Review Requests 2.3

For completed review request threads only.

Moderators: Staff, Peer Reviewer, Wiki Worker, 18+ Peer Reviewer

User avatar
Eternity
Approved Character
Posts: 300
Joined: Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:05 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: none


Thread: A typical free morning
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills Used
Gardening: Novice
Mount: Novice
Combat Blades: Novice
Animal Training: Novice
Strength: novice
Endurance: novice
Athletics: novice

Knowledge Claimed
Gardening: pulling out weeds
Mount: 1
Mount: Squeeze with your calves to make the horse go.
Combat Blades: 2
Animal Training: 1

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
word count: 74
User avatar
Balthazar Black
Approved Character
Posts: 2135
Joined: Fri Jan 18, 2019 1:15 am
Race: Human
Profession: Leader of The Black Cats
Renown: 1885
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: Some violence. Thread features Balthazar helping at the Combat Festival in The Proving Grounds by giving unarmed combat lessons. Not claiming full knowledge for it. There was a post that I deleted to make a new thread, so I do not want the magic knowledges or the blade knowledges for this thread, but I cannot remove them as far as I know.


Thread: Beaten To The Ground
City/Area: Scalvoris Town

Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Nope
Local Language Thread? Nope
Image
word count: 118

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
User avatar
Balthazar Black
Approved Character
Posts: 2135
Joined: Fri Jan 18, 2019 1:15 am
Race: Human
Profession: Leader of The Black Cats
Renown: 1885
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: Final part of Balthazar's participation in the Combat Festival, features sword combat. This is the thread where I meant to claim the blades and magic knowledge, not the last one.


Thread: Three Strikes To Win
City/Area: Scalvoris Town

Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: Nope.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: If applicable.
Local Language Thread? No

Image
word count: 97

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
User avatar
Winston
Peer Reviewer
Peer Reviewer
Posts: 1601
Joined: Sun Apr 17, 2022 8:40 pm
Race: Cadouri
Profession: Groundskeeper
Renown: 1111
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 9

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: In this thread, Winston teaches some of the Sweetsong NPCs some blacksmithing and more importantly, what he discovered about making Glass/Metal Alloys.

During this thread, the NPC Cho agrees to apprentice under Winston in exchange for access to material and the forge and of course an apprentices wage.

I have already sought permission to use this NPC in this fashion from Vega and she was happy for me to do so (peer review approval pending, of course).

So if this gets approved, I will consider this NCP Winston’s apprentice during ongoing threading (I know it does not become my NPC, it still belongs to Vega and the settlement, but for the purpose of RP, Winston has an apprentice)


Thread: [Sweetsong] Do you want to smelt a RAINNNNBOOOOOW?!
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: 10 - as well as teaching for free and sharing a potentially rare bit of know how at no cost, Winston has offered to take on a settler as an apprentice. :-)
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No

Image
word count: 234

Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
User avatar
Eternity
Approved Character
Posts: 300
Joined: Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:05 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: nonlucid dream thread


Thread: What if I started a business? Part 1
City/Area: Dreamscapes & The Veil

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: n
Magic Experience?: n
Local Language Thread? n

Image
word count: 36
User avatar
Thaldan
Approved Character
Posts: 55
Joined: Mon Nov 28, 2022 10:23 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Storyteller
Renown: 35
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)


Thread: [Southern Plain] Those Cows Won't Tip Themselves (Memory)
City/Area: The Imperial Regions
Skills Used: Storytelling (competent), Deception (Novice), Stealth (Untrained), Detection (Untrained), Discipline (untrained)

Knowledges:
Deception x3
Stealth x1
Detection x2

Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Yes - Ativan
Image
word count: 61
User avatar
Eternity
Approved Character
Posts: 300
Joined: Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:05 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: Mature tag for brief drug references. This thread mentions nameless flavor NPCs from this thread. I'm only including them in this series because Eternity was assigned a consequence saying that they would be looking for her.


Thread: Night on the town (part 1)
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills Used
Stealth: expert
Detection: expert
Cosmetology: competent
Mount: novice
Socialization: expert

Knowledge Claimed
Cosmetology: Making a braided bun
Cosmetology: applying blush on cheeks
Cosmetology x1
Mount x1
Detection x1
Socialization: Recognizing non-spoken cues in conversation


Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
 ! Message from: Winston
DONE
word count: 108
User avatar
Eternity
Approved Character
Posts: 300
Joined: Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:05 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: This is an adult forum thread. No smut, just suggestive talk and language. I felt like a mature tag wouldn't be enough and I'm just being safe rather than sorry.

This thread mentions nameless flavor NPCs from this thread. I'm only including them in this series because Eternity was assigned a consequence saying that they would be looking for her.


Thread: Night on the town (part 2)
City/Area: Adult Forum
Skills Used
Seduction: competent
Detection: expert
resistance: novice
Appraisal: novice
Combat Blades: Novice (Might not be the right combat style for darts but regardless she's going to be novice)
Socialization: expert

Knowledge Claimed
Seduction: Passionate kisses
Seduction: Pulling someone close
Seduction: Using a sexy tone of voice
Socialization: Carefully choosing your words
Appraisal: Judging value of silverware by examining its weight
Resistance: alcohol can make it hard to keep thoughts to yourself


Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
word count: 170
User avatar
Eternity
Approved Character
Posts: 300
Joined: Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:05 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: Mature tag for drug references.

This thread mentions nameless flavor NPCs from this thread. I'm only including them in this series because Eternity was assigned a consequence saying that they would be looking for her.


Thread: Night on the town (part 3)
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills Used
Larceny: Expert
Stealth: Expert
Socialization: Expert
Detection: Expert
Athletics: competent
Endurance: novice
Meditation: Competent

Knowledge Claimed
Athletics x1
Endurance x1
Socialization: telling your side of the story
Socialization: negotiating to pay through other means
Stealth: Avoid bumping into things that might make noise
Appraisal x1

Renown: 5 for being the center of all the commotion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
Last edited by Eternity on Fri Dec 16, 2022 2:02 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 126
User avatar
Eternity
Approved Character
Posts: 300
Joined: Wed Jul 13, 2022 1:05 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.3

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: This is an adult forum thread. There's implied rape, and drugs.

This is the first "big" job that I'm trying to pull off. If you feel like I ought to have other skills raised to do this sort of thing please let me know and I'll make sure to get those up.

This thread mentions nameless flavor NPCs from this thread. I'm only including them in this series because Eternity was assigned a consequence saying that they would be looking for her.


Thread: Night on the town (part 4)
City/Area: Adult Forum
Skills Used
Appraisal: novice
Larceny: Expert
Stealth: Expert
Socialization: Expert
Detection: Expert
Athletics: competent
Endurance: novice
Meditation: novice
Deception: novice
Strength: novice

Knowledge Claimed
Deception x1
Detection x1
Socialization: proposing a partnership
Appraisal x2
Strength: trying to lift a heavy statuette

Renown: 5 for helping the drug dealers and/or pulling off a theft
Wealth Points: Requesting 1 wp from the stolen coin. I've finished Eternity's wealth threads.
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
 ! Message from: Winston
Done!
Last edited by Eternity on Thu Dec 15, 2022 2:55 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 187
Locked Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Archive Review Request Threads”