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Notes/Warnings: Mature tag for drugs. This whole thread is basically about being drugged up. It is a NON-lucid dream thread.


Thread: Drugged up (2/2)
City/Area: Dreamscapes & The Veil

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
PM Resolved
I have DM'ed the Player to suggest that this and the previous threads have not ended as a dream. I.e. they actually HAPPENED and were not just a dream.

I'm waiting to see how she wishes to proceed (i.e. make it clearly a dream in the thread or change her request type from non-lucid dream and claim knowledges) :-)

Resolution: Player confirmed that this was 100% Non-lucid Dream.
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Notes/Warnings: Lucid Dream in the old dreamwalking system. A little odd but basically a conversation that never quite concluded. Abandoned as the other player has left the site.


Thread: The Caliginous Spire I [Construction]
City/Area: Dreamscapes & The Veil
Skills Used: Dreamwalking (Master)

Renown: no
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yeah
Magic Experience?: no
Local Language Thread? no
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word count: 64
Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Notes/Warnings: Abandoned. It's been so long I almost don't know what to do witth Woe here. Hopefuly the 1100+ words I wrote are enough for credit. I'm not asking for knowledge.


Thread: Boy, You Gonna Learn...
City/Area: Gleam
Skills Used: Empathy (Expert) Meditation (Master), Discipline (Master), Teaching (Competent)

Renown: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? no
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word count: 70
Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Merged Shadow
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Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)


Thread: Immortals and Morse code
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods
Skills used. Research (Novice), Detection (Competant)

Knowledges: Research x3
Medicine x1
Detection x2

Renown: no
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Local Language Thread? no
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Notes/Warnings: The Alchemical process Winston uses is based on the method taught to him by Kisaik as the 'Tunawa Alchemy'. From this thread he designs and gains a forge for doing this while smithing.


Thread: [Sweetsong] I give him one cycle till he's a 'MAD' Alchemist
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods



Renown: 5 - People of Sweetsong are learning more about Chest, Winston and Winston is continuing to train up Cho (a settlement NPC). Who is now completing his first minor commission for someone in the settlement?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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Thread: Second Day
City/Area: University of Scalvoris (Viden Academy)
Skills Used
Ensorcelling: novice
Socialization: Expert
Discipline: Novice
Meditation: Novice

Knowledge Claimed
Ensorcelling: Wells are solid masses of chaotic energy
Ensorcelling: Ensorceller’s tools are weak ensorcelled items
Ensorcelling: x2
Discipline: x1
Meditation: x1

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Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
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Thread: Not Quite a Well
City/Area: University of Scalvoris (Viden Academy)

Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: (No)
Local Language Thread? (No)
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Last edited by Eternity on Mon Dec 19, 2022 2:50 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 95
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Notes/Warnings: None? Final thread in the long term series/task that Vri gave Balthazar. Not claiming knowledge since he follows a path he has taken before and uses skills he is otherwise very familiar with so I didn't feel he really learned anything related to skills.


Thread: The Promise Fulfilled
City/Area: Surrounding Waters & Landmarks

Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: If applicable.
Local Language Thread? Nope.
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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Notes/Warnings: Some sexual overtones so I put a mature tag. Also, I got carried away with the cosmetology grind


Thread: Getting Ready
City/Area: Scalvoris Town

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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Last edited by Eternity on Mon Dec 19, 2022 9:45 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 104
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Notes/Warnings: this is an adult forum thread. sexual overtones and kissing, no sex.


Thread: Awkward
City/Area: Adult Forum

Renown: 5 for trying to manipulate her classmate
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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