
Tactics: Two sets of doors on a sally port makes it a more secure defensive position.
Tactics: A portcullis increases the defensive capabilities of a fortification.
Teaching: Explaining the tactical benefits of a structure to a layperson.

Nir'wei:
Skills Used:
Acting (Novice)
Deception (Novice)
Woodworking (Competent)

Knowledges:
2 x Acting
3 x Deception
3 x Woodworking

Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: None, though I'm using the two NPC from the cooking competition Enid and Angela.


Thread: Come now Mr Miller - Part 3 ~ Fish food
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: 5 - Angela shared her entire story and the reporter made it out alive to tell their story, having met the walking chest with a complex inside (now including a swimming pool :-p).
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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word count: 117

Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Adult forum thread. Sexual stuff at the end


Thread: Autumn Toils
City/Area: Adult Forum

Skills Used:

Storytelling: Novice
Writing: Novice
Seduction: Expert

Requested Knowledge:
none

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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