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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: nope


Thread: Keyframe
City/Area: Almund

Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Notes/Warnings: I requested fewer knowledges on purpose. Devin uses the Tarouz ability "Birdtongue" in this thread. Devin's helpers are Flavor NPCs.

Thread: Smooglenuff Wine: Harvest Trial
City/Area: Faldrass Island

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Local Language Thread? no
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)


Thread: [Southern Plain] Storytelling and Entertaining
City/Area: The Imperial Regions
Skills used: Storytelling (competent), Athletics (Competent), Acting (Novice)

Requested Knowledges
Storytelling x3
Acting x3

Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Yes - Atovin
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Notes/Warnings: Grafting initiation, grisly, basically involves regurgitating meat and eating it and regurgitating again, ad nauseum. Consider yourself warned.


Thread: Expect Vampires: Recycle, Reuse, Regurgitate.
City/Area: Rharne
Skills Used: Singing (novice), Discipline (Expert), Teaching (Novice), Graft (Master), Meditation (Competent).

Knowledge requested:

Graft: The initaition ritual involves eating the regurgitated flesh of the mentor.
Graft: A hymn can be used as a meditative focus to maintain an apprentice's tempo as he undergoes the initiation.
Singing: The Chimera's Hymn.
Teaching: x 2
Meditation: x 1

Renown:Maybe for initiating his apprentice into a magic.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes,, full points please for Graft. Initiation is a intense process that wipes out the Mentor's ether reserves for a trial.
Local Language Thread? Yes Gernevoir.
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Re: Review Requests 2.3

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Notes/Warnings: Foul language and that's it.

This was a pretty staid affair, I have to admit. I tried to spice it up as best I could but it's really just a set up thread. Kas is going hunting again and this gets his affairs in order before he goes. Mister Pigs willing be modding with me on the next one, but this one is just the first step. Hope you enjoy regardless, got some good wetwork-n-rapscallionary behavior coming after!


Thread: Long is The Way, and Hard
City/Area: Rharne
Skills Used: Deception (Expert), Socialization (Expert), Leadership (Expert), Tactics (Master), Intelligence (Master), Discipline (Master)

Skill Knowledge:
Deception: The Best Liars Believe Their Own Lies
Intelligence: Favors and Secrets are the Best Currency
Leadership: Establishing a New Leader in Your Absence
Leadership: Being (mostly) Honest with Your Men
Tactics: Keeping the Security Detail Living Close to the Clients

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Timur: Contacts in the Shadow Quarter
NPC Timur: Alludes to Secret Passages in the Dubois Estate
NPC Timur: Using Kasoria to Cultivate Godwill with he Shadow Quarter
NPC Timur: Agreed to Initiate Kasoria into Sovereign
Rharne Lore - Shadow Quarter: The Underworld Kings of Rharne
Syroa: Dead Immortal
Syroa: Still Has Fanatics Across Idalos (including Rharne)

Renown: Nope
Wealth Points: Nah
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Nein
Local Language Thread? Non
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Thread: A season's Progress
City/Area: University of Scalvoris (Viden Academy)
Skills Used
Endurance Novice
Meditation: Competent
Discipline: Novice
Ensorcelling: Novice


Knowledge Claimed
Endurance x1
Meditation: Reflecting on the events of the trial
Discipline: avoid getting frustrated when doing monotonous tasks
Ensorcelling: The first step is ensorcelling is cleaning; the majority of wells are dirty when found.
Ensorcelling: Missing even a speck of dirt can lead to explosive disaster later on in processing.
Ensorcelling x1

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
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Notes/Warnings: I've tried to get writing knowledge before to little avail since I misunderstood what the writing skill actually entails. I'm hoping I'm actually doing it correctly this time. If not, I'm happy to just edit and resubmit.


Thread: Distracted Learning
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills Used
Storytelling Novice
Writing Novice
Combat (Blades): Novice
Strength: novice
Endurance: novice
Discipline: novice

Knowledge Claimed
Storytelling x1
Writing x2
Combat (Blades): Taking aim with an eye closed
Combat (Blades) x2

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: N
Magic Experience?: N
Local Language Thread? N
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Notes/Warnings: None.


Thread: Winston Miller and the Saucerer's Scone
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: 5-10? We have created something the settlement can use to better survive the winter, particularly the Tunawan residents who can suffer from the cold, which the aim of this thread is to fend off. We also share this finding openly WITH the settlement at the end, so are doing this all for the common good of the settlers of Sweetsong.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No

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Appearance

When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

Equipement

Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.
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