Review Requests 2.3

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Zemos
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Nope


Thread: [Certificate Homework] Reading is for Bookworms
City/Area: University of Scalvoris (Viden Academy)
Zemos
Skills Used:

Research: Novice
Larceny: Novice
Medicine: Expert
Discipline: Competent
Meditation: Competent

Knowledge Requested:

Medicine: x 3
Discipline: x 2
Research: x 4

Elisabeth
Skills Used:

Logistics – GM (Tier 2 granted but not approved yet)
Research – Master
Discipline – Master
Etiquette – Expert
Investigation – Expert
Psychology – Expert
Science – Novice
Socialization – GM
Medicine - Expert
Knowledge Requested
Research x2
Investigation x2
Science x2
Medicine x1
Socialization x1

Renown:Dunno
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Zemos on Fri Jan 06, 2023 4:11 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 93

Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Ulric
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Language warning. Contains a little sword fight.


Thread: A Sense of Unity
City/Area: Western: Etzos

Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Nope
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
word count: 63
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Kisaik
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Training mostly. Old abandoned moderated thread I tried to finish up.


Thread: Grand Reopening!!
City/Area: Yaralon Proper

Renown:Dunno
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
word count: 156
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Thaldan
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)


Thread: The Boys Road Trip 5
City/Area: The Imperial Regions
Knowledges used: Storytelling (Competent)
Socialization (Novice)
Detection (Novice)

Requested: Storytelling x3
Socialization x1
Detection x2

Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
Last edited by Thaldan on Fri Feb 03, 2023 3:32 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 54
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Darius Baer Bottom
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Just a typical Darius solo thre-- OMG, Darius kisses someone for the first time! :o :oops:


Thread: All It Takes
City/Area: Faldrass Island

Renown: No.
Wealth Points: No.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.
Local Language Thread? No.
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word count: 107
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Winston
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: During this thread he crafts some more elements of his Alchemical forge. As a result of this thread I would like to claim that he has managed to get his basic alchemical forge set-up (as claimed in the loot section :-)).


Thread: [Sweetsong] I give him one cycle till he's a 'MAD' Alchemist ~ Part 2
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods


Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No

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word count: 144

Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Max
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: None


Thread: The Stranger
City/Area: Korlasir
Skills Used:
GM: Detection
Expert: Resistance, Socialization

Knowledge Requested:
Philosophy: Establishing Virtues are the Key to Becoming Virtuous
Philosophy: Personal Definition of a Good Person
Philosophy: Engaging Another in Philosophical Discussion
Philosophy: An Over-Simplified Path Toward Being Good


Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
word count: 70
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Eternity
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Nonlucid dream


Thread: Catching a thief
City/Area: Dreamscapes & The Veil

Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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word count: 32
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Winston
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: I borrowed a few NPCs with Kisaik's permissions.

Also, I want to be clear that the well being cleaned is not loot or even owned by anyone. The idea here is that the NPC was preparing them for someone else, some unnamed NPC, so there is no gain going on in this thread beyond RP and Skills. :-)


Thread: It's a kind of magic
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: 0
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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word count: 114

Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Lorogh
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Violence, mass battle. Nothing too graphic.


Thread: [Forest of Corpses] Mowing the Lawn
City/Area: Cahryst

Renown:He took part in a skirmish I should think it's worth renown.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Yes Atvian
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Last edited by Lorogh on Sat Feb 04, 2023 8:35 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 176
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